a broken rhyme is what i am looking for....
and what i mean by this is a rhymeing peice that involves pain, or suffering, or even something dark or disturbed.
rules:
- prewrites NOW ALLOWED!!!!
- none of that happy go luck shit!
- it must rhyme, not necessarily continuous rhyme, but somewhere in there.
- only one entry by each person.
- StIcKy CaPs ArE aLlOwEd.... I LIKE THEM
- dirty pretty excepted too
- swearing is fine, as long as you put some creativity in there too.
if you would like some advice or just have a question just IM me about it.
NOTE: the contest may change so be sure to check. eg: points etc.
good luck! and get writting
peace out
love HB
xoxoxo
and what i mean by this is a rhymeing peice that involves pain, or suffering, or even something dark or disturbed.
rules:
- prewrites NOW ALLOWED!!!!
- none of that happy go luck shit!
- it must rhyme, not necessarily continuous rhyme, but somewhere in there.
- only one entry by each person.
- StIcKy CaPs ArE aLlOwEd.... I LIKE THEM
- dirty pretty excepted too
- swearing is fine, as long as you put some creativity in there too.
if you would like some advice or just have a question just IM me about it.
NOTE: the contest may change so be sure to check. eg: points etc.
good luck! and get writting
peace out
love HB
xoxoxo
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on May 20, 2008
- Rewards: Gold: 400, Silver: 100, Bronze: 50, Honorable mention: 2 people
- Final notes: Congrats to all
Contest Winners
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Heart’s now full with careless curses
A journal with your trespasses...
by second-born 14 lines, 3 comments, on Mar 30 11:20 AM 2008. In Swap Quatrain, Thoughts, Pain
Gold trophy winner
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I'm still shaking, over a day later.
What? Did you think you could make me straighter?by Deadlydisaster9 14 lines, 2 comments, on Apr 4 6:33 PM 2008. In Rape, Personal, Abuse, Pain, My life, Teenage thinking
Bronze trophy winner
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I sit on my bed my knife in my hand
I want to escape to another land• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
Silver trophy winner
Honorable mention
Entries [34]
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my life is nothing
the pain is thereby S a r a h 4 5 61 lines, 10 comments, on Mar 27 7:11 AM 2008. In Sad• Commented on by judge. -
Death is the reason we live We live to dieby Eternal-Death 15 lines, 3 comments, on Mar 27 8:03 AM 2008• Commented on by judge.
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For every person I meet and grow to like.
I end up wasting their time
Breaking them slowly, killing them softly.by BeautifulDisaster9 33 lines, 1 comment, on Mar 28 12:38 AM 2008. In Depressed, Personal, Pain, My life, Angst, Teen issues, Teenage thinking• Commented on by judge. -
Bathe me in holy waterby Lady Nightshade 38 lines, 10 comments, on Mar 28 5:16 PM 2008. In Lyrics, Dark, Contemporary, Love, Pain, Thoughts• Commented on by judge.
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man i really got a raw deal sometimes i just wanna swallow all my moms pills• Commented on by judge.
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Night. A night hushed by the advent of awaited twilight.
Branches of tangled fears tapped softly, begging to enter tonight.by Funeral Ballerina 18 lines, 2 comments, on Apr 1 4:48 AM 2008. In Abuse, Abstract, Sadness, Claustrophobia• Viewed by judge. -
The unforgiving torment is never gonna end,
What's the point of living if all they do is pretend?by My Selfish Romance 14 lines, 7 comments, on Sep 30 5:00 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
And she hides her arm
Like the feelings that do harm
by xxbrokenxagainxx 94 lines, 10 comments, on Mar 27 5:50 PM 2008. In Pain, Sad, My life, Depression, Sadness, Friendship, Emo• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
She sits there in the corner tears rolling down her face,
Wondering if she'll ever get out and leave this place.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I'm bruised now You told me to bowby Short but cute 13 lines, 2 comments, on Apr 23 1:01 PM 2008• Commented on by judge.
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There is pure evil inside a crazy mind,by Poetess12 28 lines, 3 comments, on Apr 17 11:49 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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A boy was once born, but under a curse
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This cold steel Tastes like caramel• Viewed by judge.
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Today I finally surrender to despair
In the dark I've cried for so long,by Selene Tremere 23 lines, 10 comments, on Nov 8 4:07 PM 2007. In Love, Pain, Personal, Sad, Thoughts, Weird, My own style, Lost in thought, My• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
4 pm eastern time, lets see if unhappyness has the abillity to rhyme. I start to bleed ass i cut my major blood vain, strangly i feel no painby hollabaug 14 lines, on Apr 23 6:11 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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I fear to slip in the dreamscapes of night of a nightmare of a dying heartby Luciferian Aeon 67 lines, 13 comments, on Sep 21 2:17 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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She sat there with the knife that night
Doing the only thing she felt right• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Raven's soi-disant greedily hunt prey
of night's surreal torment hung upside down• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
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It stings to see the way you look at me
Just before you make your move
Dodgeing my apolgies agian inside this hollow room• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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I'll try to write something later on. I'd love to but I've been so busy with tests and assignments
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hey whats going on with judging?
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