Teenage life to me is a mess. It can be absolutely awful, and very painful. See me, well I have so many plans for my future but I cannot carry any of them out until after college. I have found my true love but we are limited to what we can do because of age's cruel boundries. My dad is anal about clean and gets to be awful. I feel trapped, in a cage. Like the walls on my doors are prison. (hes yelling already..GOD) Anyway, please write for any of the following options.
1.) Being a teen caught of in age, having to follow orders, all that crap. Basically, being a teen under your parents rule (and dealing with society as a teen)
2.) A parent who is dealing with a teen, Let me see your side. I'd really like to know.
3.) A teen who just moved out, either in college or in their own house
Rules:
*make these good please, NO CRAP
*please ryhme them
*nothing too long please, i am not a fan of long poetry
*have fun and be honest
thank you and goodluck...
i will comment all entries
1.) Being a teen caught of in age, having to follow orders, all that crap. Basically, being a teen under your parents rule (and dealing with society as a teen)
2.) A parent who is dealing with a teen, Let me see your side. I'd really like to know.
3.) A teen who just moved out, either in college or in their own house
Rules:
*make these good please, NO CRAP
*please ryhme them
*nothing too long please, i am not a fan of long poetry
*have fun and be honest
thank you and goodluck...
i will comment all entries
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on April 21, 2008
- Rewards: Gold: 500, Silver: 300, Bronze: 150
- Final notes: Excellent and heartfel writes throughout this contest. Beautiful. All of you are excellent writes and I thank you for your personal thoughts and experiences. Excellent job guys! And congrats to our winners!
Contest Winners
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age is only a number
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Gold trophy winner
Silver trophy winner
Bronze trophy winner
Entries [15]
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These boundries are imaginary To me they do not exist,• Commented on by judge.
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Do not speak / of what you don't know. / Keep your mouth shut, / and tongue under control. / The things you know / are dull and bland. / Don't try to learn, / you can't understand. / The depths of the mind• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I always feel like a bird in a cage
and I can see the skyby DaughterxXxofxXxNyx 26 lines, 2 comments, on Mar 26 8:29 PM 2008. In Teen issues, Teenage thinking, Escape, Family, Longing, My life• Commented on by judge. -
by my1lovewearsdiapers 50 lines, 3 comments, on Feb 29 2:20 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Either I care to much or to little
It doesn’t matter about whatby Raging Chaos 22 lines, 9 comments, on Feb 19 11:06 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I'm sorry. I'm sorry I'm not perfect.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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OK I wrote this last night and it needs help.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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33 Lines of Her Storyby Mr.Stratocaster 41 lines, 8 comments, on Apr 7 5:55 PM 2008. In Pain, society, depression, murder, death, letting go, sadness• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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My mum starts to yell at me when i get home, ill yell right back at her.by xXxTrojan-ManxXx 18 lines, 5 comments, on Jan 17 9:36 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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All of them lost in their own special way, many didn't know it yet Everyone seeking for something to cling toby James Ether 18 lines, 3 comments, on Mar 24 11:15 PM 2008. In Thoughts• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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My Life Sucks.
But not enough for anyone to care• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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