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The love of your life...

(The picture can be inspiration if you want, but it doesn't have to be...it's just there for fun.
And here's the picture URL: http://ladybirdm.deviantart.com/art/Love-35009942 )

Ok, this is my second contest, and I'm using up the points I just won from 2 other contests on this one.
So, for this contest, I'd like your inspiration to come from the person that you love. Unquestionable love. And I mean serious love, not some random infatuation with a person that passes in like, a few weeks or something. Make it serious love. They don't have to love you back or anything; it just needs to be about the person you love.
The poem could be about how you lost them, how they love you back, how you could never be together, anything to do with them. But they have to be your inspiration.
Rules:
1. NO erotica or anything adult; I'm thirteen!
2. Keep the cursing to a minimum. (I don't know how often it would come up in a contest about love, but whatever)
3. No sticky caps; they bother me deeply. lol
4. No bashing anyone else's poems.
5. Try to keep the suidcidal/cut-myself/I-hate-the-world stuff to a minimum, also. I mean, being very depressed and angry, fine, but nothing...creepy...

I think that's it...hmm...well I'll be adding points as we go along...maybe. It depends on whether or not I think I should give out HMs...so yeah...
Good luck and have fun!!!
Ok, I just added NINE HMs...you should be happy!! lol But I think this contest deserves them...I don't think I've ever seen 9 HMs been given out before, though...well, if it's never happened, then I'm glad to be the first! Great writes in this contest...it really is very hard to judge!!

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on March 24, 2008
  • Rewards: Gold: 400, Silver: 250, Bronze: 100, Honorable mention: 9 people
  • Final notes:
    Hey people! Wow, I'm glad I held this contest! It was awesome to read all this insanely good poetry. Thanks to everyone who entered, by the way. Well, it was VERY hard to judge, but I did have a select few that I liked, and the rest I just hated to leave out. Awesome job, all of you! Use my points wisely! lol Just kidding.

Contest Winners

  1. Sweet, Painful Memories
    Ever with me
    Yet never there...
    by Mom of Blondes 38 lines, 23 comments, on Mar 9 8:54 PM 2008. In Life, Love, Pain, Personal, Thoughts, Contest
    Gold trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  2. Error: Unable to find finalist item 4044393, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  3. To love a soldier
    A soldier is told that he must leave
    No time to waste asking why
    by krymsin kyss 61 lines, 8 comments, on Aug 26 11:14 PM 2007. In Love, Personal, Sad
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  4. To my wife
    My love is like a freshly cut rose, / just starting to blossom with every beat of our hearts / My love is like a river, flowing deeply, / freely along the river banks out towards the sea / My love is like a
    by kooleyes 24 lines, 25 comments, on Jul 17 6:32 PM 2007. In love, feelings
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  5. [ Sorry i love you ]
    Sorry i love you
    wanting you
    by luna-midnight 29 lines, 8 comments, on Feb 14 9:22 PM 2008
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  6. My Northern Star
    I gaze into your eyes and know you really care.
    That, for me, you’ll always be there.
    by Jack22 18 lines, 3 comments, on Mar 20 10:37 AM 2008
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  7. Flowers' Fading Truth
    by camus 30 lines, 98 comments, on Jan 28 4:24 PM 2008. In Love, Hope
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  8. Magic Garden
    In a magic garden
    She wore a summer dress
    by bluecollarlove 23 lines, 28 comments, on Feb 9 10:30 AM 2007
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  9. Eyes for Marriage
    As i gaze into your eyes i can see a sparkling shine,
    dancing to the melody of a love songs chime.
    by pappacass 30 lines, 27 comments, on Jan 2 4:02 PM 2008. In Love, Romance
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  10. My Damn Rose
    My Damn Rose / I deafen me against your call / I close my mind to thoughts of you / I dam your all but still your spell / will manage to
    by billpoet 27 lines, 211 comments, on Jun 10 2:14 PM 2007. In I have no hope to cast aside
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  11. Sweetly Flows the Night.
    by Bazza 27 lines, 16 comments, on Feb 10 9:03 PM 2008
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  12. I Can't Breathe
    How can a heart hurt so much? How can a soul feel so desolate?
    by My Souls Reflection 18 lines, 5 comments, on Mar 23 5:12 AM 2008. In Personal, Lost love, Depression, Sadness
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  13. Fresh Start
    I dont know why I still hang around.
    by Leech Lover 40 lines, 2 comments, on Mar 22 10:22 PM 2008. In Personal, Life, Love
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  14. I Stay
    Standing in the bathroom mirror / you asked the reason why I stay / I couldn't find the words then / but I have them now.... / I stay because you're my soft place / to fall when the world seems to be / cavi
    by Sailorswench 24 lines, 4 comments, on Jul 5 3:59 PM 2007. In Freewrite, Love, Personal, Dedication
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  15. Cold Hands
    Looking for closer,
    An out,
    by kristina85 13 lines, 2 comments, on Mar 23 10:55 PM 2008
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  16. Forever a Memory
    I can see you so perfectly in my mind.
    br
    by asimplepoeticmind 16 lines, 8 comments, on Nov 29 7:20 PM 2006. In Hope, Love, Sad
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]

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  • ForeverLastingComa
    March 23, 2008
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    o i think i kno wat i did..lolz..i had added no distance 2 fat 1st n then i added i miss you..cuz i thought it would have alowed more than 1 entry..but it didnt so i switched bak but i think i'll stik 2 putting no distance 2 far in the contest instead..which do u think is beter 2 put..i miss you or no distance 2 far..i think no distance 2 far cuz its sumthing i writtin more recently but i dont kno..am sorry 4 the confusion =/


    • jbbrandi
      March 23, 2008
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      I am so un-confuzzled now! Wow, it all makes sense. Yeah, enter which ever one, and you can ignore that message I just sent. I didn't know the poems were both by you, so I was flipping out. lol Well, anyway, thanks for entering!