hey there people! so i killed my computer a while back and wasnt able to get on for a long time! let me tell you i reallly really missed it here! anyway on with the contest!
rules: 1.not much cussing, it truly can reck a poem
2.please attempt to comment on someone elses poem(no mine!). this is not nessicary but will make me smile! and come on who wants to be the one to piss the judge off?
3.have fun!
recomended options:
*i believe in the hippie life style, write something about this good or negative. you'll win points with me if you write a negative poem and can convince me your right
*love friends, family, or soulmates
* getting over depression/ stop cutting
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you do not have to do a recomended option
if you chose not to just submit anything!
HINT!!!!!!
I LOVE rhyming poems!
rules: 1.not much cussing, it truly can reck a poem
2.please attempt to comment on someone elses poem(no mine!). this is not nessicary but will make me smile! and come on who wants to be the one to piss the judge off?
3.have fun!
recomended options:
*i believe in the hippie life style, write something about this good or negative. you'll win points with me if you write a negative poem and can convince me your right
*love friends, family, or soulmates
* getting over depression/ stop cutting
*
you do not have to do a recomended option
if you chose not to just submit anything!
HINT!!!!!!
I LOVE rhyming poems!
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on April 10, 2008
- Rewards: Gold: 300
- Final notes: ok so this was deff the best contest i've ever had!!! thankyou everyone for entering and i'll have anohter one of soon!
love you all!
Contest Winners
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Lies the children of despair
Down the hidden road• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
"You ask me if I want to score?
I tell you, man, I'm up to here -• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
"There may be quite a problem here"
St. Peter said befuddled• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
Gold trophy winner
Silver trophy winner
Bronze trophy winner
Entries [56]
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She used to sit on the comforting chair,
in autumn, under the treeby Peachy 26 lines, 12 comments, on Mar 13 11:51 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
its the battle of love / the war against guys / the fight on heartbreaks and cries / the rebels against staying up late / remembering the sweet first date / the haters of the fake romance / facaded to get ins• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Detox
Sleep is to seizure• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
For my grandfather a P.O.W a war vet but most of all a child's hero and to that child an adults I wish
I could see his smiling face once• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I think that Valentine's Day is both great (if you have someone) and miserable (if you're single).by C.I.M.A Punk 28 lines, 4 comments, on Feb 13 2:52 PM 2008. In Love, Sad, Valentine's Day, Lost love• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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by Olivias Violin 23 lines, 4 comments, on Mar 21 9:00 AM 2008. In Contest• Commented on by judge.
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Oh God
I am absolutely bewildered by youby PrabhuDayal Khattar 16 lines, 10 comments, on Feb 25 9:04 AM 2008. In Spiritual, Thoughts, Life, Nature
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as God as are leader,
we must walk in faith,by serenity silvermoon 16 lines, 5 comments, on Mar 22 11:36 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Mediterrenean nights drunk upon Spanish words,
I touch a face with the plea of the limbless;• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
by InfiniteCaitlin 27 lines, 4 comments, on Mar 16 11:37 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Space was lost in darkness before words give birth to light.
And spoke of a universal creation, before stars were viewed by sight.by Forgotten truth 26 lines, 33 comments, on Feb 6 7:49 AM 2006. In Personal• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
ratatat-tat, two ratty-soled shoes
tap to a tight track. a drumby XscissorhandsX 13 lines, 3 comments, on Mar 6 6:36 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I knew when you left, / Things would change, / It's the way of my life, / Nothing good stays / So I stay in my shell, / My little place toby Condemd RyeZing 34 lines, 9 comments, on Jul 30 11:28 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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God will protect his people
from an evil that is known,by Poetess12 13 lines, 1 comment, on Mar 25 3:36 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Lost my mind, back in Bedlem Lost my heart, long ago to you• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Remember the good times,
For they are now through.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I look out to the ocean, and there I see, A boat out there, just waiting for me.by swimmeroks 8 lines, 2 comments, on Oct 25 4:05 PM 2007. In Hope• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Words can not describe the passion lying in my heartby Midgetbridgey 21 lines, 4 comments, on Mar 31 9:42 PM 2008• Commented on by judge.
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I'm without him for awhile
everything's Caving inby Hearts.That.Bleed 28 lines, 2 comments, on Apr 1 10:46 AM 2008. In Personal, Love, Thoughts, Pain, Friendship, Sadness, Teen issues• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
As i sit and listen Her voice comes to mind...by JOSHv3 54 lines, 5 comments, on Apr 1 1:14 PM 2008• Commented on by judge.
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I remember meeting Duff, outside
Her house on irwell, with a cigarette• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
it's so quiet where has it all goneby KeeperOfTheNight 41 lines, 4 comments, on Feb 17 1:31 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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OK I wrote this last night and it needs help.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Hundreds of bodies create one Beast1 with scales of black and gold and blue,2by BaalHammon 95 lines, 7 comments, on Apr 2 10:02 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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by sixtimesseven 20 lines, 19 comments, on Mar 28 12:52 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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the human body. it bends; it breaks; it bleeds.• Commented on by judge.
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Skin of ivory fall
Alluring angel of heaven's call• Commented on by judge. -
I sit on my bed my knife in my hand
I want to escape to another land• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
In distant shaddows the echo's whisperby mickyhamps 14 lines, 1 comment, on Apr 3 7:42 AM 2008• Commented on by judge.
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A quick, painful, glance
And I’ve gone and forgotten my way• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
blooming daffodils amid the emerald sea make us giddy as rabbits sail through the waves• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Such a long time spent with no-one so close
To voice my deepest fears• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Give me a rose my love,
Give me a rose today,by grapefruite 13 lines, 5 comments, on Apr 1 12:10 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Silver moonlight reflecting off the streets pavedby sergei nabokov 34 lines, 2 comments, on Mar 24 12:42 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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There's a hidden feeling inside me
Its bottled up and it wants to be freeby brightsmylesxx 76 lines, 12 comments, on Mar 30 12:24 PM 2008. In Hope, Spiritual, My own style, Lost in thought, My life, Longing, Inspirational, Self• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
So close yet so far, My love, My life, My shining star.by XxshadowedcherryxX 22 lines, 3 comments, on Apr 3 11:22 PM 2008• Commented on by judge.
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All was green
The earth was new• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
It's been too long, I've missed you,by mystikal-mayhem 33 lines, 2 comments, on Feb 26 11:41 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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such a lovely contest!!!
Hope that you enjoy judging! I surely enjoyed many of these entries.
You have a good one here!!!
Becks
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