The Hard Truth about Life

I want something sad...Something that shows deep deep pain. Like the type of pain that feels like its going to kill you even though you wake up day after day.
Like loosing a close friend of family member or loved one.
Or
Finding out you've been cheated on
Or
Being abused
Just that deep pain that eats at you. I want that. Now of the "I'll cut my wrist and slowly die" crap. I want the hard cold truth. How it eats at you. Make me understand your pain. Make me FEEL it. Impress me.

Contest is Over

Contest was judged on April 22, 2008
Rewards: Gold: 300
Final notes:
Defining Fear-Gold
This was amazing poem. It made me picture there pain as i read. Good job.
Shadows-Silver
I liked it very much. you did a great job on it although i found a couple mistakes.

Good job to all that entered. I had a very had time choosing. Thank you.

Contest Winners

Shadows

Hold my hand, and watch me die, wondering why.

by Dragonbabyx3 73 lines, 1 comment, on Mar 20 10:09 PM 2008
Gold trophy winner

• Commented on by judge. [remove]
Defining Fear

Split lips,
broken bones,

by Mozarts funeral 27 lines, 2 comments, on Mar 20 11:15 PM 2008
Silver trophy winner

• Commented on by judge. [remove]
Your Presence is Toxic

by pdigiddy 86 lines, 7 comments, on Mar 20 10:46 PM 2008. In Abuse, Adult, Angst, Contest, Dark, Personal, Sad, Pain
Bronze trophy winner

• Commented on by judge. [remove]

Entries [15]

1 - 15 of 15

This Pain

This pain I feel is killing me
And it's tearing up my soul.

by Crazy9Piano8Freak 38 lines, 6 comments, on Mar 21 12:52 PM 2008. In Life, Love, Other, Pain, Personal, Sad, Thoughts

• Commented on by judge.
Marital Pain

I felt the pain and misery
you brought into my life,

by Poetess12 28 lines, 3 comments, on Mar 21 9:59 AM 2008

• Commented on by judge.
failure

A boy sits in his room
music turned up

by bloodtorntragedy 52 lines, 3 comments, on Mar 20 11:19 PM 2008. In Pain

• Commented on by judge.
The Real Me

Every morning I wake up
And everything isn’t okay

by Jack22 45 lines, 5 comments, on Mar 20 10:33 PM 2008

• Commented on by judge.
Taking a Life Not Mine

by Darkend 44 lines, 1 comment, on Mar 20 10:34 PM 2008. In Adult, Angst, Pain, Personal, Sad, Society

• Commented on by judge.
Never Said

It was supposed to be beautiful
But I only see bruises

by hey charlie 19 lines, 3 comments, on Mar 20 10:57 PM 2008. In Angst, Contest, Dark, Life, Pain, Personal, Sad

• Commented on by judge.
(Untitled)

Everlasting loneliness Never-ending despair

by Jack22 20 lines, 2 comments, on Mar 20 10:35 PM 2008

• Commented on by judge.
Why?

by Stickboy 22 lines, 12 comments, on Mar 25 11:53 PM 2008. In Sad, thoughts, pain, life, noguest

• Commented on by judge.
Teardrops of Truth

Bottled emotions, the fear of alone.

by tallhearted 22 lines, 2 comments, on Mar 28 4:28 AM 2008. In Lost love, Personal, Pain, Sad

• Commented on by judge.
Who?

I am not the soldier in red and black
Or the one that wears a rucksack.

by Carefuldelusion 58 lines, 1 comment, on Mar 28 8:27 PM 2008

• Commented on by judge.
Bleeding Eyes

How do you hide inexplicable cries
When the darkest of secrets bleeds through your eyes?

by serene green 43 lines, 1 comment, on Mar 24 2:21 AM 2008. In abuse, pain, sad

• Commented on by judge.
The Emptiness of a Forced Smile

I do not know which is worse to me,
To have or to have not,

by whatamanycando 56 lines, 2 comments, on Mar 30 2:00 AM 2008. In Thoughts

• Commented on by judge. Prewrite

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JustAnOrdinaryGirl
April 3, 2008
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Sorry for the delay but its not allowing me to enter. It shall be fixed soon.