I want your heart. I want the love that you want to give that someone doesn't want to take from you. I want to feel the emotion from deep within your being that says "LOVE ME, I DESERVE IT" I want to feel your pain, your struggle, your emotional turmoil as you ache for this other person. I want to know how you feel without them in your life, and better yet how they complete you and enrich your life for the better.
Get to writing. I want part of your soul.
Get to writing. I want part of your soul.
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on March 20, 2008
- Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 200, Bronze: 100, Honorable mention: 2 people
- Final notes: These were great. You guys are awesome and I am pleased with the quality of the stuff you submitted. Some made me laugh, some made me cry, some made me want to kick ass with you. Thanks for giving me what I asked for. Here are your winners. They deserve to be read and commented by everyone. Peace out!
Contest Winners
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You said, "I love you" I said, "God, don't be lieing to me"• Commented on by judge. [remove]
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You like someone else.
So I’m nothing to you.by TheRemainder 20 lines, 4 comments, on Feb 15 6:03 PM 2008. In Love, Sad, Personal.
Honorable mention
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Gold trophy winner
Bronze trophy winner
Entries [19]
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My heart was once like any other• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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The TV goes on, but I don't listen.by DancingRain1692 21 lines, 8 comments, on Jan 29 7:57 PM 2008. In Thoughts• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Something as simple as me hearing your name, Put words in my head that I cant explain.• Commented on by judge.
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Last night you made me question if you really care you just left me sitting thereby thatrockertim 19 lines, 6 comments, on Mar 8 1:04 PM 2008. In confused• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Passed the stage of hello and the shaky first kiss.by Jack22 18 lines, 2 comments, on Mar 12 11:35 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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by Clinging-to-Life 14 lines, 6 comments, on Dec 2 6:43 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Can you hear me? I can hear youby eleni 20 lines, 2 comments, on Mar 20 3:39 AM 2008• Commented on by judge.
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wow - thank you for the silver
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Thank you for the honor of the gold. Congratulations to all the winners.
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