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The Magic of THREE! Stealing the third line from your own poems to build a new poem!

lol I cannot resist doing this because the poems you fashion will be so much FUN to read!

Directions:

Go to the third poem in your collection and take the third line. That will be the title of this new poem you are building. I am referring to the third most recent poem.

Now go to the next poem after that poem and take the third line. That will be the first line of the new poem.

Go to the third line of a total of 16 poems for the body of your poem.

SEE? Your poem will be 16 lines long, with a title, all lines taken from your own poems... the third lines.

Rules:

No erotica or shocking language.

YAY!! Go for it and have fun! Your poems will be amazing! I will love reading them. Comments and full applause for everyone.

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on March 16, 2008
  • Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 200, Bronze: 100
  • Final notes:
    Every poem in this contest delighted me because your lines... however they were placed... are magnificent and truly identify you all as fine poets. What fun I had reading your entries!
  • To judge this contest, you need to have at least as many finalists as you have rewards. You have 3 awards but only 2 finalists.

Contest Winners

  1. The blood has changed the Sea, No way to move,
    by Dragonbabyx3 15 lines, 1 comment, on Mar 16 5:43 PM 2008. In Contest, Other, Thoughts, Weird
    Gold trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  2. that will recover your heart. your smell fading in the wind
    by doyouloveit 17 lines, 7 comments, on Mar 16 5:19 PM 2008
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]

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  • marlene47 silver member
    March 16, 2008
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    Interesting how it makes its own meaning juxtaposing random lines.
    The power of words taken out of context.
    Marlene


    • Melodies
      March 16, 2008
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      Aye...

      'Tis true that these poems take on a life of their own with hidden fortunes found therein.


  • Dewshine gold member
    March 16, 2008
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    Uhm... when you have the title and the first line in the new poem... do you then continue taking the next most resent poem, or can you jump over some? Move them around a bit?

    • Melodies
      March 16, 2008
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      The poems should be taken exactly as they come because that is the way the randomness happens and is the most fun.


  • ixtli
    March 16, 2008
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    Do the lines need to be in order?


    • ixtli
      March 16, 2008
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      Oops. That question was already asked. Nevermind.


    • Melodies
      March 16, 2008
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      Yes, the poems must be in order for the weirdness to happen.


  • Sanguinarius
    March 16, 2008
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    I missed this one
    here was mine ****
    Standing alone under amber skies

    Slipping through space like a misty cloud
    crumbling beneath the weight of time.
    You dug my heart out of a muddy grave,
    such sharp contrast to your surroundings,
    While grey clouds weep upon the ground
    and dead end signs.

    Your moorland and meadows in shades of green
    I have stood here on this land, over the ages.
    From time lost ,
    Best left forgotten, else it devours ones soul , warps the mind,
    Gently flowing, always moving
    and you, completely unaware.

    Ink scrolled upon a page
    only brings on such a deep sinking feeling of despair,
    crying out, yet silent
    Do they feel its agony?


  • Lady Altheia
    March 16, 2008
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    Awww, I missed this one. It must have filled up fast.

  • imahealer
    March 16, 2008
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    I mised this fun. That's all I have to say!


  • dustookie2
    March 16, 2008
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    Thank you for hosting this was a fun contest.
    Congratulations to the winners.

  • marlene47 silver member
    March 17, 2008
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    What a fun and interesting contest this was. With all their "hidden fortunes" the poems held together and made amazing impressions. Thank you for the bronze and your complementary comments.
    Marlene

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