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I saw eternity in your eyes....

Okay warning before the contest.
I'm 16
I'm a harsh judge
I'm not saying I am a better poet than you
but I have HIGH expectations for other poets.
If you think that I don't have the "write" to criticize your work, criticize mine by all means.


this is my contest.
I can do whatever
So you've been warned


with that out of the way
here are the rules


1. No rhyme
2. no weird typing
3. No bullcrap poems
meaning, If it didn't fall out of your soul with all your heart behind every word so that each syllable hits me in the face so hard I cry...DON'T ENTER IT.


Kay here is what I want...


Give me Buddhism poems

or

give me growing up poems

or

give me pain

or

give me your soul on a platter


One of those thanks

or
you can enter something else if it is absolute gold melted into a poem and id rip out my soul and use it as a sponge to soak up the greatness. that's the only way to enter something except for the above.


So now here's some helpful hints.
*I love prose
*I love Imagery
*My favorite word in the world is "Infinite"
*It's my favorite theme too
*I hate pitty poems
*and I hate self hurt poems
unless it is presented to me so beautifully, and tragically I don't even know it is self hurt.



UPDATE **Just because my favorite word is infinite doesnt mean you have to have it to win. If it doesnt fit, dont force it in there. Id rather it not be in there than force it.

UPDATE AGAIN*** You can eneter more than one. Eat your heart out, but DAMN it.. it better be good.

GO.

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on April 11
  • Rewards: Gold: 1000, Silver: 500, Bronze: 250, Honorable mention: 1 people
  • Final notes:
    Ok.... This was really dissappointing.I got a whole lot of meteocre poems. I got alot of attmpts at heart felt, and I got alot of inexpierience. But the few good poems I got. they were AMAZING. They did exactly what I asked for and had that raw emotion that hit me in the face with each syllable just like I asked. So Mywinners are brillant and you should deffinitly check them out.

    Gold- Fuse With Me
    This poem was Gold. Melted gold. I loved it and felt it and it is just that simple.

    Silver- Credit to street.
    this poem was so raw, and was bleedingwith emotion. The images were stunning.

    Bronze- autism
    thi

Contest Winners

  1. Fuse with me
    The firing squad of fingers
    beating against my heart;
    by Gl1tt3rn1nj4 26 lines, 4 comments, on Apr 4 11:08 AM. In personal
    Gold trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  2. credit to street
    "
    ;
    by thepoeticone 35 lines, 5 comments, on Mar 25 3:05 PM. In personl, life, contest, thoughts
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  3. autism.
    by aanika-xox 82 lines, 16 comments, on Mar 16 8:25 PM
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  4. A Silver Morning
    A silver morning drenched in dew We lay there on the grassy plains
    by Irial 39 lines, 2 comments, on Mar 17 10:51 PM. In Fantasy, Hope, Love, Inspirational, Escape
    Honorable winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]

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  • love tank x
    March 16
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    bookmarked. i love you! <3

  • Demington
    March 17
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    A very interesting contest. Your intro is a bit fiery, but not in a bad way. Your passion for this sort of thing is impressive.

    Best of luck to you!

  • Pretty Britty gold member
    April 7
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    You haven't read mine yet =/

    /sad

    lol