Ok it's my first contest and I want to see what all you guys can do...you enter as many times as you like... I don't care what form, but please note that I want to be able to feel the emotion behind them...acrostics....if you can but emotion behind them ok...but I'm not their biggest fan...If you get what I mean....
Some of my favorite poems are:
Nathan and Kyle...I have placed ya'll on the cojudge list...therefore you can not enter...if you would like to enter tell me and I will remove you as a cojudge...but if that be the case do not enter either of the following, unfair advantage....
1)'Dear Sergant' by Nathan Harrington, A.K.A. I Love Ashtyn
2)'Between Soilders and Pirates' by Kyle Key A.K.A. Griever Saint.
For some more ideas of what I like check out my poems...the really short ones that were entered in quickie contests I am not a fan of unless it's for a quickie contest...which please note this is not...
Now I know you all hate this part...but I do have a few rules...I'll make it short
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1. PlEaSe Do NoT WrItE lIkE tHiS...any poem typed in part or in whole like that will be DQ, sorry, but I have eye issues and that messes with them,
2.There is no limit as to how many time you can enter, but remeber this is a privilage, and I can take it away...I am a full time student with all advanded classes and dail up so time is a valueable thing for me...so please use common sense...I can't read every poem you've ever written, sorry...I just can't.
3. Spelling...although My spelling here is very bad it's because of the dail up thing I can't use the spell checker on this window...please spell check if at all possible...miss spelling takes away from the writing.
4.ALL CAPS...if the whole, or major part of your poem is in all caps then it will be DQ...one or two lines is ok...to make them stand out more...but be sensable...eye issues (refer to rule 1)
5.Please label poems correctly, we do have young viewers...
6.Please note that you can only win gold, sivler, bronze or HM...not more than one...yes even for different poems...it's not fair to others if someone enters 3 or 4 fantastic poems [fantastic is only if it brings me to tears...(a very hard thing to do) or so happy that nothing can upset me (almost impossible...and when it does happen its only temporary)] then no one else stands a chance...note that I will comment on all of them if this should happen and rate them in order from 1st on through against one another.
7.(although this should be moved up to number one) please respect me and my co judges, remember we are the ones in charge of the points and the tropies...if this makes me a ***** then I am sorry, but i do not deal with disrespect well, I am not a mean person, generally, but if your poem sucks I am going to tell you...and if that causes you to give my comment a bad rating oh well...and if it causes you to pull out of the contest...oh well...I'm sorry but I speak my mind
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1. I will comment on my winners...promise....other's...I will comment if/when I have/find time to do so....
2. Please do not ask me if I have viewed your poem yet, the contest page will up date if I have or not
3. Points will go up as soon as I get my results in from the contests I have entered, or get more points some other way...becaues all I have at the moment is 310.....300 for gold and 5 for each silver and bronze
4. HM's depend on my points at the time of judging
5. please note that I do reserve the right to end the contest early...as long as I am getting entries it will stay open...for a max of two months
6. The winners and other who I think deserve an HM (deserve is for if I don't have enough points to award all enough HM's...) will be added to my favorites...
Well I think that cover's everything...but I have a feeling that I forgot something....oh well...if I did and I remeber it I will add it, it will not apply to anyone who entered before I put up the notice...Please remeber I do check dates....
Good Luck To All 
UPDATE 03/13/08
Nathan I have removed you as a cojudge you are free to enter....if you can enter something new but that is not required.... I have added all the points I have gotten to the bronze and the silver once silver reaches 200 and bronze has reached 100 I will start adding HM...HM will only be 30 points apeice...sorry but they will not go up give more people a chance of winning...
With as many enties has I am getting I had to add a limit it's at 1000 I don't expect it to reach that but hey ya'll may prove me wrong....
Also here is the scoring I'm going by The most you can get is 30 pts.
Attention grabbing Title...........10pts
Wow Factor.........................10pts
Flow...............................5pts
Reading Ease.......................5pts
you'll note that flow and reading ease are only 5 pts apeice... this is because poetry isn't about format in whole it's about getting your feelings out (or it is to me at least)
To get into the finalists you have to score 15pts at least and from there the people with the highest scores for each of my trophies will win....
On my finalists I will comment with your score (see above) to the people I have already commented I will comment again with your score so that you know if you got in to the finalists or not and how you are doing...
Oh and I hold the right to extend the length of this contest untill I stop getting enteries, and at that point I will let the contest stop at whatever date is set as the end date with out change....
That is all for now....
Good Luck all
Hey updates again
Ok...so the entries are going up everytime I login, and because It's spring break, and I can't use the school's high speed to judge for the nest week I had to lower the limit on the number poems that can be entered to 200 total...also...my judging system...(see last update)...well it's not working out very well, cause everyone is ending up with enough to get into the finalists...needless to say that is no help at all,...wo I changing it back to the ones that stand out in my mind the most....the ones I sit and think about between tv shows...and that kind of thing...the hauntingly good ones...(note: haunting for me is good)
I'm soo sorry that I keep changing my mind,
But...
Good luck all
Some of my favorite poems are:
Nathan and Kyle...I have placed ya'll on the cojudge list...therefore you can not enter...if you would like to enter tell me and I will remove you as a cojudge...but if that be the case do not enter either of the following, unfair advantage....
1)'Dear Sergant' by Nathan Harrington, A.K.A. I Love Ashtyn
2)'Between Soilders and Pirates' by Kyle Key A.K.A. Griever Saint.
For some more ideas of what I like check out my poems...the really short ones that were entered in quickie contests I am not a fan of unless it's for a quickie contest...which please note this is not...
Now I know you all hate this part...but I do have a few rules...I'll make it short
.:Rules:.
1. PlEaSe Do NoT WrItE lIkE tHiS...any poem typed in part or in whole like that will be DQ, sorry, but I have eye issues and that messes with them,
2.There is no limit as to how many time you can enter, but remeber this is a privilage, and I can take it away...I am a full time student with all advanded classes and dail up so time is a valueable thing for me...so please use common sense...I can't read every poem you've ever written, sorry...I just can't.
3. Spelling...although My spelling here is very bad it's because of the dail up thing I can't use the spell checker on this window...please spell check if at all possible...miss spelling takes away from the writing.
4.ALL CAPS...if the whole, or major part of your poem is in all caps then it will be DQ...one or two lines is ok...to make them stand out more...but be sensable...eye issues (refer to rule 1)
5.Please label poems correctly, we do have young viewers...
6.Please note that you can only win gold, sivler, bronze or HM...not more than one...yes even for different poems...it's not fair to others if someone enters 3 or 4 fantastic poems [fantastic is only if it brings me to tears...(a very hard thing to do) or so happy that nothing can upset me (almost impossible...and when it does happen its only temporary)] then no one else stands a chance...note that I will comment on all of them if this should happen and rate them in order from 1st on through against one another.
7.(although this should be moved up to number one) please respect me and my co judges, remember we are the ones in charge of the points and the tropies...if this makes me a ***** then I am sorry, but i do not deal with disrespect well, I am not a mean person, generally, but if your poem sucks I am going to tell you...and if that causes you to give my comment a bad rating oh well...and if it causes you to pull out of the contest...oh well...I'm sorry but I speak my mind
.: Other Info :.
1. I will comment on my winners...promise....other's...I will comment if/when I have/find time to do so....
2. Please do not ask me if I have viewed your poem yet, the contest page will up date if I have or not
3. Points will go up as soon as I get my results in from the contests I have entered, or get more points some other way...becaues all I have at the moment is 310.....300 for gold and 5 for each silver and bronze
4. HM's depend on my points at the time of judging
5. please note that I do reserve the right to end the contest early...as long as I am getting entries it will stay open...for a max of two months
6. The winners and other who I think deserve an HM (deserve is for if I don't have enough points to award all enough HM's...) will be added to my favorites...
Well I think that cover's everything...but I have a feeling that I forgot something....oh well...if I did and I remeber it I will add it, it will not apply to anyone who entered before I put up the notice...Please remeber I do check dates....
Good Luck To All 
UPDATE 03/13/08
Nathan I have removed you as a cojudge you are free to enter....if you can enter something new but that is not required.... I have added all the points I have gotten to the bronze and the silver once silver reaches 200 and bronze has reached 100 I will start adding HM...HM will only be 30 points apeice...sorry but they will not go up give more people a chance of winning...
With as many enties has I am getting I had to add a limit it's at 1000 I don't expect it to reach that but hey ya'll may prove me wrong....
Also here is the scoring I'm going by The most you can get is 30 pts.
Attention grabbing Title...........10pts
Wow Factor.........................10pts
Flow...............................5pts
Reading Ease.......................5pts
you'll note that flow and reading ease are only 5 pts apeice... this is because poetry isn't about format in whole it's about getting your feelings out (or it is to me at least)
To get into the finalists you have to score 15pts at least and from there the people with the highest scores for each of my trophies will win....
On my finalists I will comment with your score (see above) to the people I have already commented I will comment again with your score so that you know if you got in to the finalists or not and how you are doing...
Oh and I hold the right to extend the length of this contest untill I stop getting enteries, and at that point I will let the contest stop at whatever date is set as the end date with out change....
That is all for now....
Good Luck all
Hey updates again
Ok...so the entries are going up everytime I login, and because It's spring break, and I can't use the school's high speed to judge for the nest week I had to lower the limit on the number poems that can be entered to 200 total...also...my judging system...(see last update)...well it's not working out very well, cause everyone is ending up with enough to get into the finalists...needless to say that is no help at all,...wo I changing it back to the ones that stand out in my mind the most....the ones I sit and think about between tv shows...and that kind of thing...the hauntingly good ones...(note: haunting for me is good)
I'm soo sorry that I keep changing my mind,
But...
Good luck all
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on March 17, 2008
- Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 100, Bronze: 50, Honorable mention: 5 people
- Final notes: Thank you all very much for your entries, but as it is the number of entries I have resived has slowed to very few...I'll host another contest as soon as I have the points, I will favorite my winners....and thanks once again all....I had a hard time picking winners...so good writes....best of luck to you all
Contest Winners
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by Susan E. Pennycuff 40 lines, 11 comments, on Mar 25 5:59 PM 2007. In Personal, Sad
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Just One Moment / Just one moment to remember / Just one moment to recall / Just one moment to pray / Pray for them all. / Just one moment to remember the sacrifice / Of our boys over there / Just one moment t• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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And like a true Orthodox Catholic
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A moment of silence for ones that are not here rite now,
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My depression,
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I pray to god every night
to send the help I need.by Dazed N Life 26 lines, 4 comments, on Feb 11 10:51 AM 2008. In Life, Spiritual, Thoughts, Friendship, My life, Happiness, Personal., Dedication• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
I remember.
When the nurse came out with the pink bundle and all you could see were those big blue eyes.by Condemd RyeZing 31 lines, 8 comments, on Mar 3 2:57 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
Somewhere there's a plane
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Voices
ranging from quiet whispers to bellowing screamsby nitefire 38 lines, 8 comments, on Mar 12 10:11 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
tears fall for you,
I cry alone,by Poetess12 28 lines, 1 comment, on Mar 12 8:55 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
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Depression has me in it's bonds, / It will never let me free, / Depression has me locked away, / To get free, I need the key. / What;s the key, I know not, / The key disappers and hides, / OUt of my Reby Alive Again 19 lines, 4 comments, on Jun 11 10:34 PM 2007. In Depressed, Suicide, Sad, Thoughts, Dark, Pain• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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if i could make you understand, what it was that you gave to me, what it was that you did to me, would it change the way you live your lifeby ApollosMuse 6 lines, 2 comments, on Mar 13 3:20 PM 2008. In Personal• Viewed by judge.
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by Sharkbaitoolala 20 lines, 12 comments, on Dec 17 3:56 PM 2005. In Dark• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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The fragile soul of a child is lost. / Waltzing through echoes of a father's voice, / that is slowly fading into a never ending sky. / Only• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Don’t try to save me
There is nothing you can doby Blue Goddess 25 lines, 7 comments, on Feb 29 3:22 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Is it a raindrop or a tear
That is something that you will never knowby Blue Goddess 5 lines, 2 comments, on Feb 2 3:54 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Too hard to find the ground, when your floating in a cloud. Too distant is the future, when the seer is not bestowed.by Condemd RyeZing 26 lines, 1 comment, on Mar 13 7:11 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Time and time again, I've dreamt of your face.by Condemd RyeZing 23 lines, 2 comments, on Mar 7 3:04 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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His life was a roller coaster.
Her life was a joyride.by Condemd RyeZing 25 lines, 3 comments, on Mar 13 7:24 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Home is where the heart is
And that's where I want to beby Blue Goddess 18 lines, 8 comments, on Dec 4 1:14 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
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the sheets still slightly crumpled
on her side of bedby bluecollarlove 14 lines, 15 comments, on Aug 27 11:36 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
She looked sort of lost
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I, I can never see the sky
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A vague emptyness.
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I lay in my bed, / Remembering you. / Before I sleep at night, / I remember you. / When I dream at night, / I dream of you. / Knowing there• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Love is my poison,
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Why?
I didn't want to do it,by me-for-eternity 66 lines, 6 comments, on Sep 9 9:14 AM 2006. In Love• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
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I won't enter, but... how would 'Between Soldiers And Pirates' be an unfair advantage?
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Because it is one of my favorite poems and I would know it when I started to read it and it would affect my judging... I can tell you though that based against what I've read of these so far It would be gold
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I have entered your contest three times... I will limit myself here, but if three is too much, I will remove one or two...
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NO that's ok
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ok... funny thing is, I was checking to see if you had viewed mine yet, and realized I never put the third poem. If you don't mind, I am checking to see if I have one, actually I know i have one, that might interest you... anyway, thank you for your response.
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Oh... I added a fourth poem... are you allowed to know who the authors are?
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yeah I'm allowed to know, I'm just not a gold member so I don't have the option of knowing unless you say...
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Thank you for hosting, I am honored beyond belief to have placed more than once in this contest as I have read many of these entries and wow, there were so many good ones, you had such a tough decision to make, like I said, I am honored. Thank you again for hosting and taking the time to read and comment on all of these. Suzi
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