Family Dispute

Contest is Over

• Contest was judged on March 25, 2008
• Rewards: Gold: 300
• Final notes:
  These poems were very very good..better than mine in a way
  i really like the ones about divorce..its like me
  i my fmaily is divorced.thank you for all your participations..
  congratulations to you the winner.
  xoxox
  jesse

Contest Winners

1. Domesticated Violence

   Pointing mental guns at one another's head Killing each other on the inside with what's been said

   by andywontdie 38 lines, 1 comment, on Mar 11 11:20 PM 2008. In Abuse, Contest, Life, Other, Pain, Society
   Gold trophy winner

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2. So Called Family

   this is about my family

   by bradleyAwray 37 lines, 10 comments, on Feb 18 11:33 AM 2006. In Sad, Personal
   Silver trophy winner

   • Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
3. Error: Unable to find finalist item 4044673, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]

Entries [16]

• [ Mommy, I love you! ]

  Mommy, I love you! Im so happy your home!

  by perplexed-broken 23 lines, 3 comments, on Mar 11 10:05 PM 2008. In Life, Sadness

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• You were supposed to be there

  This is a poem I wrote for my mom a few years ago.

  by dendriapyro 27 lines, 10 comments, on Oct 5 6:30 PM 2005. In Love, Dark

  • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
• [ She seems so cold, but shes hurt down inside ]

  THIS IS REALLY PERSONAL, ITS ABOUT MY GRANDMOTHERM SHE HAS BEEN THROUGH A LOT.

  by Suicide Hotline 39 lines, 2 comments, on Mar 9 11:08 PM 2008. In Life, Pain, Personal, Sad, Family, Abuse

  • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
• [Why]

  I don’t understand why you do such things
  At the time you did it I was only fourteen

  by HaileeDear 19 lines, 7 comments, on Mar 12 9:02 PM 2008. In sad, pesonal, abuse

  • Commented on by judge.
• Tragedy-seeming a life story

  Banned from the house barred out again / Kicked out by my mother, abandoned by my dad / For a man or women they've never really had / I'd s

  by NickelleteXninja 45 lines, 10 comments, on May 26 10:03 PM 2007. In Personal, Sad, Thoughts, Beat, Depressed, My life

  • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
• Home

  Pretty picket fences protect manicured grass,
  A rising sun paints a perfect picture of shimmering glass,

  by Redrusty66 68 lines, 5 comments, on Mar 5 10:50 AM 2008. In Abuse, Angst, Dark, Life, Lyrics, Pain, Sad, Society

  • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
• MOTHER and SON

  by dustookie2 88 lines, 6 comments, on Mar 3 7:38 AM 2006. In Personal, Other, Love, Adult, Contest, Life

  • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
• Mother

  by Night Terrors 48 lines, 3 comments, on Dec 13 2:01 PM 2007

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• My Parents' Girl (Lyrics)

  parents misbehave
  but I’m still my parents’ girl...

  by second-born 54 lines, 3 comments, on Jul 31 3:27 AM 2007. In Pain, Lyrics, Family, Angst

  • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
• With no help from thee

  Destiny,Destiny
  what will it turn out to be?

  by Natural Disaster 79 lines, 7 comments, on Mar 12 11:55 AM 2008. In Thoughts, Other

  • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
• Inaccurate Description

  They use the wrong word intirely, when its called a crime of passion.

  by Preacher 10 lines, 7 comments, on Feb 9 3:29 PM 2008. In Dark, Pain, Sad

  • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
• Victoria

  I cried when I came home today
  I heard that you were gone

  by bluecollarlove 25 lines, 17 comments, on Apr 16 9:07 PM 2007

  • Viewed by judge. Prewrite

Comments

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  Suicide Hotline
  March 11, 2008
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  How many can we enter?
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  Simply Simple
  March 12, 2008
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  Interesting contest. Thankfully my family is awesome... so I don't know if I'd be too good at something like this. I'll give it a shot though. Maybe... if I think of anything good. ^.^
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  dustookie2
  March 25, 2008
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  Thank you for hosting this contest.
  
  CONGRAUTLATIONS to all the Winners

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