ok i want imagery. be very discriptive and colorful. dont just say the tree was green or dark green tell me what kind of green and what the tree did etc....GET CREATIVE PEOPLE!
it doesnt matter what your describing as long as you make it good enough that i can see it when im reading....
....ok i dont want short sweet and to the point. for serious i want DESCRIPTION! ....
I WANT TO SEE WHAT YOU SEE! GIRRRRRRRR
and dont show me something that i can see for myself. please people.
it doesnt matter what your describing as long as you make it good enough that i can see it when im reading....
....ok i dont want short sweet and to the point. for serious i want DESCRIPTION! ....
I WANT TO SEE WHAT YOU SEE! GIRRRRRRRR
and dont show me something that i can see for myself. please people.
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on April 5, 2008
- Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 35, Bronze: 15, Honorable mention: 2 people
- Final notes: thank you soooo much for entering my very first contest....there were some really good poems that i couldnt feature...and judging was a difficult feat...no lie =} thanks again and may all your writings be blessed.
Contest Winners
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Why can I not be / As beautiful as she? / Her face is like an exquisite diamond, / Featured perfectly, with a nose no human could recreate,• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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by apoeticinjustice 113 lines, 59 comments, on Dec 29 10:09 AM 2007. In Life, Personal
Bronze trophy winner
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by Floorboards 24 lines, 33 comments, on Feb 27 6:44 AM 2008. In Adult, Humor, Personal
Honorable mention
• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] - Error: Unable to find finalist item 4010539, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
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by JanessaKatzer 38 lines, 1 comment, on Mar 5 5:05 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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Night has fallen once again The moon giving a ghostly light• Viewed by judge. [remove]
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fireworks of joy, sorrow,
hatred, and pain igniteby the pistol star 21 lines, on Mar 23 10:57 AM 2008. In contemporary• Viewed by judge. [remove] -
like craft paper perforations and wind mills
I sputter...for the innocence of adolescence.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
Gold trophy winner
Silver trophy winner
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by Olivias Violin 34 lines, on Feb 8 6:17 PM 2008. In Nature• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Sleep crashes into me like waves into a wall• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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All the house-clothed women of roses,
the zoo of parking meters and ducking umbrellas,by Dragomiloff 4 lines, 2 comments, on Jan 12 6:37 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
The night was tranquil,by Lady Ireland 32 lines, 7 comments, on Dec 18 10:15 PM 2007
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Holy grail of the innocent,
Protector of the sick and frail.by Crimson eyes 14 lines, 6 comments, on Feb 18 4:12 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
by myriad-dark 21 lines, 17 comments, on Jun 5 11:33 PM 2007. In Lyrics, Nature, Spiritual, Thoughts• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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I close my eyes and see a bright light,
Passing through a tunnelby peru 17 lines, 1 comment, on Mar 16 2:28 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
With thin arms reaching towards the sky,
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From the firm ground with it's cool soil
Deep, warm sandy dunes of the wilderness• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Winds passing through ebony vines.. As the hurricane blows, with no sun to shineby Cross 9 lines, on Mar 11 6:02 PM 2008• Viewed by judge.
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Senses Of Fall I jog through the brisk morning rays.by Soccerfish004 19 lines, on Mar 21 11:41 AM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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And I am still as I open my eyes
to see nothing but reality.by notallowedtocry 43 lines, 1 comment, on Mar 23 1:00 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. -
I spread out the map and survey the curves of her ripeness,
Her open and oft-raped rolling folds of greenapple fawns.by Animarising 30 lines, 23 comments, on Mar 6 9:38 AM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
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He's the maitre'd of stretched faces,by laxrocks33 70 lines, 8 comments, on Mar 23 2:36 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Oh astronomy tower, I try to jostle your decay to the root,by cokecola19 29 lines, 1 comment, on Mar 23 8:10 PM 2008• Viewed by judge.
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Pale darkness illuminates
chapped rugged hills speakby bones7 25 lines, 17 comments, on Mar 23 7:19 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Morning dew Shining in the rising sun• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Champagne glasses tinted crimson / Blades of silver blood shot red / Sipping slowly at Grims ears / Wiping away scattered tears / Swirlingby NickelleteXninja 29 lines, 8 comments, on Jul 15 5:31 PM 2007. In Personal• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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