What I want is you to use "She" or "He Cries"
as your 1st and last line of your poem.
Rules:
No bashing
Nothing over 40 lines, please
Enter as many times as you'd like
Have fun
There you go. Go at it.
as your 1st and last line of your poem.
Rules:
No bashing
Nothing over 40 lines, please
Enter as many times as you'd like
Have fun
There you go. Go at it.
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on March 20, 2008
- Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 100, Bronze: 50, Honorable mention: 4 people
- Final notes: Okay. This was hard. But the contest had a great turn out! Thank you all so much for your entries. It was so close for everyone. The top three (which are all pretty simmilar) just had something about them I loved. I suggest you read them. The two HMs (Not in any order) Were very different takes on the prompt. Expically the 'Wolf Mourning Song', which I really enjoyed. It was hard chosing between these to give trophies. The other two grouped with the trophy winners are VERY VERY close compeditors.
I enjoyed all the entries, and if you want to hear very different takes on this prompt, read 'two different perspectives', 'He cries for sorrow... He cries for joy', Beautifully Rotten' and 'In Her Arms He Cries'. They were all very close too, but like I already said, everyone was.
Thanks so much for all your entries, and I'd love to hear more of everyone in my next contest.
Thanks so much.
~Tenor-saxamaphone
Contest Winners
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She cries.
She feels so full of dispair.by Lotus-Mama 37 lines, 17 comments, on Mar 18 1:28 PM 2008. In Angst, Pain, Love, Life, Lost in thought, Depression, Longing
Honorable mention
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She cries the ancient song: Ohm...lupine style -• Commented on by judge. [remove]
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Gold trophy winner
Silver trophy winner
Entries [21]
1 - 21 of 21
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She cries when she is aloneby SchizoChic 28 lines, 4 comments, on Mar 5 12:44 PM 2008• Commented on by judge.
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He cries, he cries, he cries... sitting alone, without a sound• Commented on by judge.
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She cries, She lives in me, my heart beats,by Unsigned 7 lines, 10 comments, on Mar 5 2:21 PM 2008• Commented on by judge.
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She cries alone when only her ears can hear
So that the emptiness of her soul can crumbleby Rianna Bear 19 lines, 3 comments, on Mar 5 6:40 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. -
She cries For the boyby technicolor girl 19 lines, 4 comments, on Mar 5 7:47 PM 2008• Commented on by judge.
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and she can't help but hate
all that she hears.by LunaAmara 16 lines, 1 comment, on Mar 5 9:34 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. -
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She cries
into her pillowby bluecollarlove 18 lines, 1 comment, on Mar 6 12:15 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. -
she cries
as the knife connects with her armby bloodpoet13 31 lines, 5 comments, on Mar 6 10:25 PM 2008. In freewrite, Sad, Depression, Pain, Death, Suicide, Loss• Commented on by judge. -
by Ryno 17 lines, 15 comments, on Mar 10 9:32 AM 2008• Commented on by judge.
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Comments
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Ooo, nice contest!!
I'm gonna try to write one (or a few!) and hopefully I'll like one enough to enter!!
Yay, this will give me something to dooo for my week off of work!
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Congrats to the winners. Looks like you got a good turn out.
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