Dear friends and fellow poets.
I really need your help! My heart is in a mess, and my pen's ink has dried up.
I can't find the words to explain how I feel...
I can't even find the right words to explain what I want in this contest!
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Please help express my emotions, or give me some advice!
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PS. Look at the ghostly girl in the picture and the poems below if you are heading towards the golden trophy...
These poems will map you in the direction my heart is heading...
http://allpoetry.com/poem/3956543
http://allpoetry.com/poem/3934711
http://allpoetry.com/poem/3783780
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on April 2, 2008
- Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 150, Bronze: 50, Honorable mention: 2 people
- Final notes:
First of all I would like to thank each and every person who entered my competition. I enjoyed this contest so much and thanks to you all I have gained allot of clarity on my situation and I’m sure I’ll make a responsible decision.
Here are the winners in the contest!
Congratulations to you all!
Becks
PS. Thank you for reading the links and following the rules!
Gold ~
Lost
by Haunted-Memory on March 11. © All rights reserved
http://allpoetry.com/poem/show/4011329
Silver ~
The Screams of Silence
by Never Fall in Love on May 21, 2007. © Chandni Hingorani, All rights reserved
http://allpoetry.com/poem/show/2989104
Bronze ~
So That I May Compose
by pinkink on March 12. © DLH, All rights reserved
http://allpoetry.com/poem/show/4015295
Emerald ~
An effort
by spiritualangel on February 28. © All rights reserved
http://allpoetry.com/poem/show/3967822
Emerald ~
A Tree of Love
by sweetlittleprincess on February 28. © Genna, All rights reserved
http://allpoetry.com/poem/show/3970239
- To judge this contest, you need to have at least as many finalists as you have rewards. You have 4 awards but only 2 finalists.
Contest Winners
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Bronze trophy winner
Honorable mention
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I will dream of shells;
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Sorry i love you
wanting youby luna-midnight 29 lines, 8 comments, on Feb 14 9:22 PM 2008
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I need to remind myself
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by Immortale Bellezza 20 lines, 1 comment, on Oct 2 2:01 PM 2006. In Other• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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i see the world with open eyes
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Fine roses and delicate romance
Seeds of souls lost from memories• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
The cherry blossoms
Float and weave downstreamby Animarising 42 lines, 7 comments, on Feb 24 6:14 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Pale eyes and twitching branches signal green,
To distant lover’s soft imagined cross,by Animarising 16 lines, 11 comments, on Feb 13 12:40 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
back then, it matteredby transit 41 lines, 3 comments, on Feb 29 2:01 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Yet the clamour fell down at my feet
Near the roots of the peace tree.
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In velvet vacuum of words,
Your tender touch repeats.by Animarising 18 lines, 5 comments, on Jan 15 4:58 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
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The last breaths of winter fade,
I'm counting down the time
by borrowing.moonlight 25 lines, 1 comment, on Mar 5 10:09 AM 2008. In love• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
When you left me standing in the rain I swore I’d never breathe again,by Xsilent-angelX 21 lines, 4 comments, on Mar 12 8:14 AM 2008. In upset, angst, relationships, sad, anger• Commented on by judge.
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The sky blue promise of tomorrow
Approaches, bristling with fear
The darkened emotions of yesterday• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
The sound is growing, everlasting
A flicker, a touch, a feeling• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Resonating silence Fills my empty mind• Commented on by judge.
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The way you look at me...
With your ever blue eyes• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I stood on two feet my declining featuresby dippedquilpen 20 lines, 1 comment, on Mar 12 1:25 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I'm just setting here,
Think all things i have to worry about,by JesusFreak2010 38 lines, 2 comments, on Dec 28 10:02 AM 2006. In Love• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I thought about you today
and I faltered at your wordsby Voodoo Eyes 19 lines, 14 comments, on Feb 7 7:38 PM 2008. In Thoughts• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
My heart isn’t something that you can replace,
I want you back,by xJustxAnotherxGirlx 21 lines, 7 comments, on Mar 9 8:40 PM 2008. In Love• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Comments
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the moon is always full
Why is it that great joy brings salty tear ?
and why does heartache sometimes taste so sweet ?
It seems, together bliss and pain appear
to make the wheel of karma look complete
For Yin needs Yang, and winter needs the spring
the pendulum swings not to just one side
As much as failure soon success will bring
within the seed of glory worms abide
The moon is full, although appearance lies
To see through Maya’s play, step back and gaze
A prisoner is Freedom in disguise
the Light of Truth dissolves illusion’s haze
If perfumed rose you search, bear with the thorns
Enjoy the milk – but don’t ignore the horns
hope this lightens up your spirit ...
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Is it okay to enter free verse? I don't rhyme.
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sure!! This time I really don't mind free verse!!!
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Thank you for the silver
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