As to figure out who I should add to my list of references... what I want to see is your personal best of almost anything as I'm trying to get a grasp at what's out there... so the more "creative" it is... the better your odds are at winning.
I will also try my best to give as many indepth comments as I can.
I believe it would be fair for me to say that it is quite a challenge to comprehend some of the sophisticated poetry submitted as they may very well be worth gold considering I feel the need for myself to be more educated as to what makes poetry great. Preferably, I want to see some sort of style rather than only the message itself. A form... a rhythm... a structured rhyme... a play on words... a strong use of metaphors... or whatever of the sort. Sooo... I have decided to make a suggestion which I hope helps me to learn how to improve on my own ability to write poetry --
Please indicate in your notes what is your style or even let me know how to interpret what's being said... although it's not required to do so, but it might help me fall in love with what's there. Thank you.
I hope nobody here will get upset or discouraged... my main aim is to find what suits me which in turn may find more people to acknowledge you.
Just in case you want to see some of my own favorite poetry to get an ideal of what might impress me...
http://allpoetry.com/poem/2176739
http://allpoetry.com/poem/2623230
http://allpoetry.com/poem/2275087
http://allpoetry.com/poem/2167811
http://allpoetry.com/poem/2195178
http://allpoetry.com/poem/2183611
http://allpoetry.com/poem/2664902
http://allpoetry.com/poem/2251844
http://allpoetry.com/poem/2255813
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I will also try my best to give as many indepth comments as I can.
I believe it would be fair for me to say that it is quite a challenge to comprehend some of the sophisticated poetry submitted as they may very well be worth gold considering I feel the need for myself to be more educated as to what makes poetry great. Preferably, I want to see some sort of style rather than only the message itself. A form... a rhythm... a structured rhyme... a play on words... a strong use of metaphors... or whatever of the sort. Sooo... I have decided to make a suggestion which I hope helps me to learn how to improve on my own ability to write poetry --
Please indicate in your notes what is your style or even let me know how to interpret what's being said... although it's not required to do so, but it might help me fall in love with what's there. Thank you.
I hope nobody here will get upset or discouraged... my main aim is to find what suits me which in turn may find more people to acknowledge you.
Just in case you want to see some of my own favorite poetry to get an ideal of what might impress me...
http://allpoetry.com/poem/2176739
http://allpoetry.com/poem/2623230
http://allpoetry.com/poem/2275087
http://allpoetry.com/poem/2167811
http://allpoetry.com/poem/2195178
http://allpoetry.com/poem/2183611
http://allpoetry.com/poem/2664902
http://allpoetry.com/poem/2251844
http://allpoetry.com/poem/2255813
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Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on March 13
- Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 50, Bronze: 10
- Final notes: It was quite difficult to decide on who should be the top 3 finalists by which I wish to reward many of you gold trophies in this very contest. I want to thank you all for submitting your excellence. Sorry that it took so long for me to make up my mind as I've been overly busy all of a sudden. I might not be able to host any others for a long time, but will make a grand effort to applaud many of you and perhaps adding a direct link to my most favorites which to me should be worth far more than having thousands of gold trophies.
- To judge this contest, you need to have at least as many finalists as you have rewards. You have 3 awards but only 2 finalists.
Contest Winners
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This Is what I get, for following you all these years.
God, you were the only one I trusted, but you drove me to insanity.by The Rose God Ororon 41 lines, 52 comments, on Mar 22 1:51 PM 2006. In Dark• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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Please believe me I have no pretense,
prime rib sweet and sour sensesby jezz 28 lines, 6 comments, on Feb 26 1:07 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
You tasted the apocalypse
in coffee grounds andby Hadji Murad 58 lines, 23 comments, on Nov 5 9:11 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Tried to write a play and a poem at the same time.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Waiting faithfully
As night turns to dayby SmokinHotWhiteTiger 63 lines, 105 comments, on Feb 1 5:45 PM. In Contemporary, Humor, Life, Love, Nature, Other, Personal, My own style, Friendship• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Feet stuck
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`by BuriedTreasures 30 lines, 48 comments, on Feb 4 2:17 PM. In Angst, Pain, Love
Silver trophy winner
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She craves the intention
of sexed up men, loved up men.by Uniquely-Scarred 12 lines, 23 comments, on Dec 8 2:03 PM 2007. In Life, Sad, Thoughts, Pain, Society, Contemporary• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Would eyes be wise to look beyond that door?
Where restless things disturb the quiet of night,by masterblaster 45 lines, 233 comments, on Jul 9 11:43 AM 2006. In Other• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Makes me whole feeds my soul.
Helps me breath my relieve.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
through the cracks i fall can i forget it all?by lunagirl15 26 lines, 7 comments, on Dec 10 9:54 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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artillery and war cannot bring peace
like the rain only sudden sorrow• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Sleep, sleep there on the bed
The bed where the years were trampled over• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I saw Charles Bukowski wear a tie What can a poet teach?by Zyskandar A Jaimot 94 lines, 13 comments, on Feb 21 9:44 PM. In Contemporary, Contest, Humor, Life, Other, Society, POETS LIFE• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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A ship was bound to foreign lands,
Across the misty waves.by Mad Princess 76 lines, 5 comments, on Feb 19 2:11 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
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open your eyes for the proof
and you'll start to see thingsby AmazinJason 23 lines, 5 comments, on Dec 1 12:14 PM 2006. In Freedom• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
The future troubles the prophet's face
From chin to forehead• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Looking back after centuries gone by
Thinking that I had wings so I could flyby lil juggalette 131 lines, 9 comments, on Feb 21 5:16 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Break with the hungry
My bountiful bread• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
A wilted flower droops in the sun,by Poetess12 19 lines, 1 comment, on Feb 28 12:18 AM• Commented on by judge.
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I lay down my head,
retiring after a long day.by fear the ban hammer 15 lines, 7 comments, on Jan 3 8:05 PM. In Dreams• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
My father tells me
That you went to Hell.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I remember.
When the nurse came out with the pink bundle and all you could see were those big blue eyes.by Condemd RyeZing 31 lines, 7 comments, on Mar 3 2:57 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Broken pieces of heart,
Stapled to bloody walls of sin,• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Magic closed through stitching,
Decoration unleashed as your cheeks sunk,• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Shallow hearts dial 911, Stab wounds forming blood,by Emo Raunchy Love 22 lines, 4 comments, on Mar 3 3:44 AM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Disappearing into untouchable light,
As knives glisten in still beauty,• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Holding the knife to flesh,
The beauty of life flashed,• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Endless pain Digging into skin of the innocentby Midgetbridgey 24 lines, 3 comments, on Dec 16 1:07 AM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Smile summer sunshine,
as anemic amphibians• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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I just need a few more entries for me to get started here.
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It's so great to have read many poetry entered. I somewhat have an idea on who may be winning their trophies, but I will give this a little more time to see if there's going to be more added by which I must admit, much of the vocabulary are beyond my level of comprehension which is slightly above what is commonly found written within modern english newspapers.

