Prompt( Two word) : Pain & Disapointment
Rules:
I don't want to limit you. But PLEASE don't give me novels.
This is the first time I ask this in a contest : Use poetic Devices.
Make me feel "something"
Just because it is pain & disappointment doesn't mean that you gotta make me die.
So give it your best shot.
No bashing my God.
No curse words please.
Anything else, ask.
Note: If asked nicely I will give you extra time.
How many words? No limit.
Lines? No limit.
Good?
Then stop reading & GO!
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on February 28, 2008
- Rewards: Gold: 300
- Final notes: Thanks for the entries.
I did a Gold -- Pain by swan song
Silver-- No by penman
Bronze-- Living Alone by Lady Altheia
Good work to all!
And sorry, couldn't comment most entries
School has me busy.
But thanks!!!
..Simply Me♥
God Bless you all!
Contest Winners
- Error: Unable to find finalist item 3960219, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
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The day I walked away, I died a thusand deaths.by Lady Altheia 11 lines, 1 comment, on Feb 25 10:08 PM 2008. In Sadness, Longing, Quickie
Bronze trophy winner
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Silver trophy winner
Entries [10]
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My hopes rose for you They were higher then the sky• Commented on by judge.
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It's a world of dissapointment and pain. Children lose parrents to alchohal and cocaine.by ScArLeM 14 lines, 3 comments, on Feb 25 10:03 PM 2008• Commented on by judge.
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I was not like this in these days The doctor says,by sanjay kanna 14 lines, 1 comment, on Feb 27 1:34 AM 2008. In Contest, Life, Love, Pain, Society, Thoughts, Disappointment• Viewed by judge.
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When autumn alone rules rules roost• Viewed by judge.
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Wakening from my worst nightmare,
Darkened paradoxical illusions• Viewed by judge. -
a dangerous love a forbidden matchby cRaZyGoOd 13 lines, 1 comment, on Feb 26 3:10 PM 2008• Viewed by judge.
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Comments
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I am not sure what you meant by poetic device. I write in rhyme and don't know what I am doing. If I did not use poetic device, feel free to disqualify me.
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Don't worry a lot about it.
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Thank you for the silver. Congratulations to all the winners.
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