♦ Option 1 ^ the picture above, or pick one from below. ♦
(I know it's not the best copy, but my scanner is being a pain so I had to take a picture of it, I'll get a better one up... sometime...)
I've been drawing this girl for a little while now, and I know how I came up with it - I wanna see what you get out of it now.
Go with it. I wanna see what you come up with.
I know it's not that great, but so what, I'm sure it'll inspire something... right?
[greyscale] Spiderstar - http://s115.photobucket.com/albums/n306/chelle_v1/?action=view¤t=pic-1.jpg
[colour] Spiderstar - http://s115.photobucket.com/albums/n306/chelle_v1/?action=view¤t=Spiderstar2.jpg
[rough] Floating - http://s115.photobucket.com/albums/n306/chelle_v1/?action=view¤t=Image015.jpg
♦ Option 2 - Lyrics inspired. ♦
This is very overdone, I know. Please don't give me cliches. I'm getting a bit sick of them. Fast.
"There are no flowers, no not this time,
There'll be no angels gracing the lines" -AFI
"If it makes you happy, it can't be that bad -
if it makes you happy, why the hell are you so sad?" -Sheryl Crow
"I fall asleep to the sound of tears of a clown,
A prayer gone blind... Im spending my time." -Roxette
♦ Option 3 - Prompts ♦
Choose one, and go with it. Freewrites are welcome.
White walls
Eyes
Termites
Gold
Mirrors
Airbrush
Liquidity
Fingerless glove
Camera flash
Still life
Hyperventilation
Streetlights
♦ Option 4 - Instruction ♦
Contrast. Write me something with contrast in it. I don't mean hectically over the top. I just enjoy some antithesis - when done well.
♦ Option 5 - Reccurence ♦
I don't know if this'll stay up, but it's just a random thought: I want to hear about something repititious. Maybe it's a nightmare, or a scenario, or a thought... but no cliches please. I cannot tell you how many poems I've read that blend into one because they all have the same either style or content. I sound pessimistic and picky, I know, I just want something fresh.
Now, the rules:
I'm not going to number them, or threaten you. Just remember who has the points and shinies and we'll get along just fine
I don't have an issue with length, but I should warn you, if it's too long and doesn't grab my attention, I won't be able to focus through it all.
I know I seem arrogant and annoying and somewhat disturbed at times, but for the sake of this point, let's just say it's true... I don't like depressingly hopeful poems (no, no typo, overly hopeful poems do seem suffocating) and while I don't mind religious entries if you can get them out of anything, just keep in mind I am not a religious person.
I won't dq you if you don't put option number in it and I can tell what it is. However, if it's not obvious, then it's safer to tell me, because if I'm in a bad enough mood, I may just discard it.
Okay, I know some people are amazing writers but have issues with spelling. I'm fine with that. But please, please, please try to use spell check?
Entertain me. Take my breath away
(I know it's not the best copy, but my scanner is being a pain so I had to take a picture of it, I'll get a better one up... sometime...)
I've been drawing this girl for a little while now, and I know how I came up with it - I wanna see what you get out of it now.
Go with it. I wanna see what you come up with.
I know it's not that great, but so what, I'm sure it'll inspire something... right?
[greyscale] Spiderstar - http://s115.photobucket.com/albums/n306/chelle_v1/?action=view¤t=pic-1.jpg
[colour] Spiderstar - http://s115.photobucket.com/albums/n306/chelle_v1/?action=view¤t=Spiderstar2.jpg
[rough] Floating - http://s115.photobucket.com/albums/n306/chelle_v1/?action=view¤t=Image015.jpg
♦ Option 2 - Lyrics inspired. ♦
This is very overdone, I know. Please don't give me cliches. I'm getting a bit sick of them. Fast.
"There are no flowers, no not this time,
There'll be no angels gracing the lines" -AFI
"If it makes you happy, it can't be that bad -
if it makes you happy, why the hell are you so sad?" -Sheryl Crow
"I fall asleep to the sound of tears of a clown,
A prayer gone blind... Im spending my time." -Roxette
♦ Option 3 - Prompts ♦
Choose one, and go with it. Freewrites are welcome.
White walls
Eyes
Termites
Gold
Mirrors
Airbrush
Liquidity
Fingerless glove
Camera flash
Still life
Hyperventilation
Streetlights
♦ Option 4 - Instruction ♦
Contrast. Write me something with contrast in it. I don't mean hectically over the top. I just enjoy some antithesis - when done well.
♦ Option 5 - Reccurence ♦
I don't know if this'll stay up, but it's just a random thought: I want to hear about something repititious. Maybe it's a nightmare, or a scenario, or a thought... but no cliches please. I cannot tell you how many poems I've read that blend into one because they all have the same either style or content. I sound pessimistic and picky, I know, I just want something fresh.
Now, the rules:
I'm not going to number them, or threaten you. Just remember who has the points and shinies and we'll get along just fine

I don't have an issue with length, but I should warn you, if it's too long and doesn't grab my attention, I won't be able to focus through it all.
I know I seem arrogant and annoying and somewhat disturbed at times, but for the sake of this point, let's just say it's true... I don't like depressingly hopeful poems (no, no typo, overly hopeful poems do seem suffocating) and while I don't mind religious entries if you can get them out of anything, just keep in mind I am not a religious person.
I won't dq you if you don't put option number in it and I can tell what it is. However, if it's not obvious, then it's safer to tell me, because if I'm in a bad enough mood, I may just discard it.
Okay, I know some people are amazing writers but have issues with spelling. I'm fine with that. But please, please, please try to use spell check?
Entertain me. Take my breath away

Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on March 25, 2008
- Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 200, Bronze: 100, Honorable mention: 8 people
- Final notes: Okay, I know this took forever to judge, and if I haven't commented on your piece, I'm SO sorry - send me a link and I'll do it asap!
So, as I said, this took me a while to judge, and if I could give more first, second, and third... I happily would! There were so many I wanted to award to, but in the end, that just shows what an awesome contest is was!
Thanks all for entering!
Contest Winners
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smiles are vacant gritty watermarks
on grey grainy faces.
by Last Resort Reached 31 lines, 6 comments, on Feb 25 12:10 PM 2008. In Society, Contest, Other
Silver trophy winner
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by acoustical 26 lines, 8 comments, on Feb 23 3:27 PM 2008. In mittens, and hobo gloves
Honorable mention
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I'm down for the count [I get a lot of shock]• Commented on by judge. [remove]
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White walls stare at me from all sides
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Air slowly seeps in, as I struggle to find an escape,• Commented on by judge. [remove]
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But even they will forget,
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man don't you hate it when you know something is going to happen• Viewed by judge. [remove]
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Chernobyl Nuclear Plant April 26,1986 Kiev then USSR now Ukraine Republicby Zyskandar A Jaimot 133 lines, 3 comments, on Feb 23 3:18 PM 2008. In Contemporary, Contest, Hope, Other, Pain, Sad, Society, Angst, Thoughts• Viewed by judge.
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Fascist by the lb. Alex: Welcome and here we are againby Zyskandar A Jaimot 149 lines, 2 comments, on Feb 23 3:34 PM 2008. In Contemporary, Contest, Other, Society, Thoughts, WHAT IS A POET???• Viewed by judge.
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Those eyes they're your eyesby Bryan-CarnelianHope 45 lines, 5 comments, on Feb 23 3:55 PM 2008• Commented on by judge.
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When words are not enough for you're sadness...it's still life when you feel nothing brings you up...it's still life• Viewed by judge.
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You know, the Japanese have a suprstition about the Number four. Its unlucky. Because in japanese four is pronounced as "Shi" and death is also pronounced as "Shi" so 4 = death.
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that's why four is also pronounced as "yon" in japanese
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not too long eh - well we'll see something about instruction/antithesis eh thanks for the contest + the obligatory rukes regards zaj ah death as SHI quite instructive for CURT C.
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I love that picture, no idea why...just do

Will definately write something for this... just as soon as my muse decides to return...
Anyway, great contest my friend!
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Cassie shall remember this, yes she will, for this contest, she will kill!
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Cassie will think of better rhymes all the time.
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Excellent contest! Thank you for the gold.
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