take me to a vintage sunday, i want to listen to the old
records with my grandparents, and sip lemonade on a
hot summer day; remind me what it was like to count
the stars with someone i love, and to swing in a tire,
reaching for something more.
i reserve the write to delete if i see fit; poitns may go up.
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on June 25, 2008
- Rewards: Gold: 300
- Final notes: beautiful.
thank you so much for being
patient with me.
Contest Winners
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by Lavender Butterfly 22 lines, 5 comments, on Feb 23 2:55 AM 2008. In memories, Other
Silver trophy winner
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nan and pop had this car
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Sometimes, all I want to do• Commented on by judge. [remove]
Gold trophy winner
Bronze trophy winner
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Walk with me, love Under blue-fielded dreamsby Jasmine Rayne 25 lines, 1 comment, on Feb 22 9:57 PM 2008• Viewed by judge.
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We lay down on the hood of his car listening to the crickets chirp
and counting starsby Weetzie bat 37 lines, 5 comments, on May 30 12:17 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. -
Leather covered album
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Just a linger link between us Emotions a stirby zstarz 48 lines, 1 comment, on Apr 16 8:24 PM 2008• Commented on by judge.
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Driving home was harder than you'd think I should've never had that much to drinkby RebelDLine75 20 lines, 1 comment, on May 8 2:12 PM 2008• Commented on by judge.
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slow down, rewind
step into my parlorby afisa 12 lines, 1 comment, on May 8 2:23 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. -
Across the sapphire sky we fly--we fly• Commented on by judge.
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The briars sharpened their teeth,
just for us.by emanon 32 lines, 6 comments, on May 9 12:32 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. -
Fall was our heaven time to be free• Commented on by judge.
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ooo I like it...do you have a line or word limit?
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