i just want a contest that will actually have more than 5 entries for once.
PLEASE READ ALL OF THIS!
is that really hard to do?? lol
i hate to admit this
but i am really picky.
but im also bored..
soooo this will be a chance to
be honest & critique.
i promise to comment on ALL entries.
IF YOU CANNOT HANDLE HONESTY
DO NOT ENTER.
but i will reasure you; i am by no means
unfair or brutal when it comes to commenting.
if anything i will only suggest things, and am
in no way offensive.
i dont care what genre it is
but i do suggest you dont waste my time
with RHYME & CLICHE things.
JUST DONT ENTER IT!
please be serious
and mature about the writes you
enter in here.
also please no poems that
have more than 30 lines.
[short attention span]
im really looking forward
to good entries..
if this is another flop
i'll delete it.
thank you much ♥
UPDATE:
i am not trying to look down on people who write with rhyme its just that i really can't take it seriously and i can only see it as something that people have to work at to find interesting & for it to flow.
its just something i find i've grown out of.
i am really sorry if you are offended in any way i never meant to offend anyone :/
PLEASE READ ALL OF THIS!
is that really hard to do?? lol
i hate to admit this
but i am really picky.
but im also bored..
soooo this will be a chance to
be honest & critique.
i promise to comment on ALL entries.
IF YOU CANNOT HANDLE HONESTY
DO NOT ENTER.
but i will reasure you; i am by no means
unfair or brutal when it comes to commenting.
if anything i will only suggest things, and am
in no way offensive.
i dont care what genre it is
but i do suggest you dont waste my time
with RHYME & CLICHE things.
JUST DONT ENTER IT!
please be serious
and mature about the writes you
enter in here.
also please no poems that
have more than 30 lines.
[short attention span]
im really looking forward
to good entries..
if this is another flop
i'll delete it.
thank you much ♥
UPDATE:
i am not trying to look down on people who write with rhyme its just that i really can't take it seriously and i can only see it as something that people have to work at to find interesting & for it to flow.
its just something i find i've grown out of.
i am really sorry if you are offended in any way i never meant to offend anyone :/
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on February 24, 2008
- Rewards: Gold: 900, Silver: 150, Bronze: 100, Honorable mention: 5 people
- Final notes: i had soooo many enterys! i was so pleased with this contest and i want to thank each and every one of you for being open to suggestions & really letting yourself improve on your wonderful talent thank you again!!
Contest Winners
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I am bronzed and brazen
beneath bluebell skies and• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
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Fluttering by, a single leaf -
Caught in an updraft
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An Angel Awakens
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Silver trophy winner
Bronze trophy winner
Honorable mention
Entries [33]
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I watched him walk our dead end street
to the end of the cobble stoneby bluecollarlove 23 lines, 8 comments, on Feb 1 10:40 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
little girls in pink was it you long ago• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Waves of life wash upon my feet, The oceans tears of sorrowby CrystalFlower 17 lines, 6 comments, on Jul 9 6:59 PM 2006. In Nature• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Can you find the meaning of what the Silver Mirage is?by Nyhte 36 lines, 12 comments, on Feb 16 3:59 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Don’t raise your voice / Lest it be heard by others / And cause you inconvenience. / If something happens / In your presence / Don’t be a witness. / Asked to depose, say, / “O.K. I was there that day• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Sandy beach of white and tan crystals. There is a hill in the near distance• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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The love between northand south are you and i . / Remembering the first day we talked,I knew then you would be mine . / Our hearts beat as• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I fear I cannot continue
Until my desires are laidby BigE 10 lines, 4 comments, on Jan 10 8:30 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
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I wrote a letter for you today with my eraserby ccb 16 lines, 11 comments, on Feb 19 11:27 AM 2008• Commented on by judge.
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I'm drowning in my own emotions
Sheer terror, frustration and loneliness• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Running through the sunlit meadow, dragonflies buzzing in the breezeby sunflowers21573 14 lines, 19 comments, on Feb 9 5:40 PM. In memories• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Let me ask you a question,
A question thats been running 'roundby StarLightResurrects 26 lines, 4 comments, on Jan 21 12:43 AM 2008. In Society, Thoughts, My life, Teen issues, Message• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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tyo.
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yeah got it lol
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can i have a prompt... im at the half-way writers block point where i need help to write i hope i get over it soon.
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Just a suggestion:
I may be different than other people but I was excited to enter your contest as I liked what you had to say until I got to your statement: “if this is another flop
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wait, so poetry can't rhyme even if it is serious?
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yes because in my opinion its not really a poem its more like a song or lyrics. its just not mature to me. sorry about that
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i want to enter really bad
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bookmarked.♥
I LOVE YOUR COMMENTS.
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good luck to all that enter. I'll be watching from the sidelines.
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so is rhyme completely out of the question?
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congrats to all the winners, i will come back and read their entries. have to judge my contest>.<
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Oh thank you so much!!! I really appreciate the silver <3
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Thank you so much for the honorable winner in your contest with so many entries as you had here, I am honored I even placed. I truly appreciate your comment on my poem..
Again Thank you
Congratulations to all
Much Love & Respect,
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thank you so much.. an honor..
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heh. i came on today and remembered there was something in my bookmarks to check?
i missed it
i sorry.
i'll enter the next one.<3
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