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I need prayers and inspirational writes. Judged

Ok Today I just was checking Myspace and found my hubbies daughter that lives in Texas well actually she contacted us.
She hasn't kept contact for over four years she just disappeared.
The reason why was she had lost her second child due to miscarriage at 4 months of pregnancy. She was embarrassed that she told us that he was alive and doing well. Was scared to say that he had actually died. She believed in her heart he was alive to cope so she told Mark his grandson was.
I was looking through her pictures and saw a baby girl that she had had then I noticed a questionnaire she filled out saying she missed her daughter. I was like what the heck and also there was no pictures of her son she supposedly had.
Then I got the message that she had indeed lost both children and a previous child before both of them.
The baby girls name was Hazel Leeanne Marie, the little boy was Jayden.
I have to give Mark aka drunkenram the Good and the Bad news today, this is sad.
Anyhow she recently lost baby Hazel in November, she was buried December first.
Susanna was 38 weeks pregnant when she delivered the baby it was strangled by the umbilical cord. She has been contemplating suicide but says she is to weak to even do that.

What I want from you all is a prayer poem or something inspirational for her. I am sure there are people out there who have dealt with this issue. I have But I can't write worth crap, on such poems.

Please make it heartfelt, please make it so that she
feels she has to live or whatever. Sorry I don't know what to ask for. This is a hard one for me.

Trying my best here to comfort her, any way I can.

If you want can write for Mark too. Oh man this is tough for me I want to tell him I found her Yeah That's Awesome, but He is gonna be heartbroke when he finds out about his grandchildren

The picture is of her and her baby girl Please don't post with your poem just there so you get something from it.

Help me out please.

This poem she will probably read Let me know if thats ok
Also Please if you will pt your name and state or country in the your author notes

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**Update**
Mark knows now is very happy that his daughter got back in touch but saddened as well over the loss of her children but knows that they are in a better place.
Thanks everyone for your support




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Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on March 10
  • Rewards: Gold: 2047, Silver: 1447, Bronze: 1447, Honorable mention: 32 people
  • Final notes:
    Thanks everyone for your kind hearted prayers and inspirations. The top four I pick basically because they were more personalized. I want to say thanks for the donations as well they were much appreciated. Mark and I thank you very much. I hope that Susanna will look at these prayers for her and that they give her the will to live and realize that her babies are in a better place and that God Loved them so much that he didn't want them to suffer here on earth so he took them home. Keep us in your prayers and also maybe there will come a day that she will have a child whether it be natural or adopted. to you all Thanks

Contest Winners

  1. When your world has fallen apart And everything looks so dim
    by Katie Lazette 18 lines, 8 comments, on Feb 18 5:56 PM. In Contest, Hope, Life, Love, Personal, Spiritual
    Gold trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  2. Dear Father Above,
    Manifest Thy Love
    by MassMan 28 lines, 6 comments, on Feb 18 4:16 PM. In Personal, Sad, Life, Hope, Spiritual, Love
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  3. I just learned your situation
    and my heart goes out to you
    by BuriedTreasures 71 lines, 13 comments, on Feb 18 5:09 PM. In Dedications, Spiritual
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  4. When pain is all that you can feel
    and life is something you can’t face
    by LittleMoon 24 lines, 6 comments, on Feb 18 4:41 PM. In Sad, Life, Love, Hope
    Honorable winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  5. The loss of a child is the worst pain and trauma a mother could ever experience, I have been there, it leaves a part of you empty forever.
    by badddgirl 22 lines, 4 comments, on Feb 19 1:17 AM. In Life, Love, Hope, Spiritual, Inspirational, Loss, Dedication, Longing, Sadness
    Honorable winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  6. by AliceinPoetryLand 35 lines, 5 comments, on Mar 2 7:22 AM. In Contest, Love, Life, Hope, Thoughts, Spiritual
    Honorable winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  7. ~*~
    by Never Fall in Love 44 lines, 40 comments, on Mar 30 1:12 PM 2007. In Collaboration, Dark, Hope
    Honorable winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  8. by Desire 55 lines, 5 comments, on Mar 9 10:08 PM. In Love, Hope, Dedication, Thoughts, Personal
    Honorable winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  9. by penman 38 lines, 8 comments, on Feb 18 4:36 PM. In Other
    Honorable winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  10. I know that they are being held
    ever so tenderly in the arms of God.
    by thelordreigns 113 lines, 46 comments, on May 27 6:12 PM 2005. In Sad, Spiritual, healing, miscarriage
    Honorable winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  11. in my arms was an angel i never had
    for her memory i sing a ballet to our lord
    by A.z.a 23 lines, 1 comment, on Mar 9 4:53 PM
    Honorable winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  12. by Cerulean 13 lines, 5 comments, on Feb 18 3:52 PM. In Hope, Love, Life
    Honorable winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  13. God's precious little angel
    that once belonged to me ,
    by Talking Toni 51 lines, 47 comments, on Oct 21 6:47 PM 2006. In Personal
    Honorable winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  14. All walls
    collapsing by you,
    by crimsondew 21 lines, 4 comments, on Mar 5 12:43 AM
    Honorable winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  15. as i lay in the hospital bed, with so much going through my head,
    by cryingwolf28 35 lines, 17 comments, on Feb 29 11:18 PM. In Hope, Life, Love, Spiritual, Pain
    Honorable winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  16. Lord, right now I could rail against you and shake my fist, but the truth is, God, that you know this family far better than I.
    by simplefarmgirl 12 lines, 9 comments, on Feb 22 7:47 PM
    Honorable winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  17. Inspiration grows when the dust settles,
    to be great is not an answer, it is you.
    by jezz 21 lines, 5 comments, on Feb 19 8:56 AM
    Honorable winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  18. Belief HIM
    HE will extricate humans
    by Purush 18 lines, 3 comments, on Feb 19 8:18 AM. In Spiritual, Thoughts
    Honorable winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  19. In reality,
    They lie within heaven.
    In my world,
    by x.burning.desire.x 19 lines, 4 comments, on Feb 18 11:08 PM
    Honorable winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  20. when you are in despair, all day long. and your life has come apart,
    by tony yates 10 lines, 4 comments, on Feb 18 4:45 PM. In Hope
    Honorable winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  21. God will be there when you want him to
    He will be there when you call
    by Betty Silvers 32 lines, 2 comments, on Feb 18 4:47 PM. In Sunflowers. flowers, lovliness, happiness, god, thoughts, gardens
    Honorable winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  22. Father you alone know the depths of her despair.
    by CountryCousin 8 lines, 4 comments, on Feb 18 5:06 PM. In Thoughts, Sad, Personal, Pain
    Honorable winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  23. I look to the sky in all I do, It takes all of my strength to speak to you,
    by SaveMeFromDarkness 13 lines, 4 comments, on Feb 18 4:20 PM. In Personal, Spiritual, Thoughts
    Honorable winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  24. In the night watches, when I don't know what to do
    In the night watches, when my soul it pleads to You
    by Kathleen a Nazarene 18 lines, 4 comments, on Feb 3 1:45 PM. In Contest, Prayer, Pain, Personal, Sad, Spiritual, Thoughts, My life, Longing
    Honorable winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  25. I so felt the need to find words to say
    that somehow would help some way
    by Roaddog Wolf 30 lines, 6 comments, on Mar 6 3:32 AM. In Love, Life, Spiritual, Thoughts, Hope, Personal
    Honorable winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  26. With tears in my eyes, folding my hands
    I pray to You, my beloved God,
    by Sandip Saha 21 lines, 11 comments, on Aug 29 6:28 AM 2007. In Spiritual, Love
    Honorable winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  27. There are the moon and stars above
    Radiating light and showering love
    by dp robertson 12 lines, 5 comments, on Nov 27 1:08 AM 2003. In Love
    Honorable winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  28. Clouds flow beyond the sky's silvery stream. Birds are swimming through the heavenly blue.
    by Embossed 17 lines, 3 comments, on Mar 9 7:18 PM
    Honorable winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  29. Words are only letters
    used for writing.
    by mcheadle 25 lines, 2 comments, on Mar 18 1:08 AM. In Life, Love, Pain, Spiritual
    Honorable winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  30. When life goes on and you hurt inside,
    When the friends you hold close start to slide.
    by coddledsoul 33 lines, 3 comments, on Dec 18 7:45 AM 2007. In Noguest
    Honorable winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  31. Guiding angel through the dark lit
    Forests of a fearful spirit.
    by Pandorea 13 lines, 11 comments, on Dec 4 2:12 AM 2007. In Personal, Spiritual, Thoughts, Fantasy, Weird, Hope, Life
    Honorable winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  32. Dear Lord,
    I have a friend who hurts today;
    by skay 30 lines, 2 comments, on Feb 15 9:13 PM. In Spiritual
    Honorable winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  33. Feelings fell as thoughts Crystal clear
    by Venugopal 25 lines, 2 comments, on Mar 9 11:55 PM. In Life, Thoughts
    Honorable winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]

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