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come the ones who feel whats not meant to be felt.((WARNING: harsh words are used on this page))

for those...who feels things...not meant for them to feel..

love. hate. discriminated. irredesant. on a pedastol.

in a well. on the moon. stuck in june. or july.

dont care. sexual. masturbastional. dreary.
judgemental. judged.


insane in the membrane. abused. high. cloaked. drunk at church.



got damn it, u get the picture. just give me emotion.




and heres some options for you people who feel like you need options but totaly shouldnt feel like u do...


[*] write in response to a song by

-kimya dawson
-regina spektor
-rilo kiley
-AFI
of course..write which song numb nuts...
[*] read a poem of mine. reply.

[*] post a picture. explaine.

[*] i have anxiety issues. and suicidal tendancys. write about fighting that. personification is your friend.

[*] tell me about leaving. from where. dont know dont care.


.Rul3z.
i dont care about cursing/cussing/whatever you call it.
i dont fucking care if you do it

write the emotion in the box damn it.

f u type like an idiot. i will not read it.



do not give me a piece of crap poem. i will dq it

write if its for over 18 audiences



and dudes. be creative. dullnest sucks.

and the only time a poem can be a long poem is when its great. if its not great. I WILL NOT FUCKING READ IT!!!

I DONT CARE IF THAT HURTS YOUR FEELINGS!! DONT BORE ME!!! GOD DAMN BORING ASS SHIT!!!

DAMN IT TO FUCKING HELL AND LET IT ROLL AROUND IN ROARING PITS OF FIRE!!!

ok im done about that part for now.

questions? direct them towards someone who cares....


.me.

ps> think im mean? then get off the contest. cause i tend to get meaner then this....


pps>i really am a nice girl and i really do care...i just hate people who dont take writing passionatly. cause i take lyfe passionatly. i try not to judge..but judging is a part of life.


!!!POINTS WILL BE ADDED WHEN YOU FUCKS PROVE YOU WANT/EARNED/DESERVE THEM!!!


Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on February 29, 2008
  • Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 200, Bronze: 100, Honorable mention: 1 people
  • Final notes:
    ok, semi-great writes. the people who won deserved it. and to the honorable mention, yours was great! it was just that some hit the nail harder. but DO NOT BE DISCOURAGED!!! you have it to be a great writer.

    and the third place, goes the same for you. you piece was so intelegent and inspiring.

    second, rocked my sox man.

    first. you won because i think you deserved it.


    ***note to all***

    these contest here on allpoetry are judge by what the judge believes. these are my thoughts not your ranking.


    -the sad farewell with SadEyes-

    aka

    .me.

Contest Winners

  1. Necrophiliac
    No call for restraints to your remnants
    Ah, Such a tonic for the obssessed
    by darkalesyse 14 lines, 2 comments, on Feb 16 3:22 AM 2008
    Gold trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  2. Love Me Every Day... No Quando te Pega las Pinche Ganas
    love me when youre ready to show everyone and say "This is my girlfriend and i love her"
    by BrokenSmiles09 24 lines, 1 comment, on Feb 26 3:04 PM 2008. In Personal
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  3. An ode to hypocracy of self.
    They say it is wrong
    'You live in a glass house'
    by k8fairy 26 lines, 4 comments, on Feb 16 2:27 PM 2008
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  4. Failed at Everything
    by Rockstar Bob 45 lines, 3 comments, on Feb 16 2:00 PM 2008. In Lyrics, Angst
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]

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  • BillyClyde
    February 16, 2008
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    Question

    and the only time a poem can be a long poem is when its great. if its not great. I WILL NOT FUCKING READ IT!!!

    If you don't read it, how will you know if it's great or not?.....just askin'


    • SignedSinerelyMe
      February 16, 2008
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      because

      great poems do not have sucky beginings.

      and also, i skim poems to see whats the subject and such. i read fast.

      i will only slow down and actualy read the poem its self if it is great.

      there is a different between comprehending and feelin' piece of art.


      if you cant make me feel, then you cant complete your part of the deal.

      doesnt mean your not a good poet, means your not meant for my contest. point blank.

      ~me.

      ps> any other questions?


  • Myrune
    February 16, 2008
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    hey you mispelled life >) <3 ya girl