so last time i got some really great poems
with some real emotion and i want more...
i want anger, pain, love, erotic, anything that will make me feel
good luck
with some real emotion and i want more...
i want anger, pain, love, erotic, anything that will make me feel
good luck
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on March 3, 2008
- Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 75, Bronze: 50, Honorable mention: 5 people
- Final notes: thank you guys so much for enetering
i had some GREAT POEMS
thank you so much
i'm sorry i didn't comment on everyone
my computer had a malfunction
any way
thank tou so much for entering
check out the winners!
Contest Winners
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Voices raging arguments
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I'm like a puppet, / With broken strings / He was the puppet master, / That made me like this. / you found me, / And fixed me up, / Gave me life, / Gave me joy. / Without another thought, /by Unearthed-Angel 33 lines, 4 comments, on Jul 10 6:36 AM 2007. In Life, Pain, Sad
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i know that if i tried to explain
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I wrote this as I thought of the general state of Mankind.by awannabepoet 33 lines, 14 comments, on Mar 14 9:30 AM 2007. In Life, Society, Angst Honorable mention
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Gold trophy winner
Silver trophy winner
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As I lik awake on my bedroom floor, i think of what life was like before, I think of all the times I said it was through, and how after every time i still loved you, and to this day i wish u could be happy with me, but Iby bloody wizard 2 0 lines, 1 comment, on Feb 6 9:17 PM 2008. In Sad• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I scream at this weakness
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I just with that you knew
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She sits alone in her room A shadow of herself• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I am handcuffed to your wishy washy heart / You have read me the Miranda rights, / The key is buried in your mind / I'm done with your rule• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Unpick the stitches [because I think I'm finally healed].
These nights are no longer sleeplessby Madison Mary 30 lines, 3 comments, on Feb 15 6:06 AM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I bury my face by night and hang my head by dayby Poetic Drug 98 lines, 7 comments, on Feb 9 9:30 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Loving you has been the greatest gift in my life... Sharing wonderful memories along the wayby mommanosbest32 21 lines, 1 comment, on Feb 14 5:46 PM 2008• Commented on by judge.
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Hold me in your arms,
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Your hand
Leaves my armby Isabel Cult 8 lines, 6 comments, on Jan 14 6:10 AM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I would love to say that I have found my home, But I don't think I have found it yet.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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I know she's off holding someone else, As I'm here drowning in her memory.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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 B is for BITCH, what became of me, living with you, I earned every letter exclusively……by mommanosbest32 36 lines, 1 comment, on Feb 16 8:25 PM 2008• Commented on by judge.
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Only once did the thing young girl speak:• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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by Ringside 31 lines, 37 comments, on Jan 9 9:02 AM 2008. In My own style, Pain, Life, Sadness, Metaphorical, Anger, Personal, Rhyming• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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this is about a person haven't seen in 2 years and yesterday i ran into this person by accident.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Roses of raven black Lay amongst a graveyard• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Hurt turned to anger,
anger for so long.by child of grace 35 lines, 4 comments, on Feb 15 12:09 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
She sits, she listens for the slight hum of the refrigerated silence.
& it crawls between her fingersby LucyLightning 25 lines, 7 comments, on Nov 27 12:34 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
somehow, the snow in my rearview mirror has set into my mind
& cascaded a static error in my eyesby LucyLightning 34 lines, 4 comments, on Nov 19 3:08 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
The words won’t come
I’m in a panicby My Souls Reflection 20 lines, 3 comments, on Feb 22 7:42 AM 2008. In Personal., Self, Dark, Depressed• Viewed by judge. -
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by Simply Simple 69 lines, 8 comments, on Feb 10 5:10 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Why is it that there is no refection of myself in your eyes?
I don't exist anymore; I become unworthy to your existance• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Some people have it easy,
a life given to them at birth,by Peace and Love942 120 lines, 10 comments, on Oct 9 12:51 PM 2008. In Life• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I tremble. My energy is spent.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Who is your Master?• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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You know where to begin
Unwrapping my clothesby Sweetangelgrace 21 lines, 2 comments, on Jan 21 5:03 AM 2008. In Love• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
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I did not refuse your rose;
sensing its sweetnessby z etoile 8 lines, 13 comments, on Feb 26 3:53 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
What do I want from you?
I want to be able to hold you and love you.by Condemd RyeZing 19 lines, 5 comments, on Feb 13 8:01 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
The phones rings,
A friend found dead…• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
His hands, they
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Would it be okay if I jump from these heights I’ve been sitting on the edge of breakdown so longby HidInTalent 40 lines, on Feb 27 9:45 PM 2008• Viewed by judge.
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Hey there, havn't talked to you in a while so I thought I'd enter your contest instead !
Hope you're doing ok, sweetie x x x -
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hey
actually i was just thinking about you
nice of you to come visit me
how is everything going for you these days?
i had a massive breakdown/ relapse a week ago
i exploded and hit my mom for touching me
i feel so bad now
then i left called a friend and got so smashed
then i took some
vikiten
i know that bad
i feel really stupid now
but other then that things are pretty good
how are things for you and that guy
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Ha, no I messed up too, so he's mad at me at the moment, he's gone to France now and we havn't spoken in a few days. Maybe when he gets back but until then...urgh, I hate this. But messing up once has kinda got it out of me for a bit, so I want to make it even more....(if that makes sense). Aside from that, I'm ok too, x x x
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pain?
Would an appology poem count?
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