This might be a little hard to explain so read carefully.
I want you to write a stream of consciousness. Not a poem, a stream of consciousness. Don't bother about serious editing and complex alliteration or internal rhyme, just write.
Take how you're feeling, or a thought, hell, a look someone gave you when you were getting the milk, and write.
It doesn't have to make complete sense, so long it's straight from your head and/or heart and into the pen.
If you can try and keep it under 30 lines that would be great.
Any questions?
Good.
Play nice.
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on March 10, 2008
- Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 150, Bronze: 75
- Final notes:
Sorry I took forever
Thanks guys
Contest Winners
- Error: Unable to find finalist item 3908595, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
- Error: Unable to find finalist item 3908967, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
- Error: Unable to find finalist item 3908617, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
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breath kisses candle
light flickers in wounding windby Peteskid 29 lines, 5 comments, on Feb 12 2:50 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. -
I watch the clock ticking
second by second,by sunflowerpoet 23 lines, 1 comment, on Feb 12 3:06 AM 2008. In Personal• Commented on by judge. -
by Kyo-N 30 lines, 1 comment, on Feb 12 3:41 AM 2008. In Depression, Contest, Lost in thought, Sadness, Anger, Emo, Angry, Depressed, Pain• Commented on by judge.
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He fucking looked at me & it made me feel so fucking small.
I'm sick & I'm tired of all of this belittling shit.• Commented on by judge. -
It was good to see him again. It had been way too long.• Commented on by judge.
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I step into yet another ready made life.
It is not my own life i live.• Commented on by judge. -
From this pen protrudes a stain.
The stain is yellow and bends to my liking.• Commented on by judge. -
because i can it does not matter how you say to me that you care. i have cared and i have loved, your mindless games plague my being. tortured and torn you attack and suppress you get me down and kick me till i bleed then youby jezz 0 lines, 3 comments, on Feb 13 12:42 AM 2008• Commented on by judge.
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So Beautiful yet so Foul; the bad-tempered bitch on the inside is only being camouflaged by the first-rate Miss America on the outside. Calm then again Explosive; one barrel of TNT anxious to go off is corked by the cradl• Commented on by judge.
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Why mind becomes arid Instead of vineyard• Commented on by judge.
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i can hear them outside my door they're laughing, playing• Commented on by judge.
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I don't even know if we'll ever see each other again
We both are graduating and yet there's so much,by Then 15 lines, 1 comment, on Feb 25 1:12 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. -
by Balldinger 13 lines, 4 comments, on Feb 25 2:53 PM 2008• Commented on by judge.
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A stream of consciousness, Not a poem.• Commented on by judge.
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Watch it My loneliness only revealing it self in typed wordsby Rosser 16 lines, 3 comments, on Feb 25 7:11 PM 2008• Commented on by judge.
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He loves his gym class on Monday afternoon,
but one of the teachers comes over to meby celticwarrior 32 lines, 7 comments, on Feb 25 8:58 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. -
by Katrina Armour 10 lines, 2 comments, on Feb 25 9:13 PM 2008• Commented on by judge.
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The devious nature of my hacking lungs deviate subtle thought as to what the discipline of the glass door intrigues. Locally my anesthesia skills have been unparalleled while the festering jealousy of my contrare comes steppi• Commented on by judge.
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ooo wow I think I'll enter this one
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Coolness
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bookmarking!
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i might enter.....might....
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Don't do that!
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I entered before I died *lol*
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Well that's ok then
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okay, I just HAD TO give you this link ...

it's basically how I feel every day, just the last line that could differ sometimes like: where would I hide his body if I chopped him up (when my boss is irritating me) or what the hell is that green thing on the wall there?
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me and my friend actually both write in composition books through this way. you write whatever is coming to your head, without thinking about what you are writing, it doesnt matter if it makes sense, as long asits what you feel. and no names or dates allowed.
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I use to do it a lot a few years ago. I'd end up with scribbles all over the pages and bits and pieces everywhere. But it was calming
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shame on me...i entered
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I'd be offended if you didn't
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-removes my entry-
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Don't you dare!!!
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Ooohh, I really like this idea :-]
Awesome!!
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Maybe back soon...
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the anticipation of the judging is killing me!!!
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Thank you so much for the honor of silver and for allowing me a place to let it out lol.


Congrats to ALL!
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hey was there a gold trophy winner on this competition, because it is not showing up?
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Gold was to a piece by Sulfane if I remember
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