In 31 words or less I want you to try and make me so depressed I want to kill myself.
Sounds a little wierd but just go with it alright?
Please, please, please don't write about lost love, it doesn't make me sad, it just makes me want to hit you over the head with a shovel.
Metaphor and imagery are your friends, love them.
Be inventive,
write well.
Play nice.
And no Chantell, I'm not emo. I could hear that thought from here
Sounds a little wierd but just go with it alright?
Please, please, please don't write about lost love, it doesn't make me sad, it just makes me want to hit you over the head with a shovel.
Metaphor and imagery are your friends, love them.
Be inventive,
write well.
Play nice.
And no Chantell, I'm not emo. I could hear that thought from here
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on February 27, 2008
- Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 150, Bronze: 75
- Final notes:
I went for the pieces that had the biggest emotional impact on me.
Thank you
Contest Winners
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Silver trophy winner
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Living with an eye towards eternity,by Elrenia 26 lines, 10 comments, on Feb 11 9:05 AM 2008• Commented on by judge.
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by spiritualangel 27 lines, 1 comment, on Feb 11 9:57 AM 2008. In Depression, Sad, Dark, Thoughts, Contest• Commented on by judge.
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Strange place; this city.by poetesswiththemost 10 lines, 1 comment, on Feb 11 10:03 AM 2008• Commented on by judge.
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Dedicate everything to your life, put it all towards nothing at all....by LostInTheDream 15 lines, 3 comments, on Feb 11 10:14 AM 2008• Commented on by judge.
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Please, please, please don't write about lost love, it doesn't make me sad, it just makes me want to hit you over the head with a shovel.
i agree with you on that bit
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Good to know I'm not the only one.
There's only so many times I can read about how 'they broke my heart' before I just want to slap them and tell them to move on (though I know it's not that simple).
Jaded, who me?
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lol like the people who continuously write about how someone has made their heart whole and how they cant live without them then
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That's when I break out the cyanide and ask if they want a cup of tea
Love is a wonderful thing, but it doesn't mean every freakin poem has to be about how wonderful they are. -
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so glad you agree lol but then i write too many dark ones
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Hahah You're telling me!
I got called the next Sylvia Plath the other day (though I have no desire to stick my head in an oven I think that means I write a few too many dark pieces) 
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but dark pieces rock because none are the same all have different images and scenes and btw this is for you
http://allpoetry.com/poem/show/3905013
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Oh no you ain't alone. If you need another person to be happy what exactly are ya offering them if on ya own you are a misery. Have yet to see evidence that 'love', more like the concept of being in love, solves depression
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Don't get me wrong, there are one or two poets who write love poems that I like (hell some I even love). But I don't want to wade through the cliche crap to find more.
But you're exactly right, you need to be content in yourself to be in a relationship that will work. Or at least that's how I've found it to work. But hey, I'm not exactly relationship queen.
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please don't write about lost love, it doesn't make me sad, it just makes me want to hit you over the head with a shovel.
I have a shovel if you want any help
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Naw that's alright, I have a shovel, and a pick axe if they really don't get the hint
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haha - how have you been?
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Not too bad,
a little 'blah' feeling but nothing major.
In need of coffee though
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Haha - get the coffee - get me some as well
I've got some homework - and my mom is here
for a week, but hey - good to wake up in the morning and someone next to you actually makes it feel like home. -
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Aww yay
Hi Chandni's mum!!
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ooo - I'm the type that goes for 2
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You sound like me
only i've drank so much coffee it's for the taste rather than anything else now. -
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lol
But hey, even if it's just for the taste - the taste alone is all that is needed
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wow I am beyond speechless...I don't actually know what to say but thank you and give you a big hug!
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