BROKEN HEARTED

Contest is Over

• Contest was judged on March 13
• Rewards: Gold: 300
• Final notes:
  Congrats to all

Contest Winners

1. "On Holidays"

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   by BuriedTreasures 27 lines, 20 comments, on Jan 30 9:45 AM. In Love, Sad, Life, Thoughts, Personal, Lyrics
   Gold trophy winner

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2. Ohne Dich (Without You)

   Bitter The cold guts me

   by andywontdie 49 lines, 1 comment, on Feb 15 2:38 PM. In Sad, Contest, Love, Pain, Personal
   Bronze trophy winner

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3. Your Window.

   He’s not meant to come,
   He’s not meant to return,

   by Charli 94 lines, 2 comments, on Jan 27 2:28 AM

   • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
4. Song of Truths

   Sing me a song,
   one for us.

   by soshoryu 76 lines, 3 comments, on Jan 22 9:32 PM. In Personal, Lost love, My life, Friendship, Longing, Pain

   • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
5. Fading Heartbeat

   Here i am left sat alone in darkness and a silence
   I think of her, the consequence a self harming act of violence

   by nobody knows me 28 lines, on Oct 21 1:59 PM 2007. In heartbreak

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6. Abandoned

   Helping Hand
   The pain he caused, he'll never know,

   by xDamagedx 63 lines, 4 comments, on Dec 15 5:31 PM 2007. In Abuse, Love, Pain, Personal, Sad, Abandonment, other

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7. Reminiscing

   by TabbyJoy 46 lines, 25 comments, on Jan 17 10:42 AM. In Love, Angst, Adult

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Entries [60]

• Stronger

  You lied, you cheated, wore me down,
  Gave me nothing but grief,

  by mystic-angel 28 lines, 15 comments, on Aug 24 3:18 PM 2007. In Personal, Sad, My life

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• Hanging Hearts

  Hanging hearts, we're hanging hearts,
  in a sick romantic suicide.

  by High-on-Death 45 lines, 19 comments, on Jun 13 3:49 PM 2006. In Lyrics, Personal, Dark

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• Again And Again You Weep.

  So what do you see now? What do you look for now?

  by Charli 78 lines, 1 comment, on Jan 27 2:20 AM

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• The Defeat

  Darkest of all nights

  by BeautifulVampire 28 lines, 1 comment, on Feb 10 5:20 PM. In Contemporary, Contest, Dark, Fantasy, Hope, Life, Love

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• six feet under

  your sour kiss on my lips. your bitter words in this letter.

  by xxslicedwristxx 29 lines, 3 comments, on Feb 10 6:44 PM. In Dark, Sad, Pain, Death, Loss, Lost love

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• No Love!

  Love as clean as the fresh fallen snow?
  No…it’s tired before it got a place to land

  by Kathleen a Nazarene 20 lines, 1 comment, on Feb 10 7:26 PM. In Life, Love, Pain, Personal, Sad, Society, Thoughts

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• Wednesday.

  Every Wednesday, I remember that day,

  by Charli 30 lines, 1 comment, on Feb 10 5:22 PM

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• Addiction

  Contest Entry

  by poppa 38 lines, 14 comments, on Feb 8 5:13 AM. In Love, Dark, Pain

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• Secret Love

  Hiding your feelings for fear of rejection. Thinking everyone is better then you,

  by Lil Ma 6969- 23 lines, 2 comments, on Jan 22 7:07 PM. In Personal, Love, My life, Romance, Thoughts, Life, My own style

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• Then and Now

  '.'

  by Mojave Moon 26 lines, 12 comments, on Jan 19 11:55 PM. In Personal, Thoughts, Noguest

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• Deceived

  by Mojave Moon 7 lines, 14 comments, on Feb 2 11:23 PM. In Personal, Thoughts, Dark

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• Wings Of Dust

  by Mojave Moon 38 lines, 49 comments, on Jan 13 10:08 PM 2005. In Dark, Pain, Personal, Sad, Thoughts, Noguest

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• Empty

  Empty seat / I sit with an empty seat / an empty seat across from me / filled only with loneliness / I'm filled only with loneliness / with

  by Forest Maiden 22 lines, 5 comments, on Jul 24 9:01 PM 2007. In Dark, Love

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• February

  My crippled heartbreak lullaby,
  wish I knew the reason why,

  by XXVampireeyesXX 26 lines, 10 comments, on Feb 2 11:34 AM

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• The Day After

  Traces of the tear's, upon a soaked pillow.
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  by WhisperingSpirit 13 lines, 26 comments, on Sep 25 6:08 PM 2006. In Sad

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• branded

  by tigress3737 14 lines, on Dec 21 3:23 PM 2007

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• Fearless

  What happened to cause you such pain? Why can't I take it away?

  by TabbyJoy 33 lines, 9 comments, on Feb 11 3:55 PM

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• A Man That Never Was

  She promises to be happy and believe in herself, she promises it to me in the lonely night that spins without stars. I hope she keeps that promise if I disappear into some sad void, especially if I become a man to forge

  by Uriah Hamilton 0 lines, 1 comment, on Feb 10 5:45 PM. In Love, Sad

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• I'm Already Gone

  We were together, but not really,
  & then you left me.

  by BoysxandxRedBulls 48 lines, 4 comments, on Feb 10 6:21 PM. In Love, Personal, Pain, Sad, Romance

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• You Broke My Heart

  That day a year ago,
  You ripped my heart into tiny pieces.

  by KokoluvsDaniel 29 lines, 11 comments, on Dec 8 11:14 PM 2007. In Life, Love, Personal, Pain, Thoughts, Teen issues, Lost love, Longing, My life

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• To have loved and lost...

  You got to have your cake and eat it too
  You left me hurting, broken, and bruised
  

  by Muchacha 29 lines, on Feb 11 11:47 PM. In Angst, Life, Love, Personal, Sad, Thoughts

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• We Will Be One

  You told me goodnight But now I see

  by xDamagedx 29 lines, 4 comments, on Jan 20 4:12 PM. In Life, Love, Pain, Personal, Sad, Loss

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• What Would You Say

  What would you say If I told you I love you

  by xDamagedx 25 lines, 5 comments, on Jan 15 9:56 AM. In Life, Love, Pain, Personal, Sad, Thoughts, Guilt

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• Wasted

  No longer alive, just a token.

  by poppyday 24 lines, 9 comments, on Jan 2 7:09 PM. In Life, Love, Sad

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• Return to Sender

  I received something
  Disheartening in the mail

  by andywontdie 38 lines, 5 comments, on Jan 25 1:27 PM. In Life, Other, Pain, Personal, Sad

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• Duplex

  Infatuation One lie plus another

  by andywontdie 26 lines, 3 comments, on Feb 15 2:31 PM. In Angst, Contest, Life, Love, Pain, Other, Personal

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• should it be good

  I turn and walk away
  as I do I slowly say

  by Bgant84 19 lines, 3 comments, on Feb 13 6:06 PM

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• Hearts Abandon

  How can I do this, what am I to think? you pull away, yet say you are fine,

  by Carolina Moon 18 lines, 1 comment, on Feb 13 9:48 AM. In Love, Pain, Sad

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• barely beating

  shamed
  at being open
  to your love

  by katzmeow13 44 lines, 7 comments, on Dec 5 8:13 PM 2007. In Personal, Love, Thoughts, Sad, Pain, Lost in thought, My life, Longing, Sadness, Loss

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• Wish

  In the absence of love theres nothing worth fighting for So I fight for you

  by KillerXxXCupcake 9 lines, 1 comment, on Feb 17 5:51 PM

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• Love

  I wonder if we'll smile in our coffins while loved ones
  Mourn the day, the absence of our faces, living, laughing,

  by shadowthedark1 24 lines, 2 comments, on Jan 25 9:09 PM 2006. In Love

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• Losing Control

  Dig deep within the depths of your pain,
  Can you forgive this lady, burdened with shame?

  by LovesStrength 18 lines, 1 comment, on Feb 17 3:57 PM. In pain, sorrow, hurt, affair

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• Pre Valentines Day Blues

  feelings that a better left undefined,

  by wohadreambig 32 lines, on Feb 15 11:44 PM. In Personal, Contest, Thoughts

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• Letting Go

  You're still the song that sounds in my soul,
  You're still a dream, so far, no longer real,

  by abeautifuldisaster 41 lines, 4 comments, on Oct 3 3:37 PM 2006. In Lyrics, Love, Personal, Sad

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• Just me

  You see that? Thats what I get!

  by nevernoticedpoet 32 lines, 2 comments, on Feb 19 12:38 PM

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• The Edge

  The minutes of longing are turning to days,
  The rain has entwined with her tears.

  by abeautifuldisaster 26 lines, 4 comments, on Sep 2 6:27 AM 2007. In Love, Tragedy, Death

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• The fishing pole

  Salt water creeping from your eyes
  As you throw out the string on the fishing pole

  by a dozenglassroses 5 lines, 10 comments, on Sep 28 5:27 PM 2007. In Pain

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• Words Are Like Bullets

  by dstreetpoet 32 lines, 4 comments, on Feb 4 5:34 AM. In Lyrics, Dark, Love, Pain, Personal, Thoughts

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• Wisps of May Have Beens

  I grasp at wisps
  of what
  may have been.

  by Remembrance Lane 64 lines, 1 comment, on Apr 11 9:13 PM 2007. In Personal, Life, Thoughts

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• till today do us part

  a perfect union
  bound in a promise

  by PrInCeSsOfRoCk 44 lines, 1 comment, on Sep 28 3:25 AM 2007. In Life, Love, Pain, Personal, Sad

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• Lost Without You

  We had everything We ever wanted

  by PrInCeSsOfRoCk 43 lines, 8 comments, on Nov 1 3:10 AM 2007. In Life, Love, Pain, Sad, Loss, Longing

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• I'm Sewing Myself Together because I feel like Falling apart

  I'm slowly sewing myself together with tainted thread You'll find out soon enough that inside I am dead

  by xToxicxCupcakesx 69 lines, 8 comments, on Jan 31 10:50 AM

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• Your Sweet Oblivion

  The look in my eyes / You’ll never decipher / And I only want / To talk to you / The touch of your hand / Or your lips gently on my cheek / Sends the lightest glow / To my face / As I try to ignore / The blu

  by PrInCeSsOfRoCk 55 lines, 1 comment, on Jul 9 6:19 PM 2007. In Life, Love, Personal, Sad

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• Untouchable

  Do you know that when you kissed me It felt so very right

  by cutiful 49 lines, on Jan 29 3:57 PM. In Love, Life, Hope

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• A Tribute To A Widdow

  Soft murmurs lulling me to sleep,
  list to the call of the lonely Widdow.

  by poetic mairin 18 lines, 1 comment, on Feb 15 9:32 AM. In personal, pain, love, other, contest

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• Déjà Vu

  Once I was in love.

  by soshoryu 90 lines, 2 comments, on Dec 14 11:35 PM 2007. In Personal, Love, Thoughts, Lost love, Weird, My life

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• loves' shadow

  watching the sky fade to dust, my thoughts....

  by DeadDestiny 30 lines, 2 comments, on Feb 16 8:17 AM. In love reality, dark pains

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• Scorned

  Peering into your eyes I had found love. / It was as though the earth stood still; / with Cupid hovering above my remains. / Random memorie

  by mars 12 lines, 6 comments, on Jun 10 6:37 PM 2007. In Love, Angst

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Comments

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  vampyz
  February 10
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  i always love heartbroken contests! heheee
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  Calligraphy
  February 13
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  Jeez, there's already a ton of entries...
  
  Bookmarked. Question: Can we submit a sort of "stream of consciousness" thing as our poem? (If you don't know what I mean, my poem "I'm an Underage Bartender" is an example.) Thanks. <3
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  DAMSELx
  February 15
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  Stream of Consciousness

  Yes! Stream of consciousness is definitely accepted. All I have to say is anything you guys think could take the win, go right ahead and enter...I'm down to read it all !!
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  wohadreambig
  February 15
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  Thanks for making this contest i hope you like what i enter.
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  DeadDestiny
  February 16
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  my poem

  i am actaully a 12 year old girl....mature enough lyk, but....what did u seriously think bout ma poem? cuz, it inspired me so much when i read it through, as it shows EXACTLY how i feel about this man....who is gay,,,anywayz, lol i really hope you all lyked it. xo

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