I want to know how you feel about whats going on in the world.
Good bad and ugly poems are welcomed.
RULES!!!!
1. RHYME PEOPLE RHYME!!!
2. Use words that are real, and make sense.
Good bad and ugly poems are welcomed.
RULES!!!!
1. RHYME PEOPLE RHYME!!!
2. Use words that are real, and make sense.
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on February 24, 2008
- Rewards: Gold: 300
- Final notes: The poem that I chose as winner really made me imagine this in my mind, their words are very real, and they are actually very personal as you can read in their notes.
In a comment somebody had written.."Wow, although this is short, the emotion is very strong, something you can see in your minds eye and feel like a strong ache in your heart."
I have to agree.
Hosting this contest was a huge eye opener, sometimes I feel as if I should feel guilty about feeling the ways I do since I had the gift of being born, and a chance to live life, but now I see that there are a lot of us out there that not only see the good, but also the bad, and the worst.
Congrats to all of you for being able to express such true feelings in such few words. badddgirl
Contest Winners
- Error: Unable to find finalist item 3913715, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
-
Greedy men, keep the world, in pain, panic and fear.• Commented on by judge. [remove]
-
Dust gathers around beaten skies and smoke withers unseeing eyesby Lavender Butterfly 6 lines, 3 comments, on Feb 9 11:49 PM 2008. In Society, Life
Bronze trophy winner
• Commented on by judge. [remove] -
Starvation, Wars, pestilence and Poverty
Destruction of our planet, reality!• Commented on by judge. [remove] -
glowing embers burn the sky
hatred fills the planet's lie• Commented on by judge. [remove]
Silver trophy winner
Entries [20]
1 - 20 of 20
-
• Commented on by judge.
-
Enter the cold dark future, The sun died long ago.• Commented on by judge.
-
Whose Going Save The Planet From The Pinnacle of Creation.by Eloquentphantom 4 lines, 4 comments, on Feb 9 10:19 PM 2008. In Society• Commented on by judge.
-
It is really a jungle what we are living in!• Commented on by judge.
-
• Commented on by judge.
-
You make me so happy You so make me smileby BillyClyde 4 lines, 2 comments, on Feb 9 11:22 PM 2008• Commented on by judge.
-
Satanic stratus benighted the world
An era of destruction unfurled• Commented on by judge. -
Crowded streets of lifeless faces,
jockeying between their empty places.• Commented on by judge. -
Between sterile earth, immense sky,
Loom crest the heaven’s brow.• Commented on by judge. -
I hear nothing but silence As the youth of Americaby EmotionlessStranger 9 lines, 1 comment, on Feb 21 7:56 PM 2008• Commented on by judge.
-
Troublesome ways and unbearable days, confusions sways then criminal’s getaway.• Commented on by judge.
-
Jesus, come save the day
Too much hurt to downplayby Daughter of The King 11 lines, 1 comment, on Feb 22 7:23 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. -
Learn, spurn, yearn, return, earn. Interrelate, date, mate, gestate, procreate.by Epistomolus 4 lines, 3 comments, on Feb 22 8:47 PM 2008• Commented on by judge.
Add a comment
Comments
-
Thank you! Thank you! I really enjoyed entering... thank you for your kind words,
glad you enjoyed your contest
Adriana
Adding your comment:
