ADDING MORE POINTS AND TROPHIES!!!!!!!
THIS IS GOING TO BE A LONGER CONTEST.
OK.... so you know what to do.... give me a dark prewritten poem....
NO CUTTING
NO SUICIDE
NO EROTICA
NO CUSSING
I will comment on ALL poems... lol, yes that will be difficult..... but i will....and if I don't my cousin will. She is one of the judges.
***While commenting I will tell you this... if I do not like your poem (Which would me that it REALLY SUCKS because I'm usually very difficult to make me hate a poem).... I will not tell you because its rude to do so because everyone works hard to write what I will do is tell you what can make it better. Every poem can be MADE good... if the comment seems mean... sorry but oh well.... don't get mad at my comments.. I try to be nice...*****
I might add points if I get GREAT entrys..... make the YOUR BEST PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!
sad poetry is welcomed..... make me feel how you feel.... make me sad make me angry....
HAVE FUN~
HINT HINT HINT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
SPELL CHECK IS YOUR FRIEND!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
!!!!!!!!!!!
THIS IS GOING TO BE A LONGER CONTEST.
OK.... so you know what to do.... give me a dark prewritten poem....
NO CUTTING
NO SUICIDE
NO EROTICA
NO CUSSING
I will comment on ALL poems... lol, yes that will be difficult..... but i will....and if I don't my cousin will. She is one of the judges.
***While commenting I will tell you this... if I do not like your poem (Which would me that it REALLY SUCKS because I'm usually very difficult to make me hate a poem).... I will not tell you because its rude to do so because everyone works hard to write what I will do is tell you what can make it better. Every poem can be MADE good... if the comment seems mean... sorry but oh well.... don't get mad at my comments.. I try to be nice...*****
I might add points if I get GREAT entrys..... make the YOUR BEST PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!
sad poetry is welcomed..... make me feel how you feel.... make me sad make me angry....
HAVE FUN~
HINT HINT HINT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
SPELL CHECK IS YOUR FRIEND!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
!!!!!!!!!!!
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on March 5, 2008
- Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 100, Bronze: 50, Honorable mention: 4 people
- Final notes: Thank you so much for bearing with me throughout this contest. I tried to make sure that I commented on everyone's piece... If I did acciedently missed your piece... please IM me and I will comment on it.
I want to thank the pre-lim finalists... it was difficult to choose the winners...
~lumin
Contest Winners
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He's deranged and demented,
He breaks bones for fun.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] - Error: Unable to find finalist item 3959283, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
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Hello Chaotic sounds of silence• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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by luna-midnight 14 lines, 11 comments, on Feb 21 6:19 AM 2008
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In my dreams, You are still aliveby HeartagramGirl00 60 lines, 7 comments, on Feb 1 11:38 AM 2008. In suicide• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
Gold trophy winner
Silver trophy winner
Honorable mention
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Met you just last summer. We fought right at the start.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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The morning sun kisses my chest
Only minutes left of lifeby wyldedarko 25 lines, 3 comments, on Dec 13 3:02 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
every day i awake
to look foward to nothing at allby SecondStorySuicide 14 lines, 5 comments, on Jan 20 8:49 PM 2008. In Sadness, Depression, Dark, Pain, Depressed, Fantasy, Lost in thought, Emo• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Written with a pen
Sealed with the kiss• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
The eyes of subjugation now are quit,
searching orbs of tribulation lulled• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Dieing to breathe- Conscience lashed with unbridled force,• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Every thought piles itself to add to gravity
and gravity divides itself between the ground and me.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
So once my twisted path to Hell is paved,
I'll comfort you, my son, beyond the grave.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
So I made up a childhood for myself...• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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drunk and gone
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She is the empty shell
Of everything we'd hoped
She's our darling angelby Rogue 49 lines, 5 comments, on Dec 12 3:56 AM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
The wind is blowing,
the trees are cracking,by Hope Angel 42 lines, 9 comments, on Nov 26 7:58 PM 2007. In Pain• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
piano man
he sits, aloneby kill the lights 39 lines, 10 comments, on Dec 28 3:38 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
All those things you did,
I just wiped them away,• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
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little girls in pink was it you long ago• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Tighten your lips
Don’t sing tonight• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Horrid laughter fills the room.
Scarlet droplets fall from a mangled body,• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I can see myself at the edge
Looking down into this holeby Dragonshadow 24 lines, 1 comment, on Jan 7 1:28 AM 2007. In Dark• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
A somber poem that is also anti-suicidal. it's not a poem about my life, but is written of empatheticly drawn emotion.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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by PrInCeSsOfRoCk 71 lines, 8 comments, on Jan 3 7:18 PM 2008. In Dark, Life, Pain, Personal, Sad, Depression, Self, noguest• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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dripping viridian sweatby ShadowsMidnightRose 4 lines, 13 comments, on Feb 12 4:36 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Twisted is a place, I am sure we have all been.
distorted views of our lives, flashing before our eyes.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Porcelain Face
Porcelain breaks• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Was every word you said to me / Calculated precicely / To get you what you wanted? / Was it all just a game? / When you would tease me, / Wby grapefruite 29 lines, 10 comments, on Jul 25 7:30 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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They never understood my ideas, Never wanted to lend an ear.by XChrisUnknownX 23 lines, 4 comments, on Feb 8 6:52 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Darkness is slowly taking over, Just keep wishing that I wasn’t sober,• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Under the knife to feel beautiful
The slaughter of my face• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Your heart's not what I wish to see, therefor you need not hide it / The worst I'd do is run you through then rip it out and bite it. / The• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Just make sure no one finds me
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This is the day of reckoning
your time to die• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
by foreverxnow 15 lines, 5 comments, on Feb 4 7:38 PM 2008. In Lost in thought• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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From his lake of fire the grim reaper is taunting
He has sent his army of demons to apprehend me
Those wraiths of my past are forever haby LanguishedLad 28 lines, 15 comments, on Feb 5 1:51 AM 2008. In Dark• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
don't be foolish your anguish
is not enough sadistic bastardby jezz 24 lines, 8 comments, on Feb 19 8:09 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
A thunderstorm of feelings, storms that bring it out,by Poetess12 13 lines, 2 comments, on Feb 3 12:44 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Its pathetic really; all these thoughts in my mind.by NeverSayAddiction 49 lines, 2 comments, on Jan 23 7:18 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Afoot again,
to fading flight of jetby Carole Dudley 65 lines, 43 comments, on Feb 11 2:15 AM 2002. In Angst• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
by ultimate beluga 91 lines, 18 comments, on Jan 15 4:14 AM 2008. In Lyrics• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I can forgive you For slapping me• Commented on by judge.
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Today I am turning 15
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Today I finally surrender to despair
In the dark I've cried for so long,by Selene Tremere 23 lines, 10 comments, on Nov 8 4:07 PM 2007. In Love, Pain, Personal, Sad, Thoughts, Weird, My own style, Lost in thought, My• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I have time to observe his shadowy figure
Being washed away in the thick marooned fog flood
Down and around the banking corner, gone from• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Is a suicide poem okay if it is anti-suicidal but still dark?
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can we enter more than once? because i have 2 that would work for this contest
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Thank you so very much for reading this with an open mind and understanding. This trophy means a lot to me on this piece I wrote!
Thanks again!
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hey luminescence, thanks for the shiny green cup and for hosting this wonderful contest!!!
Wyatt
xxx
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