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Pre Written Rhyme

Give me one of your best pre-written rhymes that has never won so much as an honorable mention.

The key word here is rhyme: It must rhyme ... it can be any rhyming form but it must rhyme!

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on February 5, 2008
  • Rewards: Gold: 500, Silver: 300, Bronze: 100, Honorable mention: 3 people
  • Final notes:
    Congratulations to the winners. A hearty thank you to all of you that took the time to enter.
    That's what makes contests fun. Hopefully I'll see you in the next contest.

Contest Winners

  1. All the Mosquitos Committed Suicide
    If you are ever asked about this on a test,
    This is the answer the people like best:
    by Man of Harlech 41 lines, 9 comments, on Jul 2 1:39 PM 2005. In Dark
    Gold trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  2. Telephone Rings
    Telephone rings
    In the hall below.
    In my room
    by quietmonster 45 lines, 5 comments, on Jul 17 4:17 PM 2007. In Avoidance, Denial, Tension, Anxiety
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  3. Ahoy, Me Tarties!
    by paperparadox 73 lines, 7 comments, on Oct 5 5:32 AM 2007. In Humor
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  4. Error: Unable to find finalist item 3729412, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  5. Questions
    Why is it that I came here,
    and what's kept me coming back?
    by The Madman 68 lines, 16 comments, on Dec 16 4:10 PM 2007
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  6. Time Heals All But The Soul
    by LadyDementia 25 lines, 11 comments, on Nov 16 2:35 PM 2007. In Contemporary, Dark, Sad, Personal
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]

Entries [23]

1 - 23 of 23
  • Coasting dead in space
    Our dilithium crystals had all melted down,
    40,000 miles from the nearest space town.
    by Griswold 28 lines, 9 comments, on Nov 24 4:36 PM 2007. In Contest, Fantasy, Humor, Silly
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • The most exquisite kiss
    by sapphireangelwings 49 lines, 7 comments, on Feb 1 12:53 PM 2008. In Love, semi-erotica
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • Michelle, My Belle
    We all tend to dwell on the past,
    Always remembering how it was a blast.
    by Kiarra 10 lines, 2 comments, on Jan 28 11:46 PM 2008. In Life, Friendship
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • your hands
    Beating bleeding
    pulsing breathing
    by bones7 13 lines, 24 comments, on Feb 3 11:33 PM 2008
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • Divine Service
    Concinnity of rapid motion in balance and proportion,
    round the ballroom, like the synchronized frequency
    by A60sMan 13 lines, 9 comments, on Nov 2 8:57 PM 2007
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • Lady in Waiting
    Graceful in a sage green suit;
    matching pumps and bag.
    by Freed by Mercy 36 lines, 28 comments, on Nov 29 6:58 PM 2007
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • Beauty Of A Flower
    Beauty is a flower
    that blooms successfully,
    by Poetess12 20 lines, 3 comments, on Jan 18 1:08 PM 2008
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • Internal Dreams
    Empty eyes and hollow skin.
    Expressions mask the voice within.
    by shadow-cry 24 lines, 8 comments, on Nov 18 8:58 AM 2007. In Dark, Death, Suicide
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • Prettier Sonnet
    by Scion 17 lines, 2 comments, on Dec 3 12:51 AM 2007. In Lust, Marriage, Life, Love
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • Snow Day
    The snow is softly falling
    In the darkness of the night
    by Shining for You 18 lines, 4 comments, on Feb 2 3:03 PM 2008. In Nature, Thoughts
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • On Broken Wings
    by Legend 56 lines, 26 comments, on Oct 17 10:37 AM 2006. In Other
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • Quietly Comes The Night
    The day is quickly fading away
    by Puppydog 19 lines, 22 comments, on Jan 15 3:15 PM 2008. In Life, Personal, Thoughts
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • The fun with Nipples
    I have a pair of mountains
    that rise from peak to peak,
    by volcaniclastic 7 lines, 9 comments, on Jan 16 5:16 PM 2008. In Humor, Weird
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • The Elderly
    The / Elderly / Deserve / Dignity / Not / Malignity / By / Society / NHS / Trust / Spells / Disgust / Jobs / Rushed / Kept / Hush / Old-Age
    by Scrunter 43 lines, 14 comments, on Jun 13 4:33 PM 2007. In Personal, Thoughts, Angry, Contest
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • I Love You
    With each year that passes by / I look at you with awe / Your loving smile, your gentle ways / Just makes me love you more / Expressive eyes, cheeky grin / Warm wet lips on wanton skin / I choose with
    by Deceits Tears 24 lines, 9 comments, on Apr 25 9:06 PM 2007. In Love
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite

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  • Man of Harlech silver member
    February 5, 2008
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    Thank you for the gold. This poem has languished for such a long time because of its length. I am glad that I found someone who could appreciate it.


  • paperparadox silver member
    February 8, 2008
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    Thank You!

    What a lovely find ~ a contest allowing Pre-writes another airing...always a pleasure to drag one out and dust it off ~ and even more so to be awarded a Bronze trophy!

    Many thanks, abear!