This is number 3 in my (Blank) you... series.
Yeah..so moods crapola again..but hey I'll get over it again...right?
Anyway for this one I want poems on a love that was full of Pain/tears/deceit/hiding.
A)Have you ever felt hidden in your relationship like they were ashamed about you?
B.) Have you ever found out something but then been told a different story which has left you thinking?
C) Have you felt belittled in your relationship?
D) Been treated like you was a fool and didn't know what you was on about?
E) ever listened to those I love you forever, I'll die without you...but been left broken and torn anyway?
F) Been in a difficult situation where you didn't know which story to believe or what to do?
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I'm kinda depressed...so make me cry or hate...one or the other...points will increase
Yeah..so moods crapola again..but hey I'll get over it again...right?
Anyway for this one I want poems on a love that was full of Pain/tears/deceit/hiding.
A)Have you ever felt hidden in your relationship like they were ashamed about you?
B.) Have you ever found out something but then been told a different story which has left you thinking?
C) Have you felt belittled in your relationship?
D) Been treated like you was a fool and didn't know what you was on about?
E) ever listened to those I love you forever, I'll die without you...but been left broken and torn anyway?
F) Been in a difficult situation where you didn't know which story to believe or what to do?
PLEASE PUT OPTION IN AUTHORS NOTES
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I'm kinda depressed...so make me cry or hate...one or the other...points will increase
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on February 4, 2008
- Rewards: Gold: 300
- Final notes: all emotional and deep
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those little "I love you"s• Commented on by judge. [remove]
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I need to remind myself
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You tell me one thing;
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I'll be there, When the storm clouds encircle you.by Poco Loco 31 lines, 3 comments, on Jan 31 12:56 PM 2008• Viewed by judge.
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by alandriel1138 44 lines, 4 comments, on Jan 31 7:44 AM 2008. In Personal• Commented on by judge.
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Gotta say: Oh, poor little guy...
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Symbols how I feel
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Oh, wow...
I'm sorry...
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Bookmarking, see if my muse allows me to capture your attention
Best of luck to all who enter
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Although i've never actually felt this i seem to write pretty realistic emotions in thsi sort of poem so count me in!
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