Enter as many times as you want:
Prewritten poetry under 30 lines
as long as I
Haven't commented them yet.
And yes, I will comment them all.
Points might increase - depends on how much entries I get and how good they are.
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on February 21, 2008
- Rewards: Gold: 500, Silver: 100, Bronze: 50
- Final notes: PHEW!
congratulations to the winners. Sorry it took a while but I commented on all of the poems
Some managed to enter something I have already commented on before - I kicked them myself
Some couldn't wait until I got to their poem so they've kicked themselves
Some entered poetry with more than 30 lines - and here I mean, come on! learn to count. I haven't kicked you, I haven't said it in my comment but you will probably know who you are.
Thank you all for entering, I hope to see you in my next contest(s)
Leander
Contest Winners
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by Celticmoon 16 lines, 14 comments, on Jan 30 7:19 AM 2008. In Personal, Thoughts
Gold trophy winner
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- Error: Unable to find finalist item 3845089, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
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by Hulali 7 lines, 7 comments, on Jan 16 8:57 PM 2007. In Contemporary• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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It was cold
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I could let myself get caught in the tide
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Lights of hell
shining through perfect moss eyesby ShadowsMidnightRose 15 lines, 17 comments, on Feb 6 7:11 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] - Error: Unable to find finalist item 3887595, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
Silver trophy winner
Entries [108]
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by ilovemygrape 17 lines, 12 comments, on Dec 29 8:18 PM 2007. In Thoughts• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Like a bridge it has two sides…
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by MuffinTree 26 lines, 8 comments, on Aug 14 7:14 AM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I’m more or less a walking hazard sign Every step I take gets me that much closerby wanderingstarlet 27 lines, 3 comments, on Nov 14 10:37 AM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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by Poetic Butterfly 14 lines, 2 comments, on Dec 21 8:17 PM 2007. In Personal, Life, Spiritual, Inspirational• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Don't be afraid of twilight
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I think of all the times I've hurt you All the times I've made you cryby emperess27 41 lines, 4 comments, on Jan 25 10:55 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Like an eagle
soaring through the skyby Jeremy0826 19 lines, 9 comments, on Jan 24 7:54 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
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They've been driven out of ev'ry country
They wander the earth deleted, defeatedby PageTurner 21 lines, 10 comments, on Jan 10 1:28 PM 2008. In Personal Thoughts, Society, Sadness, Freewrite, Message.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Her life now
Piano, so oldby Tom The Invader 30 lines, 12 comments, on Aug 14 12:55 PM 2006. In Sad• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Love is a strong word, and has many meanings It can express your heart, and express your feelingsby jazzyphizzle 17 lines, 3 comments, on Jan 23 9:53 PM 2008. In Love• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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In the gap below the mountains.
stands a mystery of time.by maralisa 9 lines, 6 comments, on Jan 8 6:09 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
My heart plays a somber melody
My life drives forward• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Why(?) (can't)people(just)sayby TheKingOfAwkward 23 lines, 5 comments, on Jan 24 6:22 PM 2008. In Humor, Weird, Lots of Symbolism And Things Like That, Other• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I wish you could see
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Your face still haunts me
in my dreams• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I see your name come on the screen
it's like I'm in a dreamby sassylibra0074 25 lines, 6 comments, on Jan 12 7:13 PM 2008. In Love• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Almost three years since we said goodbye• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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The waft of fustiness and turf
Smoulders in my mind• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Velvet whispers / Stems to mind / Of a budding love / That blossomed. / Then you left in winter / And I bowed my head in wilt. / Those whispers ferment / To coby Lady Ireland 11 lines, 7 comments, on Jul 27 10:37 PM 2007
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Fred took my order,
as he had a thousand times before.by Freed by Mercy 36 lines, 6 comments, on Jan 22 12:27 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
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Faces in Places / Wandering around seeing the world, / Cardboard faces in cardboard places, / None will stop to greet a stranger. / In ba• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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by Carefuldelusion 25 lines, 4 comments, on Mar 20 6:30 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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You pass us on the streets unaware that your heart beats still, because of us• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Fallen angel that I am heaven's reject is what I'm called.
Sins and burdens are many, but my saving gracesby Sailorswench 18 lines, 2 comments, on Sep 15 1:53 PM 2007. In Personal, Inspirational, Spiritual, Freewrite• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
by Burmina 39 lines, 6 comments, on Mar 18 5:31 AM 2007. In Adult, Erotica, Fantasy, Humor, Contest, Bronze Winner, Gold Winner• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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toad without a head
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Until the end of time, On you I’ll spend every dime.by CrystalMoon7290 18 lines, 5 comments, on Jan 22 11:09 AM 2008. In Love• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Each and every attack
Is like water off a duck's backby Smirnoff Ice 5 lines, 4 comments, on Feb 2 12:55 PM 2008. In Sad• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Feathery,
ascending to heights undreamed of,by TabbyCat 19 lines, 15 comments, on Feb 4 1:34 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I want to feel your soul,
to taste it on my lips.by TabbyCat 34 lines, 9 comments, on Jan 14 10:47 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
In freedom, I've found a stronger bondage
than captivity's clutch contained.by TabbyCat 31 lines, 16 comments, on Jan 14 10:26 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
You were curled within a world of warmth,
serenely sucking your thumb.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
As I lay beside you at night and look at your sleeping angelic face, in my mind I keep asking 'Do you really love me?' Do you love the way I caress you're beautiful strong built body until you give under my touch?• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Soft and beautiful
That is what I will call theeby ShadowsMidnightRose 18 lines, 15 comments, on Jan 15 11:12 AM 2008. In Flowers, Memories, Thoughts, Fantasy• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Head bleeding, eyes swollen
Unable to see your terrifying face• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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me thinks you have too many sleepless nights
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how could you guess it
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Lines?
Are you going by the actual count of lines in a poem or what the AP counter list them at? Because the AP counter doesn't match the poems. I have one poem the has like 32 lines and the AP counter says 64 lines. Gary
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I never take the AP counter in account I only count the lines that actually have text in them
hope that makes it clearer for you
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OMG!
236 entries and I was awarded gold??????
Now I am truly and completely floored!
I never expected to take gold
Wow Lee!
Thank you
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I never expected to have three people who are on my favourites in top three actually
Makes me look like a biased judge really
but all deserved
Have fun with it
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I know what you mean but then Lee you are one of the most fair judges I know which is why I enjoy entering. You always give me your honest opinion and often suggestions to better my write. All of them I cherish much as I admire your talent so.
And for the record...
I have learned my use of aliterations from reading your work
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nah, you haven't
You learned the alliteration aaaalll by yourself
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Yeah actually I have lee
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Wow, thanks so much for the silver!
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You're welcome
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Great to see I'm among the top 20 of this contest.
Congrats to the winners!
Annie
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Thank you for entering
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congratulations winners
thanks for putting two of my poems in the finalist's list
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