Recently in my life i had a baby boy, he is my world but he is the only thing i have, i am a single mother and i work 40+ hours a week, i am not in any realationship with anyone, So needless to say i feel so lost and unconnected to well life, love, and emotion. I am feeling really down but i am having the hardest time writing out my feelings due to being to scrambled., so thats what this contest is all about.
So having that being said, for this contest i want it to be about feeling like you lost your self, heart ake, feeling unconnected, emotional pain, lost love and how it felt emotionally, something on those lines.
prewrites are allowed and no limit to how many you submit, just please dont send me like 15-20 of your poems. ha ha
I will be adding more points if as i see fit. that goes with honerable mentions. depending on how good the poems are, the better points!! have fun!
I just added a little more points. So for now it is,
gold- 300
silver-100
bronze- 50
Also i added 2 honerable mentions. I still have alot of points so i probably will be adding more a little later
So having that being said, for this contest i want it to be about feeling like you lost your self, heart ake, feeling unconnected, emotional pain, lost love and how it felt emotionally, something on those lines.
prewrites are allowed and no limit to how many you submit, just please dont send me like 15-20 of your poems. ha ha
I will be adding more points if as i see fit. that goes with honerable mentions. depending on how good the poems are, the better points!! have fun!
I just added a little more points. So for now it is,
gold- 300
silver-100
bronze- 50
Also i added 2 honerable mentions. I still have alot of points so i probably will be adding more a little later
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on February 15, 2008
- Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 100, Bronze: 50, Honorable mention: 2 people
- Final notes: this contest was very hard for me to judge, everyone had such wonderful poems I loved reading all of them. Thank you all for entering!. Sorry i didnt comment on everyones poems, i wanted to but lack of time.
1st place: "If Only she would rest her head"
2nd place: "I love you too much"
3rd place: "untill I've forgotten"
Thank you all for adding your poems to my contest!
Contest Winners
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For years I was there
I listened, I gaveby forever-hoping 59 lines, 25 comments, on Nov 8 10:09 PM 2007. In Love, Personal, Thoughts
Bronze trophy winner
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My heart it just feels broken and I’m not sure how to heal
My mind it just feels cluttered I don’t know what to feel• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
I’m the perfect one they say
But I’m just so tired of trying• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
I'm doodling with my pen again, still thinking how your smile
just drifted through my memory and lingered for a while.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
I wake up again, the radio still blazing in my ears
reach across, shut it off, pray to god for no more tears...by LostInTheDream 30 lines, 8 comments, on Dec 20 4:08 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
Every minute that goes by...
I realize she is gone.by Condemd RyeZing 34 lines, 23 comments, on Jan 19 3:57 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
Gold trophy winner
Silver trophy winner
Honorable mention
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Is this how it's supposed to be? My knees buckle, my breath catches,by marciakay81 25 lines, 6 comments, on Jan 10 12:36 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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The gentle brush
of your handby marciakay81 13 lines, 15 comments, on Jan 5 12:14 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Silently creeping in,
like the lioness watching her prey.by marciakay81 20 lines, 3 comments, on Jan 2 11:22 AM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
this is all that you had to say
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Let this question go on like a wheel
Ask him, “How lonely do you feel?”
by HangingSoul 32 lines, 4 comments, on Jan 7 8:43 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
It’s a night , you thought you knew..
Oh’ it’ll come to pass, as the others always do.by subah 34 lines, 3 comments, on Dec 22 4:22 AM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
She starts from here and walks again
as was she from begining, now and then• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Wishing on a broken star wishing you were in my armsby Whispered.Screams 7 lines, 11 comments, on Sep 28 9:50 AM 2007. In Hope, Personal, Thoughts, Lost love, Dedication• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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You came into my mind again to-day / While watching golden horses spinning round, / With open mouths but nothing left to say, / a fairgroun• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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On this day,
new day oldby LostInTheDream 5 lines, 6 comments, on Jan 15 10:58 AM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
That strecthes from the future's past
Into the past's future.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
its not a personality its a way of life the outstretched arms of humanityby RebelJester 52 lines, 3 comments, on Jan 6 10:24 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Missing you hurts more than you know.
When ever someone asks if I miss you I smile and say no.• Commented on by judge. -
When all the memories collide
They create an image in your mindby Jasmine Rayne 16 lines, 3 comments, on Jan 22 3:46 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. -
I can’t get rid of you, no matter what I do. I tried telling you that I don’t love you, even though deep down• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I've on occasion been my own enemy,
But I realize how foolish I was.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
"I bet she's beautiful; that girl he talks about
And she's got everything that I have to live without"by ThatONEweirdChick 19 lines, 6 comments, on Jan 4 9:23 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
"God, send me an angel from the heavens above
To heal my broken heart from being in love"• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
There is a first flush in the breeze
when love’s unbitten, a fuzzy peach• Commented on by judge. -
Darkness all about me consuming every thing.by SHadowHex666 16 lines, 11 comments, on Dec 2 2:22 AM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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It is raining despear,
who wil I fear?by SHadowHex666 17 lines, 5 comments, on Dec 4 6:22 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Everything I have is because of you.by SHadowHex666 19 lines, 3 comments, on Dec 4 6:30 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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