Make Me Cry

Contest is Over

• Contest was judged on March 1, 2008
• Rewards: Gold: 350, Silver: 200, Bronze: 50
• Final notes:
  Congrats to all

Contest Winners

1. rage, anger, hurt and sorrow

   by my1lovewearsdiapers 19 lines, 4 comments, on Jan 13 4:12 AM 2008. In Pain, Personal, Sad, Thoughts, Life, Angry, Family, Depressed, Loss, Depression
   Gold trophy winner

   • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
2. Abby

   When you look at me I can only smile
   This kind of love, it needs no trial

   by Billythekid 19 lines, 7 comments, on Feb 22 7:45 PM 2006. In Love
   Silver trophy winner

   • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
3. Anger

   I hold in the Anger that burns deep inside of me,
   It wishes to be something that it is not,
   

   by darkmage1992 21 lines, 4 comments, on Jan 20 4:48 PM 2008
   Bronze trophy winner

   • Commented on by judge. [remove]
4. My Masculine Veneer

   Tears want to fall But pride won’t let them

   by Eloquentphantom 22 lines, 5 comments, on Jan 13 7:01 PM 2008. In Sad, Love, Angst

   • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
5. Error: Unable to find finalist item 3818153, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
6. Victoria

   I cried when I came home today
   I heard that you were gone

   by bluecollarlove 23 lines, 17 comments, on Apr 13 10:33 AM 2007. In Despair--bluecollarlove

   • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]

Entries [34]

• Missing Jewels

  Mothers box of jewelry
  
  each costume piece

  by Carly Pop 19 lines, 18 comments, on Oct 23 10:10 AM 2006. In Sad

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Her Arms.

  Every minute that goes by...
  I realize she is gone.

  by Condemd RyeZing 34 lines, 23 comments, on Jan 19 3:57 PM 2008

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Every breath forced

  The pure emotion unbearable.
  A cold winters day,

  by marciakay81 26 lines, 9 comments, on Dec 10 8:36 PM 2007

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• SC...No Need To Cry

  The breeze whispers as it passes by
  I am inspired it does not lie

  by A floatingleaf 20 lines, 2 comments, on Jan 22 2:50 AM 2008. In Contest, Personal, Sad, Feelings

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• In Our Father's Hands

  You were curled within a world of warmth,
  serenely sucking your thumb.

  by TabbyCat 18 lines, 17 comments, on Jan 22 9:33 AM 2008. In Hope, Pain, Death

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• I will...

  Now it's over, we are done
  so this was just play and fun?

  by Daniela-Linder 48 lines, 7 comments, on Oct 31 7:48 AM 2007

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• Forget

  Can you remember?
  Can you remember Grandpa?
  

  by Dak 61 lines, 8 comments, on Jan 20 12:50 AM 2008. In Personal, Sad, Life, Death, Dedication, Family

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• His Angel

  The clouds lay dark as the angels’ tears fall, Dancing gently to heaven’s call.

  by PonyPride 13 lines, 1 comment, on Jan 20 9:04 PM 2008

  • Commented on by judge.
• Take your charm...

  Take your charm, and take your ring... All I want is my key...

  by xXxBrokenWingsxXx 8 lines, 1 comment, on Jan 21 2:28 AM 2008. In Sad, Personal, Thoughts, Love, Life

  • Commented on by judge.
• im screaming inside

  im screamingbut the world remainssilentnot a soundof movementor words

  by moonburndcheese 30 lines, 5 comments, on Dec 17 7:50 PM 2007. In Personal, Thoughts, Pain, My life, Sadness, Noguest

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• sometimes-

  Sometimes I want to give up

  by checkmate 43 lines, 3 comments, on Jan 21 6:03 AM 2008

  • Commented on by judge.
• [ Sick of crying ]

  Sick of crying Not dreaming

  by technicolor girl 6 lines, 5 comments, on Jan 20 8:07 PM 2008. In Pain, Other, Sad, Loss, My life, Longing

  • Commented on by judge.
• Everything

  Eyes staring at nothing Nothing

  by hey charlie 23 lines, 4 comments, on Jan 21 11:07 PM 2008. In Angst, Dark, Sad, Personal

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• The castle

  A widow, veiled in blackened silk,
  cries pitifully by a grave,

  by O.o 116 lines, 18 comments, on Mar 11 4:00 AM 2008. In Hope, Life, Other, Pain, Personal, Sad, Death, Lost in thought, Sadness, Dep

  • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
• From Mine Own Hand

  Don't cry my little one,
  the tears'll only stain your soul.

  by marciakay81 22 lines, 8 comments, on Dec 17 7:27 AM 2007

  • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
• Drowning the Sorrows

  Drowning the sorrows in perpetual tears, suffocating all my griefs away.

  by Then 40 lines, on Feb 2 6:46 PM 2008

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• Drunken Farewell ( A letter written under the influence)

  by PassionsPromise 90 lines, 6 comments, on Jan 31 9:36 PM 2008. In adult, abuse, pain

  • Viewed by judge.
• [ Someone to hold me, ]

  by darknessreigns 39 lines, 9 comments, on Sep 19 4:27 PM 2007. In Pain, Sad, Society, Life, Other

  • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
• A Story of Love That Unexpectedly Broke

  Walking down the sidewalk Late at night

  by DarkLotus4Life. 53 lines, 7 comments, on Jan 26 8:19 PM 2008. In Love, Emo, Pain, Lost love, Sad, Dark

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• Waiting

  It's long and not very good

  by Beside the Wind 81 lines, on Feb 2 7:52 PM 2008

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• Broken Butterflies

  Porcelain figurines smile sympathetically,
  Synthetic tears roll from my tainted eyes;

  by catherinevania 38 lines, 9 comments, on Dec 10 4:46 PM 2007. In Personal, Rape

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• When Affection is No More

  When affection is no more
  What good is smiling?

  by Mr.Cat 20 lines, 1 comment, on Jan 25 12:39 AM 2008. In Option 4 -Love

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• a birthday cake with 16 candles

  a birthday cake just for you
  with 16 candles and a picture of just us two

  by dreamweaver08 17 lines, 6 comments, on May 17 2:54 PM 2006. In Contemporary

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• No More Words

  There's nothing left to do...there's nothing left to say.
  Because no more words can tell how much suffering you put me through.

  by CrystalMoon7290 9 lines, 4 comments, on Feb 19 7:05 AM 2008. In Pain, Sad

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• This is what my life is for

  Pain,
  Blade slicing skin.

  by Angel of Mercy 9 lines, 9 comments, on Jan 25 9:28 AM 2006. In Sad, Dark, Angst

  • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
• Pieces

  Another old piece from 1994, first time online

  by Glasyalabolas 87 lines, on Jan 23 9:56 AM 2008. In Pain, Love, Self-hatred, Depression, Lyrics

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• He Doesn't know

  He doesn't know how much he hurts you till he himsef gets hurt. He doesn't know how much you care for him.
  

  by darkmage1992 11 lines, 1 comment, on Jan 22 7:26 AM 2008

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• By me, right now

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