Lets say you are in a gang or on drugs or started steeling or having sex too young of an age and all f a sudden your age is swapped what would you do to protect them .
No cRazzY WRITING PLEASE
NO BAD LANGUAGE for their are young people reading
Be the parent for a few minutes and be serious about this OK
I like rhyme but will take free verse if it hase a good storyline
No more than 20 lines use punctuation
As I Looked Back And Found Myself Looking Down
Went to sleep last night as usual
Yet I woke finding myself old that was odd
I ran into my old bedroom
And their was my mom sleeping rolled into a ball
I stood there for a bit then knew what I had to do
I woke her up and told her get ready for school
On my way out I saw their on her desk
A bottle of pills I prayed she hadnt taken any yet
I rushed to the bedside and couldnt wake her up
So I called the ambulance to come and hoped they would rush
Holding her there within my arms tears began to fall
For I reallized this was me after all
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on January 18
- Rewards: Gold: 300
- Final notes: Gold The Message
silver In The Hands Of We
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I woke up one morning, a parent for a day;
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What a great idea for a contest. Good luck with it may you have many entries! Blessed Be! ~~Shannon~~
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sounds like a great contest. i'm gonna mark it ans check out the entries. my perspectives are different as an adult. hopefully it will be alot ofyounger kids who will join and share their views on things.
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Awe. I would enter your contest except there is not much that my parents can repremand me for...
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To those who entered
Since I only received two entries to the contest I do thankyou very much .They were both excellent writes . -
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Thanks for the contest, surprised more people didn't enter; I would have thought many more people would have had a perspective on this.
Either way, thanks for the contest, it gave me something to think about, and an interesting perspective when writing. -
great
i was about to take the biggest test of my life
all the studying was causing lots of strife
and suddenly i was my father, how can this be?
but, like dad, my hero,
we do not question our destiny or His will for us
so I decided to stand tall and not make a fuss
i glanced over at him, studying like a pro
walked on over diligently and said
"on taking a test, there are some tips to you i can show"
it was a wonderful evening being a dad to him
we worked together
we laughed together
we learned from each other together
we smiled together
we worked together some more
it was a wonderful evening being a dad to him
i got to be the father he is to me
he got to be the son he taught me to be
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