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What Do You See Now ? (Round 6)

Please look carefully at the prompt picture.

Then write me a poem, based on what you see, and feel, and think, about it.

Any style, any length, rhyming or not, it's up to you.

Please, no prose or pre-writes.

After the previous five rounds, we have a story happening. It goes "As the sun rises, life quickens. The green fuse curls, unfurls, climbs high to the sky to flower and die..."

Cut to Round 6. Have fun.

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on January 19, 2008
  • Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 150, Bronze: 50, Honorable mention: 3 people
  • Final notes:
    Thank you again for your work in looking, thinking and writing. The final round, as the winner states, shows the setting sun. The completed poem that goes with the windows reads, in total,

    As the sun rises, life quickens.
    The green fuse curls, unfurls,
    climbs high for the sky
    to flower and die
    returns to earth
    for rebirth
    as the sun rises

    (and so on) it ties back into itself, showing the cycle of life.

    I had thought that this cycle of windows was complete, but during the rounds became aware that between sunset and sunrise there are further life processes, what happens to the soul during the time between death and rebirth.

    So maybe, I'll be back with more !

Contest Winners

  1. by Dancing the Rumba 43 lines, 5 comments, on Jan 13 8:52 PM 2008
    Gold trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  2. Error: Unable to find finalist item 3797481, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  3. Chiseled face of anger revealed
    in aspect to round eyed warmth
    by Peteskid 32 lines, 4 comments, on Jan 12 1:41 AM 2008
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  4. by also called 25 lines, 1 comment, on Jan 13 11:05 AM 2008
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]

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