ONE ENTRY PER PERSON!
If you've entered more than one poem please remove all but one. Otherwise you've disqualified yourself. Thank you.
I think it's great to come across a contest that allows pre-writes so that's what this contest is about.
You can enter a brand-new poem too.
If you're not sure of what I like to read and write then check out my work or my favorite's work.
ONE RULE:::
One Entry Per Person
swearing is fine
erotica is fine
rhyme is fine
any subject
any style
I will add more points as I earn them.
please give me something really, really succulent to read!
If you've entered more than one poem please remove all but one. Otherwise you've disqualified yourself. Thank you.
I think it's great to come across a contest that allows pre-writes so that's what this contest is about.
You can enter a brand-new poem too.
If you're not sure of what I like to read and write then check out my work or my favorite's work.
ONE RULE:::
One Entry Per Person
swearing is fine
erotica is fine
rhyme is fine
any subject
any style
I will add more points as I earn them.
please give me something really, really succulent to read!
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on January 17, 2008
- Rewards: Gold: 300, Honorable mention: 12 people
- Final notes: I asked for succulent and that's what you all gave me!
It was tough choosing gold, silver and bronze. Everyone in the finalist's list entered poems worthy of first, second and third.
Honorable mentions are in no particular order.
thank you everyone for giving me some good stuff to read!
Contest Winners
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A flash of grace, a whisper of light - flutter of wings just taking flight.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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The gentle brush
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I could let myself get caught in the tide
or allow my body to be blown-by Floorboards 41 lines, 102 comments, on Jan 3 9:21 AM 2008. In Nature, Society, Thoughts
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The sky threatens winter weather,
but the ground is bare, and cold,• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] - Error: Unable to find finalist item 3794515, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
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If I slipped between your lips...
by Heavenly Angel 7 lines, 36 comments, on Jan 10 10:45 AM 2008. In Sensual, Contest
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I guess one could call me a lyricist,
trying my best to educate on the slyby WisdomWarrior 41 lines, 51 comments, on Sep 17 1:22 AM 2006. In Society, Hope, Contemporary, Spoken Word, SLAM
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Tell me, did you ever wish on a shooting star?• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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Your lips taste like death
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String me and play, boy High above this audienceby Brokenpoetry123 24 lines, 1 comment, on Jan 9 7:06 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I remember when bread was 25 cents a loaf
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Your face still haunts me
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My feelings for you words just couldnt say Not only because there are to many Im scared you might go awayby beautifull-ugly228 20 lines, 4 comments, on Jan 10 5:57 PM 2008. In Love• Commented on by judge.
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Soft and beautiful
That is what I will call theeby ShadowsMidnightRose 18 lines, 15 comments, on Jan 15 11:12 AM 2008. In Flowers, Memories, Thoughts, Fantasy• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Born so deep into the ground,
To catastrophe their fragile lives bound.by PonyPride 23 lines, 11 comments, on Jan 4 9:26 PM 2008. In Black History Month• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Oh what a tangled web you've weaved
Full of such twisted lies and awful deceitby infinitechaos07 53 lines, 4 comments, on Jan 13 10:35 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Heart breaks no more I'm sure and my heart is pure With you I score if ever I am ill you will be my cure• Commented on by judge.
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Crazy old man walks up to me I said, a crazy old man walks up to meby laxrocks33 100 lines, 4 comments, on Jan 15 4:14 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Oh,
the girl shakes, she holds her sidesby LucyLightning 35 lines, 7 comments, on Jan 1 8:48 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
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I am as tempting
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We are an opposite people
with opposite griefs,by Poetess12 13 lines, 2 comments, on Jan 11 4:58 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
There she walks that little girl so pure, so innicont but inside she's dead .Innicont and pure she was but she had be tasted,Withering awayby Seylox 2 lines, 3 comments, on Jan 9 9:14 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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He came to the door
Smile on his faceby Kaleidoscopeyes 50 lines, 1 comment, on Jan 13 10:29 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
seedy looking paint
creates an opening• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Closing my eyes as light fades away I find myself thinking of you everydayby Against the Odds 38 lines, 2 comments, on Jan 15 7:09 PM 2008. In Lyrics• Commented on by judge.
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They drop the fiery sun, they thought would stay forever,by BobbyJean 12 lines, 13 comments, on Dec 9 4:36 AM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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by tigress3737 37 lines, 2 comments, on Dec 22 11:41 AM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I want to run, run away,by DeLiShDaNcEr 24 lines, 2 comments, on Jan 8 3:01 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Christmas is over the trees are down
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Dressed in her splendid caftan and bejeweled turban,
Hurrem sultan lies sexily on her divanby Nermin Nazim 16 lines, 15 comments, on Jan 3 5:19 PM 2008. In Love, Personal, thoughts, history, dedication, my style• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
He lost his mind in the gleam of a bottle And sank to the bottom of an ashtray• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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-It all could have been stopped if it had just been given more time / -But hell never know now that his feet are at the threshold / -She st• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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dont get in my situation
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Under a midnight sky, where romance flows like wine,• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Lady Unique is a treasure.Lady Unique is a treasure.Lady Unique is a treasure.Lady Unique is a treasure.Lady Unique is a treasure.
by Akimbo 26 lines, 1 comment, on Jan 10 9:54 PM 2008. In Unyielding Anticipation• Commented on by judge. -
You don't need to look fancy, You're already beautiful.by Condemd RyeZing 20 lines, 6 comments, on Jan 6 7:55 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Look to this day, (Its the only today you have today!)by O.o 20 lines, 3 comments, on Dec 30 5:10 AM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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A ball full of beauty; the twin of the sun, Always comes out when the daytime is done.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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She runs out the back door;
Running fast, ignoring the pain in her lungs.by Hells Bells 60 lines, 23 comments, on Nov 18 5:53 PM 2007. In Dark, Angst, Sad, Pain, Lost love, Longing, Depression• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I want the floors to shake,
I want the walls to shatter.by SweetLily 13 lines, 4 comments, on Dec 4 5:00 PM 2007. In Personal, Hope, Contemporary, Freewrite, Abstract, Inspirational, Happiness, Escape• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I touch your face as you begin to cry. / My heart is hurting as I say goodbye. / How much I love you, you should already know. / My heart iby Anne Marie 23 lines, 13 comments, on Jul 4 2:20 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Broken by his stained glass tears
She mourns for her son's martyred years• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
In a field, a meadow
I stand alone• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
You lay me on the bed
with that look in your eye.by Twosoulsasone 114 lines, 12 comments, on Oct 3 11:54 AM 2003. In Love• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
The sun of fading greys Deep orange perfectionby TranquilSea 59 lines, 2 comments, on Jan 8 4:59 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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never tasting the true complexity of life
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Listen to the beat as it begins to flow.by SHadowHex666 34 lines, 9 comments, on Jan 13 2:55 PM 2008. In Fun• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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by Envelope 28 lines, 4 comments, on Jan 2 3:30 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I'll try this
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Thank you so much for the honorable mention; I so appreciate it!

Great contest! Congratulations to all the winners
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Thank you for the Gold and congratulations to leander and Nic whose entries are gold worthy too.
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Congratulations with the gold sweety

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Oh, I only saw the note about the contest now. Thank you so much for the trophy and congrats to the other winners, especially my friend leander!!
~ Nicolette
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Congratulations to you as well my friend

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Cheers for the hm.
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Thankies for the silver cup sweety


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you is welcome
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Thank you for the honourable and congratulations to all the winners

Love,
~ Lonely
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