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dark writes (just...make me feel something)

aiight. So like.....I'm picky, k?
you gotsta write well. REAL well.






That's it, though. if you just make me feel something, then I like it.



please take the time to comment on some other entries and/or on some of my poems..




POINT DONATIONS greatly desired!


RULES:
1)don't make me vomit
_a. number one causes of vomiting in myiuki:
__ i. dirty pritty w/o an explanation
__ ii. chatspeak, even when I use it
__ iii. CONTEST WHORES
__ iv. bad spelling and grammar.
2)explain yourself in your author's notes by either:
_a. telling about your poem
_b. saying your name and the reason you chose it
_c. somehow indicating that you took the time to change the notes section specifically for this contest

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on January 28, 2008
  • Rewards: Gold: 302, Silver: 160, Bronze: 80, Honorable mention: 5 people
  • Final notes:
    thanks for all the great entries!!
    lots of good writes, and i enjoyed reading most of them. the rest scared the crap out of me.

Contest Winners

  1. x♥x♥x♥x♥x
    by SarahEatsAirplane 126 lines, 8 comments, on Jan 1 8:42 PM 2008. In Thoughts, Life, Sad, Dark, Pain, Angst, Emo, Love (sort of)
    Gold trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  2. My Dear Dark Saint Stephen
    Have You Ever Seen The Light
    by AnAcousticEvil 49 lines, 13 comments, on Dec 7 10:37 PM 2007. In hope, sad, soceity, spirtual, thoughts, weird, more, pain
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  3. Tear stained shirt
    expressions bare
    by Transcend All 29 lines, 12 comments, on Jan 10 12:05 PM 2008. In Personal, Sad, Angst, Thoughts, Pain
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  4. Gambling emotions with ill-fated hope
    Trickery, the devil's tool, stabs me once again.
    by BigE 21 lines, 15 comments, on Oct 30 8:02 AM 2007. In Dark, Thoughts, Pain
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  5. That Girl By: Rebekah Neal
    by NeverTogether 67 lines, 4 comments, on Jan 9 5:10 PM 2008. In Dark, Hope, Life, Pain, Personal, Sad, Thoughts
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  6. Error: Unable to find finalist item 3746214, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  7. It's one of those
    Nothing goes right
    by Dark The Poet 26 lines, 7 comments, on Jan 23 3:35 AM 2008. In Angst, Dark, Humor, Pain, Sad
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]

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  • ShadedRequiem
    January 10, 2008
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    What's a contest whore?


    • my--i u--k i
      January 10, 2008
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      :D :D :D

      a contest whore is one who has soooooo many contest they've entered that poem in that it takes up like a WHOLE FREAKING PAGE!!!!!

      in general, it's kinda stupid to award someone a trophy for a poem that's already won before. In my mind anyway.

      it's not the person i care about. can't see the person anyway.

      it's the poem.


  • Abby In Chains. silver member
    January 10, 2008
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    more than one entry? i just wrote something perfect for your contest...

  • Abby In Chains. silver member
    January 10, 2008
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    multiple writes allowed now??


  • AnAcousticEvil
    January 10, 2008
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    yeah

    uhh i kinda feel like i need to explain my poem, dark saint stephen, a teensy bit just so your not like... what?
    its meant to be like a metaphor for how society holds pain higher than happiness. and well the rest is under the notes.
    and its kinda nursery rhymey so yeah, sorry bout that.


  • Doll Parts
    January 11, 2008
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    Hey there dude (contest owner)

    Patched With Toy Lore is about suicide and drug addictions.

    I live through my lyrics man.


    • my--i u--k i
      January 12, 2008
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      ahm gunna just say that if u used 'dude' w/o considering my gender (chick btw) then combined with the topic
      lookin forward tah reading your entry.

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