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14 to 18 ages enter your best prewrite Judged

do as the title says

normal ap rules apply.

I will be checking ages.

Good Luck in my contest

Have Fun

will add points later..

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on January 7, 2008
  • Rewards: Gold: 400, Silver: 200, Bronze: 100, Honorable mention: 10 people
  • Final notes:
    Thanks everyone for entering they all were great this was very tough to judge. Hm's are in no order

Contest Winners

  1. by parachute fog 56 lines, 26 comments, on Dec 25 7:48 PM 2007. In Beat
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  2. Error: Unable to find finalist item 3775754, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  3. by HagarenHanyou 17 lines, 25 comments, on Nov 12 4:43 PM 2007. In Thoughts, Love, Life, Other, Adult, Personal, Weird, Erotica
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  4. So who thought of
    fields of blue but
    by Dragomiloff 31 lines, 6 comments, on Jan 3 11:50 AM 2008
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  5. This world was always commited to sin
    But who am I to judge Gods work
    by Lost Emo 24 lines, 38 comments, on Nov 19 11:08 AM 2007. In Lyrics, Pain, Personal, Society, Sad, Dark, Hope, Life, Metalcore
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  6. Somebody rescue the lost man...
    ...His heart beats to the devil's band.
    by ZeInkslinger 48 lines, 12 comments, on Jun 15 2:20 PM 2008. In pain, personal, sad, society, corruption, dark, hope, life, love, lyrics, t
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  7. Before love hithers on padded feet
    And encircles your moon lit eyes
    by Stars of Hope 18 lines, 4 comments, on Sep 20 6:55 PM 2007. In Love......yeah, that's pretty much it.
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  8. You are my love like death
    Until my flesh grows cold
    by Lady Nightshade 42 lines, 15 comments, on Jan 3 12:59 PM 2008. In Lyrics, Love, Dark
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  9. In dungeons dreary, dark and deep, where callous creatures choose to keep / Souls enslaved from which they reap with jagged tooth and claw
    by Death of the Author 84 lines, 79 comments, on Jul 1 9:28 AM 2007. In Dark
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  10. My heart pours with pain
    It spills out my thoughts
    That will never be said
    by SoundofMadness 31 lines, 5 comments, on Feb 5 1:25 PM 2007. In love, suicide, death
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  11. but time and again walks the demented soul
    who, curious, takes to the ribbon of thought
    over mountain and mist, through mine and moor
    by nightciris 54 lines, 15 comments, on Jan 14 12:48 PM 2007. In Dark, Fantasy, Personal, Thoughts
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  12. Error: Unable to find finalist item 3723776, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]

Entries [36]

1 - 36 of 36
  • by LoneFairrie 10 lines, 13 comments, on Dec 31 12:50 PM 2007
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • Sitting in English class Longing for the bell to end the day
    by Raging Chaos 32 lines, 14 comments, on Sep 26 9:33 PM 2007
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • My hands, they shake,
    My eyes, they tear.
    by Nick B 25 lines, 16 comments, on Jan 3 8:06 PM 2008. In Angst, Sad, Society, Cutting
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • They say I am insane,
    that my mind flickers like a candle flame.
    by Lycanmage15 19 lines, 5 comments, on Dec 13 8:31 PM 2007. In Dark, Pain, Personal, Other
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • we ride through town and hit the country road,
    so careless about where we will go.
    by ali34 18 lines, 1 comment, on Apr 13 10:06 PM 2007
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • Tick-tock I can hear you breathing. Like the clock on the wall I feel you screaming.
    by l33t-n1nj4 20 lines, 1 comment, on Dec 1 3:38 AM 2007
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • This is a prewrite I had to renter though. My computer won't let me enter prewrites
    by Blooming Poet 11 lines, 1 comment, on Jan 6 10:45 PM 2008. In Pain, Death, Sad, love, contest
    • Commented on by judge.
  • the sun is setting across the yard / as i lie in m awesome hammock / i lay there and rest awhile / i fall asleep and tap a nap / i wake up to a beautiful night sky
    by jfarrell 6 lines, 1 comment, on Jun 11 9:49 PM 2007
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • smiles, i love them sleep
    by Ryan Rapture 55 lines, 2 comments, on Jan 6 10:41 PM 2008
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • rage burning within but she knows
    by transit 7 lines, 3 comments, on Jan 6 2:52 AM 2008
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • by xTomorrowx 10 lines, 1 comment, on Jan 2 8:57 PM 2008
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • heat, sheets, love, pain, sex,
    these brought the change.
    by BlackDiamondWolf 26 lines, 8 comments, on Aug 18 9:52 PM 2007
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • What is life If there is no gain?
    by Disguising Mask 23 lines, 1 comment, on Oct 15 3:01 PM 2007
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • It's too late to apologize
    now that the pills are kicking in
    by ExpectingMommy18 22 lines, 38 comments, on Oct 10 9:42 AM 2007. In Angst, Love, Life, Pain, Personal, Sad
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • Love Never Dies Twas your eyes i saw the lies
    by oldphotosonlybringt 26 lines, 1 comment, on Jan 5 5:25 PM 2008. In Love
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • by RatherSpiffing 40 lines, 3 comments, on Dec 6 1:45 PM 2007. In Music, Life, Love
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • by Seraph 116 lines, 5 comments, on Jan 1 4:35 PM 2008. In Fantasy/Horror, Weird
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • Lets tell a little story, Of a boy and girl,
    by MoonLightKitty 188 lines, 1 comment, on Jan 6 9:43 PM 2008
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Young wild trees cover every inch of space.
    The forest is dense, but new,
    by Mad As Rabbits 62 lines, 22 comments, on Dec 20 7:12 PM 2007. In Personal, Other, Self, Lost in thought
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • Broken keys
    unlock nothing; waiting,
    by Salt Therapy 71 lines, 9 comments, on Sep 10 12:57 PM 2007
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • Sea of sound / motionless / compound / grazing sunset / gazing clouds / she takes her teddy / the only thing she has / she things nothing
    by DeLiShDaNcEr 15 lines, 7 comments, on May 6 3:02 PM 2007. In sleep
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • The girl you never noticed... The girl who was crushing, while you were dating...
    by lovelypoet 17 lines, 2 comments, on Jan 2 1:52 PM 2008. In Love, Sad, Personal
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • Life was better then,
    Not a care in the world,
    by Anguas-Confusion 21 lines, 16 comments, on Oct 15 1:08 PM 2007. In Personal, Abuse, Life
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • by sixtimesseven 14 lines, 1 comment, on Dec 14 9:27 PM 2007. In Life, Love, Personal, Sad
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
  • A black hole.
    A swirling vortex of supergravity and nothingness
    by Cheysula 34 lines, 9 comments, on Dec 20 9:38 PM 2007
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite

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