i want poems written FROM THE POINT OF VIEW of someone, or a group of people, animals,etc, that are being abused or ignored by todays society.
i have included a beautiful example for aborted children.
SOME OPTIONS.
)>aborted children, or there mothers, dads, sibblings. (my personal fav thing to soap box about.)
)>Drug addicts family, or alcoholics, suiside, etc.
)> children up for adoption.
)> the not perfect child.
)> downsyndrom, add,etc child.
)> pre assisted suicide victim.(person in a comma...)
)>abused animals
)> hobos.
)>mute, deaf,blind, etc.
)> starving children in africa, uganda, here, anywhere.
I DO NOT WANT EXCESSIVE CURSING! if you cuss it better be an asset to your words.
I DONT WANT A POEM ABOUT THESE THINGS. write it as if you were that person, animal, group of people.
IF YOU BASH ANY GROUP LISTED ABOVE, OR WRITTEN ABOUT I WILL REMOVE YOU IMEDIATLY. bashing mainstream society is ok. but keep it nice.
THESSE SHOULD BE INSPIRING! not deppressing.
I DON'T REALLY WANT CUTTING-DEATH-BLACK-BLOOD STUFF k?
you are being a voice. NOT A RANT personthng.
please put your topic/person/group in the auther notes, so i know what you're soap boxing about..
i don't have enough points to be able to award as i'd like.
so if you could findsomeone to donate points, even 10 are apriciated.(i have 400something. -sweatdrop-)
i will add more points, if i get any.
please and thank you.
THE NEW MORALITY
BY 'MARY'
You didn’t make it, Unborn Child.
They wouldn’t let you be.
To your bud of life, they took a knife.
It’s the “New Morality.”
They didn’t mean to hurt you, Love!
You have to understand.
Forgive them for what they did.
Their life was so well-planned.
They couldn’t take you with them
up the ladder of success.
Money meant more to them
than a child, heaven-blessed.
Tell me little Unborn Child,
what did the Creator say?
Did he wrap you in His love,
and wipe your tears away?
You hover on the edge of time.
I see your faceless form.
You laugh whenever children play,
Oh, God, for you I mourn!
He sent His only Precious Son
to teach us all “the way”.
Still we kill the unborn ones.
It happens every day!
You didn’t make it, Unborn Child.
They wouldn’t let you be.
They just expelled a blob of cells.
It’s the “New Morality.”
my last contest barely had 5 entries, i'd like a bit more. plaes?
invite your friends.
thank you guys sooo much. omg wow!!! (omg is oh my gosh btw.)
i have had 3 people donate a crap laod of points!!!
so thank you so much to
HeavenScent4U
for 289 points
Cupcrazy
for 500 points
Fa11nAnge1-X
for 105 points
so please thank these people and go read/ comment on their poetry!!!!
-sho!-
-sorry my parents are being supper spielockdown ppl. again. im gonna have to judge from school.
that means itll take me longer. sorry.
but my folks think u guys r like, sending me porn...
lmao.
i have included a beautiful example for aborted children.
SOME OPTIONS.
)>aborted children, or there mothers, dads, sibblings. (my personal fav thing to soap box about.)
)>Drug addicts family, or alcoholics, suiside, etc.
)> children up for adoption.
)> the not perfect child.
)> downsyndrom, add,etc child.
)> pre assisted suicide victim.(person in a comma...)
)>abused animals
)> hobos.
)>mute, deaf,blind, etc.
)> starving children in africa, uganda, here, anywhere.
I DO NOT WANT EXCESSIVE CURSING! if you cuss it better be an asset to your words.
I DONT WANT A POEM ABOUT THESE THINGS. write it as if you were that person, animal, group of people.
IF YOU BASH ANY GROUP LISTED ABOVE, OR WRITTEN ABOUT I WILL REMOVE YOU IMEDIATLY. bashing mainstream society is ok. but keep it nice.
THESSE SHOULD BE INSPIRING! not deppressing.
I DON'T REALLY WANT CUTTING-DEATH-BLACK-BLOOD STUFF k?
you are being a voice. NOT A RANT personthng.
please put your topic/person/group in the auther notes, so i know what you're soap boxing about..
i don't have enough points to be able to award as i'd like.
so if you could findsomeone to donate points, even 10 are apriciated.(i have 400something. -sweatdrop-)
i will add more points, if i get any.
please and thank you.
THE NEW MORALITY
BY 'MARY'
You didn’t make it, Unborn Child.
They wouldn’t let you be.
To your bud of life, they took a knife.
It’s the “New Morality.”
They didn’t mean to hurt you, Love!
You have to understand.
Forgive them for what they did.
Their life was so well-planned.
They couldn’t take you with them
up the ladder of success.
Money meant more to them
than a child, heaven-blessed.
Tell me little Unborn Child,
what did the Creator say?
Did he wrap you in His love,
and wipe your tears away?
You hover on the edge of time.
I see your faceless form.
You laugh whenever children play,
Oh, God, for you I mourn!
He sent His only Precious Son
to teach us all “the way”.
Still we kill the unborn ones.
It happens every day!
You didn’t make it, Unborn Child.
They wouldn’t let you be.
They just expelled a blob of cells.
It’s the “New Morality.”
my last contest barely had 5 entries, i'd like a bit more. plaes?
invite your friends.
thank you guys sooo much. omg wow!!! (omg is oh my gosh btw.)
i have had 3 people donate a crap laod of points!!!
so thank you so much to
HeavenScent4U
for 289 points
Cupcrazy
for 500 points
Fa11nAnge1-X
for 105 points
so please thank these people and go read/ comment on their poetry!!!!
-sho!-
-sorry my parents are being supper spielockdown ppl. again. im gonna have to judge from school.
that means itll take me longer. sorry.
but my folks think u guys r like, sending me porn...
lmao.
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on January 22, 2008
- Rewards: Gold: 500, Silver: 300, Bronze: 200, Honorable mention: 4 people
- Final notes: hey guys that=nks so much. i aprieciate everyone who donated points a bunch! it was really hard to pick, yah i know it sounds like a cop out. but really.there was only a few i didn't liek. and some were not inspiring. but overall. i had a goood time.
there was one poem i didin't comment on. im so sorry.
i didn't get time. i did read it i swear. several times. i read all of yours several times.
anyway. sorry.
Contest Winners
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I stand here patient in my stall, Waiting for your return.• Commented on by judge. [remove]
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My name is Dave. Or is it James... That is information I cannot disclose,• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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Bless you mother and your smile,
Your laughter and your tears,• Commented on by judge. [remove] - Error: Unable to find finalist item 3634182, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
Gold trophy winner
Silver trophy winner
Bronze trophy winner
Honorable mention
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Controlling birth won’t end us
You have tried to stop us from coming to this world,• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
He rocks in perfect rhythm to the beating in his chest.
Nothing doing, in the summer's heat;by Shakespeare 22 lines, 4 comments, on Jan 3 5:19 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
night fall will rise as the suns rays will fall, but darkness can't quiet a black hawks call. Love and hate are no different, when pain is given the same way. Choosing either will send the Black Hawk astray.by darkhawk 8 lines, 2 comments, on Jan 5 8:50 PM 2008. In Dark, Life, Society, Sad, Personal, Pain, Thoughts• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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by genderideals-- 24 lines, 6 comments, on Jan 11 4:49 PM 2008. In dirty pretty, angst, weird, sad, life, thoughts• Commented on by judge.
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Little boy bright come to your senses,by Poetess12 14 lines, 1 comment, on Jan 13 6:51 PM 2008• Commented on by judge.
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You must live what you do
And life is poetryby aArticfalcon 93 lines, on Jan 16 1:42 AM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
In a world of hate and greed, / hunger, pain, forever suffering. / Why• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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The topic of this poem focuses on misguided teens who need enlightment and direction.by aArticfalcon 36 lines, 3 comments, on Jan 19 12:02 AM 2008• Commented on by judge.
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can you add more than one poem?
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yes. as many as you like.
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do murdered or missing children count?
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yes. sure. please remeber to write FROM them not About them.
thanks!!
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so I dont know who wrote the abortion poem you have included, but it was very touching and just changed my view entirely.
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Thank you so much for the Gold and the points. I do appreciate both. And thank you for hosting this wonderful and very important contest. God Bless you. Sandy
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