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Give Me [[RAW EMOTION]]

Okay so I've been very emotional the past few days and I just wrote a really crazy poem and I got to thinking, ya know- i want to read a bunch of poems like this.


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Oh and just wanted to let you know i will eventually read AND comment all the poems by the end of the contest, but right now im lazy. lol
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Rules:
+Be un-organized, let all of your emotions out and it doesnt even have to make sense!
+Be responsible in labeling your poetry, if it's adult in nature then label it as adult.
+Be raw, go outside of your poetry safety box- leave the people who read your poems on a day-to-day basis saying, "woah..."

Extra Info:
Im up to reading anything, violence, emo, anything. Let out your emotions.

BE RAW.

If I don't think it's good enough I'll tell you, and you'll have up to two days to re-write it or enhance it in any way you think that could make it better.

Requirements:
In your authors notes box... please provide the following-
*Your AllPoetry Username
**Also the words 'BE RAW' because that's what this contest is all about, being raw.

Example of what I'm looking for:
http://allpoetry.com/poem/3748692

____REMEMBER____

Write something emotional, with strong feelings, and if needed let yourself and your poem be unorganized, dont worry about flow, rhyme, or anything else. BE RAW.


Oh and since I want really really raw stuff i discontinued prewrites- if you have a prewrite that would fit this contest then send me a message, i'll look on it and make my decision from there.

Oh and if you dont follow the rules i WILL DQ YOU. i'll ask you once, and if you dont fix it by two days- byebye poem. sorry but people irritate me sometimes. =D

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on January 8, 2008
  • Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 150, Bronze: 75, Honorable mention: 4 people
  • Final notes:
    Well thanks to everyone for entering my contest. Some entries were spectacular while some were okay and some were... well i think you know where I'm going with this.
    Congratulations to those who won!

Contest Winners

  1. by Puking Faerie Dust 63 lines, 22 comments, on Sep 26 6:11 PM 2006. In Adult, Abuse, Dark, noguest
    Gold trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  2. Trembling behind this masquerade of pieces falling apart
    I try to stand firm I am not ashamed to reveal my broken heart..
    by Loveprevails 83 lines, 14 comments, on Jan 28 5:23 PM 2007. In Abuse
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  3. I'm almost contimplating whether it's worth making an effort at all anymore.
    Hollow feeling deep within, as fingers type words unknown to
    by xxRainbowDawnxx 41 lines, 12 comments, on Jan 1 12:34 PM 2008. In Personal, love, Betrayal
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  4. I give up
    I give up
    by Broken Machine 62 lines, 9 comments, on Dec 28 4:34 PM 2007. In Abuse, Dark, Life, Pain, Personal, Sad, Thoughts, Memories
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  5. This feeling... You get used to it.
    by ISheHer 40 lines, 5 comments, on Dec 28 9:58 PM 2007. In Personal, Thoughts, Life, Love, Pain, Angst, Contest
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  6. guys have there own life and they dont thik about others
    they say one thing but do the other
    by JoleneMarie 43 lines, 6 comments, on Dec 28 5:39 PM 2007
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  7. Error: Unable to find finalist item 3753168, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  8. Error: Unable to find finalist item 3751140, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]

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  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    December 29, 2007
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    great contest idea... I woudl enter, but it would end up being 200/300 lines long... I got so much hurt, anger, sadness in me it's unreal.
    Anyways great idea for a contest, good for people to get their feelings out!
    x


  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    December 30, 2007
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    going well...grr
    i've written one that's full of anger at the moment...and nice and long , with lots of rude words
    it's great.
    anyway, good luck judging...lotsa emotion here!


  • brittany.geeze
    January 2, 2008
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    Okay so i have an idea but i want feedback before i commit to it...

    How about all the finalists go onto another round and fight for a huge amount and the gold trophy?

    of course if that happens im going to have to start saving my points cuz at this moment i only have like 18... but yeah so what do you guys think. comment on this page, leave me a guestbook comment, or send me a message.


  • Puking Faerie Dust gold member
    January 4, 2008
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    Hmmm, well... rounds contests are interesting, but I would suggest you get points for it first XD And make sure everyone would enter and such Other than that, great idea! But would you have them enter fresh writes or pre-writes again?


    • brittany.geeze
      January 4, 2008
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      Okay well i think i'll save for points and then make a rounds contest rather than changing my contest right in the middle lol... i dot that a lot.

  • Puking Faerie Dust gold member
    January 4, 2008
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    Oh, nevermind- you changed the thing to no pre-writes


  • Puking Faerie Dust gold member
    January 8, 2008
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    Wow, thank you so much for gold and the points! And congrats to the other winners as well
    Jeanette*~


    • brittany.geeze
      January 8, 2008
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      Your welcome.
      The first time I read your poem I knew it was gonna win. Unless anything more emotional, more raw came along- and none did. So thanks for entering!

  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    January 8, 2008
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    Thanks so much for Bronze and points!
    Well done to the other winners too .

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