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One Amazing Stanza


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I completely stole this idea from a contest Danna is having. Her contest is a little different but same idea...



Give me one amazing stanza
(a piece of a poem you have written or just a piece of a poem you might write someday)

Now, if you want to win, you will keep the following things in mind:


Hint #1
I don't want a play on words. For instance, nothing pithy like "You held it against me when I told you, you had a beautiful body". (It's hard to come up with good examples but I don't want that kind of thing for this contest.) I don't want corny. ugh!


Hint #2
Less is more. Keep the metaphor simple. Don't just jam five metaphors into one stanza. It distracts from the impact of one good metaphor.


Hint #3
KISS... Keep it simple Stanly. (trying to be nice here) Do NOT try to impress me with big words, etc. Just simply write how you would normally talk and use the metaphor to impress me. (find a unique way to say something simple)


#4 I am adding this one after reading some of the entries. Please NOT TOO WORDY. I hate wordy. Pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease! The winning stanza will not be wordy. That being said... it still needs to feel like it means something. sigh... I can so get lost in the wordiness sometimes... like I'm drowning.


#5 I had to add this one after reading the entries too. I DON'T WANT A POEM... just a tidbit.


If you take these FIVE hints and follow them, you will be in the Preliminaries for sure. If you have no chance of placing, I may let you know so you can try again. If it's real bad, I may not even bother.



Good luck!



Keep it anonymous as you can. Don't respond to me or give me hints as to who you are. I hate that. I am going to pick the one that makes me feel the most so it's really just about knowing what I like. If you don't win, it doesn't mean yours wasn't amazing or I don't like you, etc. It just wasn't my favorite of the ones presented. It's about MY taste... it's MY contest. In other words, it's subjective... all about ME. Nothing personal. Get it?






Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on December 31, 2007
  • Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 100, Bronze: 50, Honorable mention: 2 people
  • Final notes:
    Great job everybody!

Contest Winners

  1. by Fug-azi 5 lines, 3 comments, on Dec 27 8:32 PM 2007. In My own style
    Gold trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  2. I turned to the bright city, and at once
    felt a thrill of connection: Dublin
    by Bad Bill 4 lines, 4 comments, on Dec 27 12:23 PM 2007. In Contest, Thoughts
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  3. by CherylAnn 2 lines, 6 comments, on Dec 27 2:54 PM 2007
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  4. by Celticmoon 10 lines, 9 comments, on Dec 28 1:02 AM 2007. In Thoughts, Personal, Life, Pain
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  5. by In Too Deep1 7 lines, 3 comments, on Dec 28 10:05 AM 2007. In Weird
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  6. Error: Unable to find finalist item 3748212, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  7. by Pamela A Lamppa 7 lines, 13 comments, on Dec 27 4:22 PM 2007. In Life, Love
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  8. by Idle Mind Wondering 14 lines, 6 comments, on Dec 27 12:39 PM 2007
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]

Entries [14]

1 - 14 of 14
  • How we edit our life story, what we publish and what we hide in the footnotes, say alot of who & what we are
    by MassMan 6 lines, 4 comments, on Dec 27 1:37 PM 2007. In Personal, Life, Thoughts
    • Commented on by judge.
  • I am tired of angsty ants walking on white walls
    by myrataal 5 lines, 16 comments, on Dec 27 3:22 PM 2007. In Personal, Thoughts, Society
    • Commented on by judge.
  • by tarcus 2 lines, 2 comments, on Dec 27 5:29 PM 2007. In Contest
    • Commented on by judge.
  • December day swallows darkness,
    licking one bit of light from
    by WolfHeart 2 lines, 6 comments, on Dec 27 7:10 PM 2007. In Contest
    • Commented on by judge.
  • I crept alongside the mist of mind
    where knowledge doesn't know suffering
    by LadyLavender 4 lines, 3 comments, on Dec 27 9:33 PM 2007
    • Commented on by judge.

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Comments

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  • Bad Bill
    December 27, 2007
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    How does one submit a stanza from a pre-written poem? I presume there's a method of transferring part of a poem from one area of the site to another, but I don't know how. Would it be OK to submit a pre-written stanza as if it were new and giving that stanza a new name?

    Bill


    • Cherokee
      December 27, 2007
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      lol... you could copy/paste it. Or, it's supposed to be short so just retype it... or just write a new little piece of a poem. I don't care. Doesn't matter if it's new or old or neither. I'm easy... well, poetrywise anyway.


  • leander Moderators member
    December 27, 2007
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    I'll gie it a try... wrote something today and it's one big sentence, though written in 9 short lines...

    If you don't like it, boot it
    and good luck with the judging!


    • Cherokee
      December 27, 2007
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      I'll sure need it. awwwwwwwwwwwww... I wish that photo was bigger. Is that your lil bundle o joy?

      • leander Moderators member
        December 27, 2007
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        If you're referring to the black thing with white lines, no hun, that's my shirt lol

        It's not my lil bundle of joy - It's my sister's first child - Noor I'm going to spoil the crap out of her unfortunately, but I can't help it lol


        • Cherokee
          December 27, 2007
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          Well, as Uncle, that is your job!


          • leander Moderators member
            December 27, 2007
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            And I'm secretly going to learn here some dirty words too lol

            • Cherokee
              December 27, 2007
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              Well, it's a dirty job but somebody's gotta do it. Mine learned from riding in the car with me. lol That's where they tend to slip right out.

              • leander Moderators member
                December 27, 2007
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                I know those slippery moments I have them about... 50 times a day
                I should wash my mouth more with brown soap I guess


  • Danna Hobart
    December 27, 2007
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    What a cool idea! Now to look through those half written poems and see if there is anything worth entering.

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