Have you ever felt like there was something missing, but you just aren't sure what it is? Write a poem about that.
No pedestrian rhyme.
No purple prose.
Show- don't tell.
Imagery and metaphor are what I look for, so if your poem does not have imagery and metaphor, it has no chance of winning this contest.
No pedestrian rhyme.
No purple prose.
Show- don't tell.
Imagery and metaphor are what I look for, so if your poem does not have imagery and metaphor, it has no chance of winning this contest.
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on January 11, 2008
- Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 40, Bronze: 35, Honorable mention: 1 people
- Final notes: The quality of poems in this contest was phenomenal, and so judging was really hard. Please don't feel bad if you did not place. You all did great. Thank you for entering, and please check out the other contests I have going. Thank you!
Contest Winners
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by Luna Tique Fringe 24 lines, 21 comments, on Jun 3 11:32 PM 2007. In Contemporary, Adult
Gold trophy winner
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It is there on tip of tongue,
an image almost in focus,• Commented on by judge. [remove] -
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Entries [12]
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something missing will to extend the night• Commented on by judge.
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The water foams as the waves crash down Flooding the memories that I’ve recently foundby Just a Sad Song 22 lines, 2 comments, on Dec 24 4:06 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Tell me, when were you born?
Was it on a beautiful morn,by Justin3 26 lines, 3 comments, on Dec 19 2:18 PM 2007. In Prose-poetry• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
At last I surprise to
See me nowhere..
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I was searching for knowledge, trying to open up• Commented on by judge.
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The days seem so final like gravestones.by alexandrathegreat 46 lines, 4 comments, on Jan 7 7:15 PM 2008. In Contemporary, Personal, Angst, Life• Commented on by judge.
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Comments
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Danna Hobart many said no bother thinking more than oh brother for you so to speak
thank you for noticing what I had, and though my bounce wasn't right you let me sit down with a bronze at the finish! I didn't denounce the need to edit, just learning how quickly you go from comment to end -- and fair as that wasn't the commencement range for writer ha-ha. I did feel iffy if I made it too emotionally as only mine~
I'm glad you clearly felt quality poetically from everybody. Your charitable request for us to look at your other contests may be just what I need; I've done a piece for your 'open bar' but was wondering if it would be corresponding for you. However with style clarifications I'll check if it's closed.
second focus I should catch up here too,
also called
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ty for the contest , for the inspiration and congratulations to all.
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Thanks, Danna, glad you liked it. Gold among this array of poets is truly an honor.



