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There's Something Missing

Have you ever felt like there was something missing, but you just aren't sure what it is? Write a poem about that.

No pedestrian rhyme.

No purple prose.

Show- don't tell.

Imagery and metaphor are what I look for, so if your poem does not have imagery and metaphor, it has no chance of winning this contest.

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on January 11, 2008
  • Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 40, Bronze: 35, Honorable mention: 1 people
  • Final notes:
    The quality of poems in this contest was phenomenal, and so judging was really hard. Please don't feel bad if you did not place. You all did great. Thank you for entering, and please check out the other contests I have going. Thank you!

Contest Winners

  1. by Luna Tique Fringe 24 lines, 21 comments, on Jun 3 11:32 PM 2007. In Contemporary, Adult
    Gold trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  2. It is there on tip of tongue,
    an image almost in focus,
    by CarolDesjarlais 37 lines, 6 comments, on Dec 25 8:21 AM 2007. In Spiritual
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  3. by also called 60 lines, 6 comments, on Dec 26 2:00 AM 2007. In Personal
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  4. We are, not as we were before
    by Vickery 13 lines, 3 comments, on Jan 3 2:39 PM 2008
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]

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  • also called
    January 11, 2008
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    savor in sequence...

    Danna Hobart many said no bother thinking more than oh brother for you so to speak

    thank you for noticing what I had, and though my bounce wasn't right you let me sit down with a bronze at the finish! I didn't denounce the need to edit, just learning how quickly you go from comment to end -- and fair as that wasn't the commencement range for writer ha-ha. I did feel iffy if I made it too emotionally as only mine~

    I'm glad you clearly felt quality poetically from everybody. Your charitable request for us to look at your other contests may be just what I need; I've done a piece for your 'open bar' but was wondering if it would be corresponding for you. However with style clarifications I'll check if it's closed.

    second focus I should catch up here too,
    also called


  • CarolDesjarlais silver member
    January 11, 2008
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    ty for the contest , for the inspiration and congratulations to all.


  • Luna Tique Fringe
    January 11, 2008
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    Thanks, Danna, glad you liked it. Gold among this array of poets is truly an honor.