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you left this feeling here inside me

1.
And you don't know how hard I've tried
to convince myself that I
can easily forget

you left this feeling
here inside me
One that never fails to find me.

you won't see me change my mind
But I really wish that I
Could forget the way you are

I can see that you're not beside me
But I still feel you shine inside of me

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2. I don't get you . . .
I can't forget what you've forgotten
all along
I've never been so alone. . .

I was pretending
Your secret kiss of confidence
Was my escape


3.
You're waking up
A part of me i've never known
And i've never felt
So invincible

You hold the rights i'll never own
And i've never felt
So alien

[lyrics by shiny toy guns]
[pic: lara jade]


be inspired, I want to feel like AP hasn't yet gone to hell.
show me something GOOD.

free/prose
don't worry about a cliche subject such as lost love.. I'm a sucker for it.
just show it in a non-cliche way!

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on February 23, 2008
  • Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 200, Bronze: 100, Honorable mention: 7 people
  • Final notes:
    As always, it took me such a long time to finally judge this. but, unlike so many other of my contests, I was really surprised and pleased with almost every single entry! It was such a relief to find that there is still creative poetic juice flowing here on AP.

    Thank you all for taking the time to enter, and for being patient.
    1.a love letter
    2.glance over shoulder; snap
    3.summer love burnt more than the frost bites of winter
    7 HMs:
    -call me over for drinks and something secretive
    -scents of you
    -two degrees of separation
    -plodding
    -gyroscope journeys
    -so long
    -you left this feeling here--x

    all entries are worth reading. so do just that

Contest Winners

  1. Error: Unable to find finalist item 3750122, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  2. Glance Over Shoulder; snap
    You are a run-on sentence that does not believe in punctuation. You put a period after the word forever instead of a comma and somehow it l
    by Hell In Harmony 27 lines, 5 comments, on Dec 26 7:28 PM 2007. In Pain, Personal, Sad, Thoughts, Weird, Life, Love, Other
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  3. Summer Love Burnt More Than The Frost Bites Of Winter
    by blemished irises 15 lines, 4 comments, on Dec 23 8:32 PM 2007
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  4. Call Me Over For Drinks And Something Secretive.
    I want to write us off to less than a phone call a month.
    by Blueisacolour 25 lines, 2 comments, on Jan 27 10:08 AM 2008. In Love, Personal, Life, Sad, Lost love
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  5. Scents of You
    by zochit2me 30 lines, 3 comments, on Dec 23 5:40 PM 2007. In Contemporary, Love, Thoughts
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  6. Error: Unable to find finalist item 3747136, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  7. Gyroscope Journeys
    Contentious little bitch you are
    that counters when I go to far
    by Man of Harlech 6 lines, 10 comments, on Jan 27 8:53 AM 2008. In Contest, Life, Personal
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  8. Error: Unable to find finalist item 3738384, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  9. You left this feeling here--x
    I am resigned to find shadows
    in your silence
    by Atrophya 90 lines, 3 comments, on Jan 5 8:15 PM 2008
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]

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  • solipsistic
    December 23, 2007
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    I'm afraid that most of AP has gone to hell though.

    Awesome contest though.


  • solipsistic
    December 23, 2007
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    /name


  • a tragic end
    December 23, 2007
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    I bookmarked. I love Shiny Toy Guns. But I am unsure I can convince you to keep faith in AP. I shall try.


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    December 23, 2007
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    ill be back tomoz with an entry


  • blemished irises
    December 23, 2007
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    i have entered dolly.
    i want to write something more beautiful, but im at a loss of words currently.

    loveyou.


  • blue starburst
    December 23, 2007
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    bookmarked, will enter once the writer's block is done.
    ♥


  • Hell In Harmony
    December 23, 2007
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    I WILL enter. I love that band & those lyrics.
    andd well.. this seems to be my topic of interest later.
    Keep this one open for Me<3

  • Hell In Harmony
    December 26, 2007
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    Soo. Basically. I am writing something for this right now, but I wanna enter it in another contest as well, so after Im done can you tempo. open this up for prewrites? or do you just want me to post it twice?

    ILY

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