~ SET the BAR ~ for the Record of Entries... with a catch ~ > NO GOLD Prewrites Entries....
It's 2008 ~ and I'm looking to set the bar for the Record # of entries.
This will close at the end of January.
Judging will be complete by the 2nd week of February
I will comment on every entry
Prewrite ~ Fresh Writes are welcomed....
*** Note just for sorting reasons *** Fresh Writes will be moved immediately to finalist area. Reason being ~ is at least one of the fresh writes will be awarded a special award ~ to be announce later~ after the judging of the special fresh write is decided ~ the fresh writes will be moved back down with the rest of the entries unless being awarded a trophy ~
Only If I get 1000 entries:
I will give GOLD 1000 points, Silver 750 Points, Bronze 500 points (2250 total points)
and 10 H.M per 100 (3000 total points) - I will also give a special prize to the 1000 entry in the contest. - 500 points
Otherwise:
The points will be based on the number of entries I recieve.
RULES:
1. Anything goes
2. Must mark accordingly - if adult mark it > adult!
3. NO PREWRITES that won GOLD
4. Line limit ~ is whatever you want ~ but If I get bored I won't finish it...
5. Have fun....
6. Prewrites and fresh writes welcome
7. Enter as many times as you like.
Questions? message me ....
CURRENT STATUS:
Fresh write special award is choosen ~ Announcement will be when Judging is complete ~
I am still have a lot to read ~ To be fair ~ I'm reading them in no particular order ~ until I get through them ~ ONCE all the poems have been commented on ~ I will go through ONE more time to be sure I didn't miss any of the ones I really liked ~ It's would be easy to do ~ with 355 entries ~ I would like to be sure ~ Please be patient with me ~ I promise to give EVERY entry the attention it deserves ~ I bumped it up to 103 winners ~ I'm still reading I will be completely finished my judging by the end of this week!!!
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on February 24, 2008
- Rewards: Gold: 550, Silver: 250, Bronze: 150, Honorable mention: 115 people
- Final notes: My fresh write winner ~ is Mc1r Please contact me ~ to let me know if you will prefer points or an Allpoetry Tee-shirt ~ I will make arrangements with Kevin ~ to pay for the shirt ~ if you prefer points you'll get 500 points just let me know ~ you did a fantastic job ~
It took a lot to get throught them all ~ I was experiancing major computer problems ~ among other things ~ I DID read each and everyone of them
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SPECIAL MENTION: These were definately GOLDEN in my opinion and worthy of mention:
Beyond Boundries < Wow ~
The Sculptor < You blew me away!
Unfaithful Goodbye <~ Touching `
Slow Motion Feelings <~ memorable
My Mermaid Love <~ Over the top good
I couldn't award these or any other gold poem ~ due to the fact they won gold ~ however at one point or another they were in the Gold position in this contest ~ I clearly wrote no gold prewrite ~ and I can't award it ~ knowing they did have gold at the time of judging ~
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All of the entries were extrodinary in one way or another ~ you completely moved me ~ I truly hope you enjoyed my contest ~ and feel I was as honest as I could be ~ I didn't choose by who I thought you were ~ just by if it rocked me moreso than any other ~ ~ the top three I think are absolutely fantastic ~ I really enjoyed em ~ whoever you are ~ ...
Thanks so much to you all ~ I DOOOOOOOOOOO appreciate your entries ~ I really enjoyed reading them ~ and learning about you ~ I wanted to give special kudos to the the person who wrote a poem ~ who's studing to be a pyschiatrist.... I think you having that well of a perspective ~ you will be able to reach many people who needs help! ~ really incrediable job!
Again ~ thanks so much for entering I did enjoy the contest ~ Don't forget Mc1r you need to let me know what you want ~ NICE JOB to you all!!!!
Contest Winners
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Entrancing melodies play softly within my heart
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They are surely unaware of the inability
to duplicate a peculiar peopleby poetryality 75 lines, 31 comments, on Jan 11 1:05 AM 2008. In Contemporary, Life, Nature, Society
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Summer's wind soothes our souls' deep ache,
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I misread the signs
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I looked at the little child, / who was almost begging for help, / she wanted to know, / how to save her parents from death, / I told her a• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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In evenings of solitude there rest in blues leave sometimes, follow the pasture nowby spiritualangel 28 lines, 2 comments, on Dec 19 3:40 AM 2007. In Life, Adolescent, Thoughts, Contest, Intimacy
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When midnight strikes,
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his mouth came down onto mine
slanting without difficultyby restful.soul 30 lines, 10 comments, on Jan 8 7:04 PM 2008. In Dark, Love, Fantasy
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by j i n 59 lines, 10 comments, on Jan 17 3:03 AM 2008. In Life, Hope, Thoughts, Family, Friendship, Dedication
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Yes, you do see them / tripping over their tiny shoes, / guffawing on the tinderbox. / Each wing twitches / in your peripheral sight, / you see their sparks and rubs / panicked and ducking. / Each one's sho• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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The light of the goddess of the viod Shall Shine.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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She thinks about him everyday, / Her love for him, she can't convey / He's her star in the night; / A fire burning forever bright / / He d• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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by j i n 50 lines, 19 comments, on Sep 27 10:13 PM 2007. In Spiritual, Contemporary, Thoughts, Hope, My own style, Adult
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My mom left me and my brother with her parents three years ago on Valentine's day. She left to go get married. I've only seen her once sinc• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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Momentary illusions
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We sat in a dark booth
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by Ephiphany 34 lines, 44 comments, on Jan 16 12:56 PM 2008. In My own style, Lost in thought, Escape, Self, Personal, Life, Inspirational
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Open your gates to the ventures that pave the process. Do not dwell on the tireless remembrances of the concluded, ecstatic or doleful.by BowelsOFloveANDhate 12 lines, 3 comments, on Dec 2 6:06 PM 2007. In Personal, Thoughts, Life, Inspirational
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The sense of scents, The essence that unravels the nose,by BowelsOFloveANDhate 19 lines, 5 comments, on Dec 2 3:55 PM 2007. In Love, Thoughts, Longing
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This is from the stand point of a man with an inner demon.by ShadowsMidnightRose 26 lines, 7 comments, on Jan 20 8:43 PM 2008. In Dark, Fantasy, Life, Death, Destruction, Pain, Other
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Music is beauty
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Listen to the sounds
They are all aroundby Kappa Pyua 49 lines, 13 comments, on Nov 13 10:17 AM 2006. In Childrens, Lyrics
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pulling on jeans
tucking in teeby aiyana 52 lines, 11 comments, on Nov 7 3:07 PM 2007. In cowboy poetry, Personal
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Hey is that peanut butter that I smell.by SHadowHex666 13 lines, 8 comments, on Jan 26 10:19 PM 2008. In Humor, Weird, Thoughts, Other, My own style, Abstract
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Do you feel the heat of my hands?by SHadowHex666 26 lines, 2 comments, on Jan 24 2:56 PM 2008. In Dark, Fantasy, Nature, Other, Thoughts, Weird, My own style
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Awakening:
I bear alone this melody, carried forth in youthby The Squeeze 20 lines, 3 comments, on Jan 30 10:24 PM 2008. In Insanity, Dark, Abstract, My own style
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This old house it Mon's and gr ones
buy it can tell one heck of a storyby my bloody secret 14 lines, 5 comments, on Mar 26 10:32 PM 2005. In Personal, Childrens
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We Poets seem to be blessed at times
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The trees are dressed in red and gold, / A blanket from the winter's cold / Thr crackle of twigs underfoot / Soon are fire, then are soot / Fleeting sunlight, shorter days / Bid goodbye to Summer's ways / The bir• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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In a box left on my porch
I found self doubt and remorseby Klinci3 5 lines, 6 comments, on Dec 18 7:29 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
the late sun's glow
kissing every shimmering frosty peakby Kaleidoscopeyes 15 lines, 3 comments, on Dec 20 5:41 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
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by Kaleidoscopeyes 22 lines, 5 comments, on Jul 29 10:14 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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She picks up the toys, her hair in her face.
Talent in dancing, virtue in grace.by Klinci3 9 lines, 5 comments, on Dec 12 7:41 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
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I can never explain my emotions to well,so i sit and write it in ink.I have so much i have wanted to tell but now i think I'll write it insby ExpectingMommy18 41 lines, 36 comments, on Sep 4 8:30 PM 2007. In Life, Love, Other, Personal, Thoughts, Teenage thinking, Family, Happiness, Freewrite• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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song about an angel and demon
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Staring into the blue eyes
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Sitting on the old tire swing on our tree / In the forest of our youth / The tire swing, where we first met / When I cursed you with cootieby Kaleidoscopeyes 22 lines, 5 comments, on Jul 10 3:42 PM 2007. In Love• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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She was like rising sun. The refreshing breeze on a sweltering day. The snapdragons among the delphinium. Her lack of rhythm reflected in hby Kaleidoscopeyes 10 lines, 6 comments, on Dec 27 12:42 AM 2007. In Sad• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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From the first time we met,
I thought he was crazy,by StarLightResurrects 22 lines, 5 comments, on Jan 1 2:05 AM 2008. In Love, Contest, Weird, Thoughts• Commented on by judge. -
Mirrors,
present to meby The Madman 26 lines, 42 comments, on Dec 18 11:23 AM 2007
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Blatently you disreguard efforts on your exclusion
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A dying thought written down on the paper. A blood covered blade lying upon the desk.by krazyklette17 18 lines, 3 comments, on Jan 19 11:35 AM 2008. In Dark• Commented on by judge.
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Lies, That's all you told me.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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A misty rain shrouds the land,
Water cascades down the sand.by Simply Simple 25 lines, 6 comments, on Dec 16 7:12 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
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A piece written in 2000, this is the first time posted online.by Glasyalabolas 58 lines, 2 comments, on Jan 28 8:58 AM 2008. In My own style, Pain, Depression, Self-hate• Commented on by judge.
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We stand-alone And see everything you doby ShadowsMidnightRose 20 lines, 8 comments, on Jan 30 11:00 AM 2008• Commented on by judge.
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I tossed and turned in cotton fields Despairing of witless slumberby Philip K Starck 20 lines, 2 comments, on Jan 30 3:06 PM 2008. In Nature• Commented on by judge.
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Waking with new eyes;
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i lay here tonight as this force pulls me in deeper
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I see you there...
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A fun little ditty that I thought was clever and witty...so I wrote it down.by Demington 30 lines, 2 comments, on Dec 29 1:31 AM 2007. In Lost in thought• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Scarlet ink
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to deflower the labyrinth of the old metaphysical mystery,
raw eyes drowned in determination, in a force of magnetic vision.by spiritualangel 28 lines, 2 comments, on Dec 23 10:27 AM 2007. In Contemporary, Contest, Thoughts, Spiritual, Hope, Life• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
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Another great, intense contest from you.
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Hey you ~ how ya doing? I've sent you a ton of messages ~ You okay~ i was deeply worried about ya.... I like the name btw...!!!!
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Wow
You'd think with this kind of contest it would nearly be filled by now.
I'm alright. Awwww, thanks. XD
I haven't received any.
Do you have a Myspace by chance?
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I did ~ but it was taken~ so I don't now...
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oh wow, good luck with having a lot of entries here and especially in reading all of 'em O.O
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Thank you so much.. Rheea
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Thanks for the award.
wonderful contest.
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Thank you
Thank you so much for the Silver Trophy
I have been in the hospital for a week logged on and just saw this....
It made my night
Again thank you so much
Congrats to all the other winners as well
Hugs n love
Susan~~~








