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Generic Lemming

Born on time,
On or around the preordained date,

by Grimoire 26 lines, 25 comments, on Oct 23 8:06 PM 2007. In Contest, Society, Life, Lost
Gold trophy winner

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The Sea Dares To Weep

by amaranthine lover 27 lines, 19 comments, on Dec 18 5:52 PM 2007. In Contest, Fantasy, Contemporary, Abstract, Dark, Villanelle, noguest
Bronze trophy winner

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The Fallen's Eden (full english)

How has thee fallen?
drowning the world...

by Audric Beaumont 90 lines, 15 comments, on Oct 6 4:30 PM 2007

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Empty boxes

In a box left on my porch
I found self doubt and remorse

by Klinci3 5 lines, 6 comments, on Dec 18 7:29 PM 2007

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The Jigsaw And The Middle-Class Green

The woodcutter targets greenstick trees
and soft wood

by Floorboards 22 lines, 30 comments, on Nov 17 8:51 AM 2007. In Thoughts, Society, Nature, Abstract

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If Your Walls Could Talk

by dark cajun shadow 35 lines, 6 comments, on Dec 16 9:42 AM 2007. In Adult, Erotica, Life, Love, Personal, Thoughts, Bdsm

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