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Write Me Pain

I want who you really are. I want the good and the bad of you. I want white and black colors yet paint out the whole picture. Give me only the truth. Give me what you feel like baring.

-I don't want any poems that are happy- unless you write about how you were raped or something and how you have finally gotten past that and are happy now. Not exactly the happiest poem but a happy ending I suppose.
-Write about any abuse, it's your choice.
-I don't want poems about you and your bf/gf breaking up please! I just can't judge those at all so you probably wouldn't win.

RULES:
You cannot bash anyones poems- It isn't nice!
Cuss if you want, give me a dirty pretty, rhyme, don't rhyme. I don't care!
BUT PLEASE PUT YOUR POEM IN A POEM FORM! As in, don't just write it like a paragraph!
Oh no chat speak and spell most of the words correctly please!

I am going to up the points when this contest is over. ( =


Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on December 31, 2007
  • Rewards: Gold: 500, Silver: 200, Bronze: 100, Honorable mention: 4 people
  • Final notes:
    Hello all!

    Wow! This was probably the most hard contest I've ever had to judge! I wanted to give 13 of you hm's but I only picked four of you! You all did a great job writing! Some of your poems were short and to the point and some were very long and personal. Thank you very much for sharing your deep, raw, emotions with me. It helped to know I wasn't so alone. I'm sorry for the people that didn't get hm's because you probably deserved one!

    I hope you join my next contest! I think I will be having one soon! ( =

    Happy new year to you all! = D

    hidingxeveryday

Contest Winners

  1. Error: Unable to find finalist item 3745724, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  2. Error: Unable to find finalist item 3749472, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  3. Ashes to ashes dust to dust
    by MyxFallenxAngel 18 lines, 2 comments, on Dec 16 4:25 PM 2007. In Pain, Abuse
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  4. Indecent, Is that all I am?
    by KateMadness 32 lines, 4 comments, on Dec 16 4:53 PM 2007. In Dark, Pain, Personal, Hate, Depression, Anger
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  5. Shattering glass jolts me from sleep,
    screams escalating in the gloom.
    by Emile 24 lines, 5 comments, on Dec 16 6:00 PM 2007. In Personal, Pain, Abuse, Contest
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  6. Tear staind cheeks, Heart shattered yet it still beats.
    by dark-dreamer112 35 lines, 1 comment, on Dec 16 10:27 PM 2007. In Dark, Life, Other, Pain, Personal, Sad, Thoughts, Weird
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  7. Lost inside with thoughts
    of the past, everything
    by voodoo ink 33 lines, 3 comments, on Dec 23 7:15 PM 2007. In sad, dark, personal, thoughts, pain, depression
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  8. She closes her eyes and prays for a better life, Then she hears him...
    by Ntagatf 51 lines, 2 comments, on Dec 16 3:17 PM 2007. In Abuse, Sad, Dark, Life, Pain, Other
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  9. My mind spinning with pain and dread
    It's times like this i wish i was dead
    by ley527 7 lines, 10 comments, on Dec 28 3:30 PM 2007
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  10. Behind the closed door,
    there is a secret.
    by Hope Angel 32 lines, 4 comments, on Dec 28 8:50 PM 2007. In Pain, Sad, Contest, Dark, Thoughts
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  11. second draft because the first one sucked like a fish out of water.
    by Classic Crayons 127 lines, 7 comments, on Dec 16 3:51 PM 2007. In Thoughts, Pain, Lost in thought, My life, Depression
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  12. Error: Unable to find finalist item 3746934, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  13. Error: Unable to find finalist item 3716246, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  14. Three months went by before I realized
    by pattyann4500 40 lines, 21 comments, on Dec 19 12:41 AM 2007. In Angst, Dark, Sad, Personal, Pain, Thoughts
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  15. I breathed deep
    and checked
    by rude pedestrian 07 24 lines, 5 comments, on Dec 19 11:25 PM 2007. In Personal, Abuse
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  16. The dreadful memories Pass through me
    by CinderellaStory 53 lines, 2 comments, on Dec 27 9:28 PM 2007
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  17. Watch and wait were going to die
    by Hated. 22 lines, 1 comment, on Dec 17 2:14 PM 2007. In personal, semi-dark
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  18. I thought I knew you but the truth was I didn't.
    by DancingRain1692 31 lines, 4 comments, on Dec 16 4:16 PM 2007. In Personal abuse
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]

Entries [26]

1 - 26 of 26
  • One Month. So much can change in that time. One month. Love can be lost, It can be found. One Month. Someone new could be in your heart. On
    by Speeno 18 lines, 1 comment, on Dec 16 2:53 PM 2007
    • Commented on by judge.
  • my scars remind me of a life once lived
    by xeniaisme12 19 lines, 3 comments, on Dec 16 3:25 PM 2007. In Sad, Society, Thoughts, Dark, Life, Depressed, Personal., Contest
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Inside the core of me Lies a boy of jubile
    by AnthonyLavin 16 lines, 2 comments, on Dec 16 3:31 PM 2007
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Something that I don't understand is Why you seem to get so angry at me...
    by TwiztidMaggot 34 lines, 3 comments, on Dec 16 3:43 PM 2007
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Blank stone not writ upon
    by WolfHeart 34 lines, 5 comments, on Dec 16 3:47 PM 2007. In Pain, Dark, Contest
    • Commented on by judge.
  • I really don't know. I just, er, am discussing walls and shades of gray.
    by Baisi 17 lines, 1 comment, on Dec 16 3:52 PM 2007. In Contest
    • Commented on by judge.
  • How people have hurt me, All my life,
    by tsuki no kaasu 9 lines, 1 comment, on Dec 17 4:03 PM 2007. In Contest, Dark, Pain, Personal
    • Commented on by judge.
  • violated of my words
    raped of my thoughts
    by IntelligentSoul 23 lines, 2 comments, on Dec 19 4:20 PM 2007
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Salt my wounds
    Forced to drink the blood and eat my flesh
    by pillowjoe 24 lines, 2 comments, on Dec 21 1:03 AM 2007. In Sad, Personal, Pain, Angst, Dark, Love
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Every hour of everyday
    She thinks about dying
    by XxESPNCHICKxX 45 lines, 3 comments, on Dec 21 8:28 PM 2007. In Life, Pain, Personal, Sad, Other
    • Commented on by judge.

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  • Girl With Guitar silver member
    December 17, 2007
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    BOOKMARKED oops caps


  • ExpectingMommy18
    December 21, 2007
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    you should really add prewrites sis,i made a new dark one yesterday that i think you will like

  • HiddenxSecrets
    December 31, 2007
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    Thank you very much for the gold trophy and the points. Congrats to the other winners as well.

    HxS