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Failed Forms

It's been a while and I thought it was about time I host a new contest, and this time I want to make it a contest for primarily PREWRITES. New poems are welcome too, if they follow the RULES. The point of the contest is to show you that even failed form poems are poetry. I have enlisted the help of my AP sister sunnyday to co-host this with me.

With that said, what we want is your best poem that failed to meet the form it was written in. We do not judge on form, but how good the poem itself is. You could for instance have tried to write a Monchielle (Starhiker's form), and ended with something close, but not completely right.

If you make a new poem, it has to be in a form you have not written in before (we will check). As said before, we do not judge on form, but on the poem itself. Though it MUST be form poetry.

1. FREE FORM poems are NOT accepted, and will be REMOVED if entered. NO FREE VERSE! MUST ATTEMPT FORM POETRY!
2. Standard rules apply... no chat speak, no sticky caps, no cutting or suicide, no bashing other poets. If you enter erotica keep it tasteful and mild...
3. Please remember to label it properly, and edit the Authors Notes to describe the intended form.
4. Add your AP-name in the authors notes...

Everyone have fun and give us some wonderful words from your heart.

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on December 25, 2007
  • Rewards: Gold: 600, Silver: 400, Bronze: 200, Honorable mention: 8 people
  • Final notes:
    This was a hard contest to judge, and with x-mas falling suddenly upon me, I was unable to close it when planned. I still have not had time to comment the poems, but those still in the contest after new year will get comment. Me and sunny day has negotiated back and forth which one should win, and we are both pleased with this order. We also decided that all should get Honorable Mention, because if you qualified, you deserve a prize! Finally, it is time to hand out the awards...

    1st place "Point Of View - Oddku" by freespirit51 awarded 600 points
    I have always been wondering how we appear from the stars point of view, and this Oddku was certainly giving a new perspective.

    2nd place "the calling" by Amera awarded 400 points
    This was an absolutely wonderful poem, that touched my heart, and was very close to grabbing the gold. The magic washed over me in waves.

    3rd place "Boldly Life" by Peteskid awarded 200 points
    I am always impressed with invented forms, and the creators bold courage to make it a form others like to use. I know, I did it myself.

    Each of the eight other poems entered gets an Honorable Mention, and the belonging prize points. Order in this list does not signify placing in the contest, but is completely random.

    "Life and chances" by Pain Equals Life
    "From The Heart" by sheltered
    "Rain" by quantumsurveyor
    "exemplify" by torn asunder
    "Sadistic Villanelles" by rainwalker
    "Awakening" by Astral Flare
    "An Eternal Winter" by Carly Pop
    "Fatal Stroll" by imperfectflaw

Contest Winners

  1. From a stars
    point of view,
    by freespirit51 19 lines, 32 comments, on Dec 8 7:33 PM 2007. In Nature, New Poetry Form
    Gold trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  2. here I come to this magic place
    fortress nested in time and space
    by Amera 19 lines, 13 comments, on Feb 20 8:58 AM 2007. In Fantasy
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  3. I am kite with tethered tail
    holding high against the winds
    by Peteskid 26 lines, 4 comments, on Nov 28 11:31 PM 2007
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  4. Life's / Confusing, / Sometimes not worth it / But we live it anyway, / Broken hearts, dreams, and realities / Drive people over the edge /
    by Pain Equals Life 18 lines, 2 comments, on May 7 9:14 PM 2007. In Weird, Thoughts, Life
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  5. by sheltered 23 lines, 3 comments, on Nov 26 8:37 PM 2007
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  6. the rain
    it pours down sound
    by quantumsurveyor 12 lines, 4 comments, on Dec 17 1:42 AM 2007. In Contest, Nature
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  7. for those who "know not what they do" / the life they lead is filled with naught / it's clear that, unlike me (and you?) / they fail to act
    by torn asunder 17 lines, 2 comments, on Jul 3 1:35 PM 2007
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  8. The sun awakens.
    by Astral Flare 2 lines, 23 comments, on May 27 1:27 PM 2006. In Haiku, Nature
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  9. Snow in September New Yorkers still shoveling Below Ground Zero
    by Carly Pop 2 lines, 8 comments, on Sep 4 9:44 PM 2006. In Contemporary
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  10. Error: Unable to find finalist item 3444348, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]

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  • Vera Rich
    December 12, 2007
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    I have seen a number of "form" poems failed by judges who themselves did not understand the rules of the form. So I am most pleased to see this competition of yours. What I find particularly annoying is when entrants in my competitions state the form they are writing in. My reaction is the one that most editors share:if this person does not think I will recognize the form when I see it, then why does he/she want me to judge their work?

    What is even more annoying is when the poem does not in fact fulfil the rules of the form the author claims it to be!


    • Starhiker
      December 12, 2007
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      I agree...

      Many contest holders do not know the form they hold contest for, and it is annoying when people have to explain the form, unless it is new or uncommon. Often it is enough to write the form after the title, for those of us who is not immediately recognizing the form. This does ofcourse not refer to form specific contests. Finally I agree that the rules should be followed, and I intend to be strict in this contest, within reason naturally. Thanks for your comment, I appreciate it! Jim


  • Iris Doyle
    December 12, 2007
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    hey starkhiker! Umm i was just wondering...what my poem "Fatal Stroll" would be...see I usually know what kind of poem mine are but this I can't really tell. It's not freestyle trust me but I just can't remember what it's called. Could you check it for me? THanks

    • Starhiker
      December 13, 2007
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      Sorry,

      I am not able to figure out which form it is supposed to be, but I see clearly that it is attempting to follow a form. I am uncertain if it meets the target of the contest, but I will allow it. Best of luck in the contest! Jim


  • sheltered
    December 25, 2007
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    Thank you much and congrats and merry Christmas everyone

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