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Show me what you got! :)

Ok people I want RAW and POWERFUL emotions. INTENSITY and HEAT. So here are some options:

1.abuse
2.death
3.addiction
4.apprehension
5.rape
6.eating disorders
7.insanity
8.fear
9.depression
10.rage


So here are the rules, you must use one or more of the options. The catch is it has to be COMPLETELY PERSONAL! I don't want some shit about what somebody may have felt, I want every single word to mean something to you. Breathe life in to every syllable. BARE YOUR SOUL! Put option(s) number in author box and tell me your story behind your poem. I can promise you that I willbe gentle. If rules are not followed I will DQ you!!! So get to it! Show me! Good Luck

UPDATE: So I decided to allow prewrites...but all the same rules appy K

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on December 7, 2007
  • Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 50, Bronze: 50
  • Final notes:
    Thanks to everyone who entered It was so hard to choose the winners...all poems were fabulous

Contest Winners

  1. Splintered.
    by OurxBeginning 37 lines, 14 comments, on Nov 30 12:24 PM 2007. In Personal, Abuse, Dark
    Gold trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  2. Unwrapped Fury
    by LadyDementia 25 lines, 15 comments, on Nov 20 9:40 AM 2007. In Contest, Dark
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  3. Bacardi 151
    Shell shocked by age five,
    maybe even younger,
    by punksense 29 lines, 18 comments, on Aug 16 1:20 AM 2007. In Life, Sad
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]

Entries [9]

1 - 9 of 9
  • Here
    I am in a long distance relationship and this is the deepression I am feeling without Chris.
    by Blooming Poet 35 lines, 2 comments, on Dec 6 6:44 PM 2007. In Love, sad, depression
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Depression strikes again
    sitting in this dark stupor
    waiting for something to happen
    by xmuffinxfacex 21 lines, 2 comments, on Dec 6 7:40 PM 2007. In Dark, Sad, Personal
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Along The Way
    Everything that has been learned,
    Forgotten pages that have been turned,
    by Nyhte 51 lines, 3 comments, on Dec 7 2:44 AM 2007
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
  • lost boy
    I am sitting here swimming in my thoughts
    hoping to somehow understand the meaning of me
    by Rele anmwe 46 lines, 41 comments, on Feb 24 5:48 AM 2006. In Sad
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite

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  • OurxBeginning
    December 6, 2007
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    Aww I have the perfect pre-write for this.

  • OurxBeginning
    December 7, 2007
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    Thanks for the gold trophy and the points. Congratulations to the other winners as well.