I have been bored with nothing to do on this site lately, and since I have points to burn, why not start yet another contest.
GIVE ME YOU BEST PRE-WRITE!!!
If it won something in a contest before, give me your next best pre-write.. be fair to other contestants; this includes silver, bronze, and honorable mention, not just gold
One per person.
I will comment when I get to it.
I am brutally honest in comments.
I will not DQ in this contest, but if you get in the finalist list, chances are you will stay there.
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So, with it being the Holiday season, I decided to extend this contest until Christmas. Have fun!
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GIVE ME YOU BEST PRE-WRITE!!!
If it won something in a contest before, give me your next best pre-write.. be fair to other contestants; this includes silver, bronze, and honorable mention, not just gold
One per person.
I will comment when I get to it.
I am brutally honest in comments.
I will not DQ in this contest, but if you get in the finalist list, chances are you will stay there.
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So, with it being the Holiday season, I decided to extend this contest until Christmas. Have fun!
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Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on January 18, 2008
- Rewards: Gold: 300
- Final notes: congrats to all
Contest Winners
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by thelordreigns 20 lines, 39 comments, on Jul 31 9:25 PM 2007. In Life, Love, pro-life, double etheree
Gold trophy winner
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I'm the tone-deaf, fear-
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Emotional bruised today, / easily broken hearted yesterday. / Loving and caring most of the time, / Tearful and fearful all the time. / Worries for the future, / guilty of the past. / Twisted in• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
- Error: Unable to find finalist item 3598804, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
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Cyber sex is something new.by SpoiledWrott10 40 lines, 4 comments, on Dec 4 2:49 AM 2007. In Humor• Viewed by judge. [remove]
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I love you more than words can express so I won't even tryby alivefromlove 6 lines, 7 comments, on Nov 17 2:13 AM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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Simple days with geisha flowersby Dark Whispers 19 lines, 3 comments, on Dec 4 6:38 AM 2007. In sad• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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I'd Give It Up For You / The Sun, The Moon, The stars Above, / The coke, The weed, The booze, / The air I breathe, / The drugs I abuse, / Iby Jessi-desensytized 24 lines, 6 comments, on Jun 5 6:35 AM 2007. In Drugs, love, depression, hopeless, crime• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
- Error: Unable to find finalist item 2689360, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
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Walking down this path I'm on
not knowing whats ahead.by Dazed N Life 40 lines, 5 comments, on Dec 6 7:32 AM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
Transported to a place deep within my spirit, / A ride. / Sweet. / Smooth. / Liquid. / Like a dream. / An" Enigma". / An "Age of Loneliness• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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Forever burning, a kindred yearning...
Gratification, Verification, Domination, Humiliation.by marciakay81 8 lines, 2 comments, on Dec 1 5:54 AM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove] - Error: Unable to find finalist item 3692100, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
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They say I am insane,
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Never let your hopes and dreams Fade away like a distant memoryby x Bright Eyes x 36 lines, on Dec 16 6:54 AM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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Bringing the first trickles of Winter's breath,
Gripping the world into the depths of its icy grave.by Timoteo8415 20 lines, on Nov 1 8:53 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
The snow falls gently
Hitting the ground in silenceby MourningSun 46 lines, 6 comments, on Dec 16 2:17 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
A misty rain shrouds the land,
Water cascades down the sand.by Simply Simple 25 lines, 6 comments, on Dec 16 7:12 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove] - Error: Unable to find finalist item 3563636, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
Silver trophy winner
Bronze trophy winner
Entries [88]
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I am stone enclosed by wind.by micol 40 lines, 8 comments, on Nov 8 9:10 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I'm so over him... Well, I wish I was,by Sticks-And-Stones 28 lines, 3 comments, on Dec 1 8:34 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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I wrap my hands around you
And press my lips against you.
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I sometimes deep inside me / / have ideas of mysterious revelry / / amidst old stories describing pagan life. / / Some most welcomed b• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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SMILE pretty, girl. Go ahead, LIE to there faces. HIDE your shame, FAKE your happiness.by eyes2see-wrds2speak 0 lines, 15 comments, on Dec 1 11:16 PM 2007. In self abuse, Dark, Weird, Depression, Anger, Emo, Escape, Personal.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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The thought of being alone Scares me to death• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Kisses are champagne
and I have always been
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THE NIGHT BEFORE THE SUICIDE
A Gothic Horror Story• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
We sat up to Larry’s one Saturday night
Rum in hand there was sure to be a fightby JeremyWilliams 38 lines, 4 comments, on Nov 9 9:17 PM 2007. In true story• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
He sat behind the couch as his parents would fight. He'd close his eyes to cut off the light.by consumedbythenight 9 lines, 4 comments, on Nov 30 6:43 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Drinking beer, smoking cigarettes,
While the television showsby Michael 65 lines, 1 comment, on Mar 29 10:32 AM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I was wrong again...
but I swear... this won't ever happen again...• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Show you what is hidden
The eighth wonder of the worldby Angel Crest 14 lines, 8 comments, on Jan 22 8:00 PM 2007. In Love• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
We had an old 67 Chevy bed,
Full of grub.by VirginiaDarling 30 lines, 6 comments, on Sep 15 9:22 AM 2007. In Humor• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Written upon the door of love,
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by tigress3737 21 lines, 4 comments, on Dec 7 9:21 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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bleh. i got bored. doesn't usually rhym, just somehting kinda... KINDA..... 'different'by Demmy-Defect 34 lines, 4 comments, on Dec 8 8:18 PM 2007. In other• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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the river of blood which i go down, its a solem and lonley place.by xxtwilightxlovexx 5 lines, 1 comment, on Dec 15 9:30 AM 2007. In Pain• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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He loved it when I played the piano.
His "Young Bride" he called me.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
For in the night, the label's peeling
And the Night Hawks see through frozen glass.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
It's about a guy who finds out that his crush has already a boyfriend.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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She stood on the battle field, a blood covered Queen. / The sky all blowing with ash. / The air was thick with death and war, but with her head held high, / She marched on. / The dead all bby SweetLily 17 lines, 5 comments, on Jul 17 7:33 PM 2007. In Dark, Spiritual, Fantasy, Contest, Inspirational, Freewrite, Abstract• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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It’s been 3 ½ years-
Why not a few more?by poetic princess 63 lines, 3 comments, on Apr 27 1:23 AM 2005. In Love• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Long silky hair brushes against her face,
She thinks her life's a disgrace,by Mybeautyisfake 31 lines, 22 comments, on Jan 5 5:55 PM 2006. In Other• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
They burn deep inside me Coiled in my soulby Survivingbychance 19 lines, 3 comments, on Dec 2 8:27 PM 2007. In Angst, Weird, My life, Teen issues• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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She runs out the back door;
Running fast, ignoring the pain in her lungs.by Hells Bells 60 lines, 24 comments, on Nov 18 5:53 PM 2007. In Dark, Angst, Sad, Pain, Lost love, Longing, Depression• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
You are a fabrication of my mind.
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Feeling a little rebellious I searched through the aisle / Looking, eyeing, wanting to find the perfect color / I grabbed the black one, daby walkinthereign 28 lines, 6 comments, on Jun 21 8:20 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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What’s the point of living any longer?
I feel so much painby Euphoric17 65 lines, 6 comments, on Oct 6 9:48 AM 2006. In Sad• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I Wish It Was Over / A poem by Stella Lee / I wish it was over. / The pain I felt was too real. / The feelings are wasted away / In the holby Kikuneechan 45 lines, 5 comments, on Jun 26 8:34 PM 2007. In Angst, Dark, Hope, Fantasy, Life, Love, Other, Pain, Sad, Personal, Thoughts, Weird• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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The path of a musician Is not right for meby Silenced Tears 41 lines, 6 comments, on Dec 11 4:23 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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I was born with a gift. a strong will.by FindinSoundInSilence 119 lines, 2 comments, on Dec 16 3:13 PM 2007. In ocean, drowning, stron, will, motivation, love• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Thank you so very much or the gold. I am honored and thrilled!
Love and hugs
- joanne
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