All I want is for you to give me poetry that will break my heart. My boyfriend cheated on me and that made me cry, so I need poetry to see if I'm not the only one hurt, writing about cheaters, betrayers, abusing, anything you want. Please, I need to know I'm not alone.
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on December 3, 2007
- Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 50, Bronze: 36
- Final notes: I'm glad all of you entered in my contest and if I could, I'd get you all a gold because the poems I read, I love them all, but sadly, I picked 3 and these 3 are the best. Thank you for entering and I'm glad I'm never alone.
Contest Winners
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Trusting you was a stupid mistake
And I've had just about all I can take• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
Lost in this world without you,
At the age of seven, you made me sorry• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
Let me go.Let me die.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
Entries [19]
1 - 19 of 19
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I sit in misery all alone
Tears flowing freely from my eyes• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
by I am Infamy 36 lines, 14 comments, on Oct 23 10:58 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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The door slams
My heart closesby Purplesuze 43 lines, 7 comments, on Nov 14 11:51 AM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
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Are people even capable of feeling pain of losing someone
they don't even know in their lives?• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Golden aura ripped away in divisions
invasions of false colors replacing lightby Cerulean Sunrise 13 lines, 2 comments, on Dec 3 5:30 PM 2007. In Contest• Viewed by judge. -
Arms bound, wasting away in self-destruction;
chained by my self-inflicted misery addiction,• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
You won't look me in the eyes / As I lie here, curled fetus-tight / Your tulle skirt spilling glitter / Like sand on the clutby Isabel Cult 35 lines, 11 comments, on Jul 4 10:06 AM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Comments
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so sorry to read about what your boyfriend has done...
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Even though the poem I submitted was written awhile ago, I found out that my girlfriend was cheating on me just a few days ago. I feel your pain all too well.
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I'm so sorry~ that dirty hound.
I think almost everyone has experienced this kind of pain at least once in their lives~ it's these events that draws out our muses. And I see by the number of entries, you won't have any problem with inspiration here.
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Aww you're certainly not the only one. *hugs* But i will share with you my motto, what keeps me going throughout anything bad that happens to me. I believe that everything in our lives whether it is good or bad and painful it will eventually be beneficial. It is beneficial for our poetry certainly since like Tmk said it draws out our muses.

I entered your contest because just yesterday i wrote a poem perfect for this contest!It's not my personal experience in the poem but it is the pov of a woman who is dealing with cheating and lost love. Hope you like it!
Good luck with the contest!




