Thats me ^^^ 
I was on webcam, and bored, i look evil in that picture, but im not, im lovely really, so yeah, just thought id add a picture!!
!!!UPDATE!!! Do not take any notice of the finalists list, people will be moved in and out of there alot probably, so its not set in stone ok.
Hiii, so, here we go, its a contest yeah?
[[[[Thanks to DepressedAngel for donating 300 points so i could run this, i will pay her back if i ever get enough points!!!]]]]
Couple of things, i dont want any metaphorical stuff, well, nothing too major anyways, read my stuff if you want to get a general idea of what i like. I want to the point, emotion. No faffing around. Rhyme if you like, but dont force it please.
General length 20-30 lines, but slightly longer and slightly shorted are ok. Definitely nothing less than 10 lines or more than 50 lines cheeeeers
Option one is the one i would like most entries for, but it doesnt mean that that is the option that will win, its just what i would like to read.
Options:
1) You are lying in hospital, knowing you only have a few hours to live, write something aimed at the person you will miss the most, telling them you are going to miss them, you love them, you will always be watching over them etc etc etc.
2) Someone you love just died, tell them how much you miss them, brownie points for it being your nan.
3) Tell that special someone how much they mean to you. And how you dont know what you would do without them.
4) Someone has hurt you, alot, tell them either that you arent going to let them win and you are going to fight, or tell them they have got the better of you and you cant take anymore.
5) Your best friend moved away, how much do you miss them? Tell me.
That will do for now, feel free to throw any questions at me
I was on webcam, and bored, i look evil in that picture, but im not, im lovely really, so yeah, just thought id add a picture!!!!!UPDATE!!! Do not take any notice of the finalists list, people will be moved in and out of there alot probably, so its not set in stone ok.
Hiii, so, here we go, its a contest yeah?
[[[[Thanks to DepressedAngel for donating 300 points so i could run this, i will pay her back if i ever get enough points!!!]]]]
Couple of things, i dont want any metaphorical stuff, well, nothing too major anyways, read my stuff if you want to get a general idea of what i like. I want to the point, emotion. No faffing around. Rhyme if you like, but dont force it please.
General length 20-30 lines, but slightly longer and slightly shorted are ok. Definitely nothing less than 10 lines or more than 50 lines cheeeeers
Option one is the one i would like most entries for, but it doesnt mean that that is the option that will win, its just what i would like to read.
Options:
1) You are lying in hospital, knowing you only have a few hours to live, write something aimed at the person you will miss the most, telling them you are going to miss them, you love them, you will always be watching over them etc etc etc.
2) Someone you love just died, tell them how much you miss them, brownie points for it being your nan.
3) Tell that special someone how much they mean to you. And how you dont know what you would do without them.
4) Someone has hurt you, alot, tell them either that you arent going to let them win and you are going to fight, or tell them they have got the better of you and you cant take anymore.
5) Your best friend moved away, how much do you miss them? Tell me.
That will do for now, feel free to throw any questions at me
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on December 28, 2007
- Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 75, Bronze: 50, Honorable mention: 1 people
- Final notes: Hey, sorry this took so long but one of my best mates died on the 18th so as you can imagine i havent been in the right mood to do it. Especially as alot of the poems were about death, but now i have got round to it, just wanted to say all poems were really good. Congrats to those with trophies, and the others in places 5 and 6, i wish i could have given you a trophy too!
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Contest Winners
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Lying in this hosptail bed
All I see is wallsby DepressedAngel 29 lines, 2 comments, on Dec 4 6:44 PM 2007. In Love, for a contest, Goodbyes, My own style
Bronze trophy winner
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Option 5: hopefully an interesting take on the prompt =)• Viewed by judge. [remove]
Silver trophy winner
Honorable mention
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My image of present is pixelized
Smiles are broken; you’re not here by my side...• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Dedicated to my good friend Leia.by mattpak717 32 lines, 2 comments, on Dec 1 6:58 PM 2007. In Sad• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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To know that you deceived me so,
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Thanks to Curtis, for being an exemplary neighbor while Uncle Brendan went on another tirade.by Brendan Newcomb 52 lines, 3 comments, on Feb 18 2:32 AM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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My heart feels like it's lost a friend
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My heart monitor beeps,
Soon it will be nothing but one long note,by Silver Asylum 25 lines, on Dec 18 7:52 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. -
/ / When you came to us twelve years ago / You were a ball of wool / A toddler barely one month old / A breast sucking babe / And always full of play. / You took some time to shed / Some of your naughtiness• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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how many prewrites may one enter?
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Its one entry each im afraid, send me the links to the poems you think you want to enter, i will read through, and comment on the one i like best and you can enter that one, hows that sound??
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that sounds good. I'll probably entery it when i'm at school tomorrow if the contest isn't closed. && do u by chance have myspace? I totally forgot to ask you that.
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Okay well just message me all the links, and i will choose my favourite ok. Yeah i have myspace add meeee.
www.myspace.com/dizzy_sheep
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for the option of someone hurting you and not letting them win how about a disease hurting you and not letting the disease win?
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I opted for option 4 I hope you enjoy my poem
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Thank you for the silver trophie! Means a lot to me that you liked this poem. I am very sorry about your friend... I've lost loved ones too so i know that there are not a lot to be said.I will say only to remember her/him!
PS You don't look evil,you look so unique and pretty in the pic!lol
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