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Emotions.

Make me Laugh, Make me cry. Just make me feel. Period.


I have been having a hard time here lately. There has been alot of B S going on here and I really need a reprive from it all. I just want to feel again. Love HATE anger anything. I will add more prizes and points as time goes on.


Quick rules:

1) NoNe Of ThIs PlEaSe it gives me a headache.
2) Please no really bright backgrounds or hard to read print.
3) have fun.
4) I can't see who you are so please don't get upset if you think that someone recieved the wrong award.

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on December 24, 2007
  • Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 100, Bronze: 50, Honorable mention: 5 people
  • Final notes:
    Thanks to everyone who entered my contest. So it took so long to judge. I thas been a very hard week at work. I hope everyone is okay with the prizes and if I gave someone two prizes then I am sorry I can't see the author names.

Contest Winners

  1. Eighty-Three-And-A-Half
    by Unperson 44 lines, 5 comments, on Sep 16 7:59 AM 2007. In Hope, loss, inspirational, old-age, love
    Gold trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  2. Beneath the Uniform
    Beneath the uniform
    The skin, the bone
    by whitedragon 23 lines, 8 comments, on Aug 21 11:59 AM 2006. In Sad, Personal, Other
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  3. Sacrificed
    Just once I wish you could love me enough
    [pick me]
    by Transcend All 51 lines, 9 comments, on Nov 29 12:24 AM 2007. In An Artist Mind, Personal, Sad, Angst, Thoughts, life, Contest, Abuse, Pain
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  4. The Withered, Old Stick
    In my garden, there was a withered, old stick.
    It was a beautiful flower, before it got sick.
    by Mark Rickerby 21 lines, 11 comments, on Dec 15 5:52 PM 2007
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  5. Useless
    She walks down the hall, A burden to the world,
    by emo-freak 13 lines, 16 comments, on Nov 28 9:01 AM 2007. In Sad, Personal, Death, Pain, Depression, Emo, Thoughts, Society, Dark, Moving
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  6. [ ]
    This is my final copy of about 3 rough drafts.
    by Falling.Again...Xx 71 lines, 9 comments, on Sep 28 9:26 PM 2007. In Abuse, Dark, Life, Pain, Death, Sadness, Anger, Message, Hate, Suicide
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  7. Error: Unable to find finalist item 3431282, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]

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  • Caashe
    December 2, 2007
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    Change the Channel

    Change The Channel
    Hey Hun, I’m home
    Anybody here?
    I’m really sorry but I hit your lawn gnome
    God, I wanted that to be sincere

    Anyway I figure we’ll get carry out
    I’m really tired
    I can’t really shout


    Work.
    I’ll just watch some TV
    I’m sorry if I’m being a jerk
    Ya thirsty?

    Please come down

    I love you

    The news is always the same
    I always thought they should just have a ticker
    Who got shot, stabbed, robbed or went insane
    I mean, come on it’d go a lot quicker.

    Car accident
    I was just there
    Frame bent
    Spinal Tear

    Hun- I need to get you a new car
    This one just like yours didn’t really fare so well
    Maybe a jaguar
    The one like yours is all shot to hell.

    Hey did you pass this accident on your way home
    I wonder if the persons ok
    You were probably concered with the lawn gnome
    You’ll get my humor one day.

    Please come down

    I love you

    It’s a woman
    She’s wearing your shirt
    Her legs are swollen
    She’s more than hurt

    I've seen her face before
    I dont know if I want to watch anymore
    what else is on TV
    theres something next to her knee-


    Earrings on the ground
    I bought you ones just like that for birthday
    You said they looked like I got ‘em from lost and found
    I said id get you pearls someday


    Hun
    Please
    This isn’t fun

    The phone is ringing
    I know who is calling
    It’s beginning
    I’m aching

    Hun
    Please

    This isn’t happening
    Not to me
    We were happy
    Just let me be

    Hun
    Please

    I’ll buy you a new lawn gnome and a jaguar and pearls and well be happy
    And you’ll be here
    And we’ll be together

    And we can be at home
    And laugh and cry
    We’ll never be alone
    I’ll be a good husband I’ll try

    Please come home

    I love you

    Sometimes life is so real
    You just have to change
    The channel



    Corey Alan Ashe